
The Harder You Work, the Stronger You Become.
斗破之努力就变强
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- Ongoing
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- 1.6M Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 8mo ago
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- Qidian
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With the system, you can take advantage of the old plot. No more freshness
From the beginning, it looked okay. I thought there was some new plot. In the end, it was about improving the opportunity to intercept Hu Xiaoyan. There was really nothing to watch from the old plot since entering the academy. Can't we create another novel that takes a detour into the same world and has different experiences? Xiao Yan entered the academy for the skills and strange fire. It's a bit useless to follow the old plot when the protagonist already has a system.
The protagonists in this author's works all have shortcomings
The protagonists written by the author all have this problem. They give away their daughters or dare not provoke the heroine, such as Gu Xun'er, without destroying the emotional line between Xiao Yan and Gu Xun'er, and the Xiao family, which sets the tone. In the future, the protagonist does not dare to provoke Xiao Yan at all, and voluntarily becomes Xiao Yan's dog licker and tool man, because Gu Xun'er was given to Gu Xun'er for being cheap, and she is afraid that Gu Xun'er will kill the protagonist. There is also Licking Yao Lao. In the previous article, the author deified Yao Lao. Po Zong Dan Huang Ji Dan is Yao Lao's unique elixir. It was written with dignity. It can be seen how much the author licked Yao Lao. He just wanted to kneel down and lick the soles of other people's feet. In addition, his IQ is quite low. He is very cowardly in his bones and has an abstract mind. Simple things go in a big circle. The Ye family has cultivated to the seventh level in Dou Qi Continent. Star Dou Sheng turns to spiritual power because he wishes he didn't have the Dou Emperor bloodline. In the end, no matter how strong the protagonist's talent is, it will eventually become a garbage talent. An eight-year-old fighter can be regarded as the talent of an eighteen-year-old fighter. At the same time, the combat power is garbage. In the early stage, you can surpass one level. When it comes to Dou Zong, Dou Zun and Dou Saint, the same level of heaven-level fighting skills cannot kill Dou Zun of the same level. It is very difficult to defeat enemies with one or two stars.
A little scared
Does the author read the comments section? It won't be as downgraded as the previous Doupo, right? Seeing that the protagonist has this tendency at the beginning, the protagonist is written as a waste from the beginning. Will he be forced downgraded later for the sake of the plot? Let me avoid poison first. The book the author wrote about the Ye family was disgusting. It took five years to go from one-star fighter to the peak of the fighting master. The talent of the eight-year-old fighter was written like this by the author, so that the author had the nerve to design him as a Zhongzhou person. The concentration of fighting spirit in Zhongzhou is much higher than that in the northwest. This kind of Zhongzhou genius who took five years to reach the peak of the fighting master is Mulina from Qingshan Town. A genius of a level, that is, a 17 or 18-year-old who breaks through to the level of a Dou Zong. A talent like this is rubbish and it will probably take several years for Dou Zong or Dou Zun to get one star for the plot. In order to keep up with the plot, I have to force the level down. I have already thought of the reasons. The protagonist's talent is rubbish, even if it is not good, it is rubbish. It can be selected as the top of the list of rubbish among fan protagonists.
I took a look at the catalog and found that I would not write about Xiao Yan's chance and beauty without changing the soup but the water.
Shennong is here
A four-piece set of pressure-grading, girl-giving, dog-licking, and mental retardation, each author has a complete set
Starting to suppress the fighting power
What is the significance of the protagonist starting in the Xiao family? Xun'er didn't flirt with her, she didn't take the ancient jade, she just wanted to protect herself, so the Xiao family was still slaughtered just like in the original work. The protagonist has no affection for his family and is more suitable for an orphan start.
Read Chapter 67
I really want to cleanse the ancient Xun'er and cleanse the ancient tribe. After seeing the protagonist's dog-licking attitude, it remains unchanged. Later, I saw that the protagonist was insulted and oppressed by other ancient races, and on the other hand, Xiao Yan was generous in dog-licking. It was very fun, and it was also in line with the protagonist's weak dog-licking nature, and it fits the character.
Copying the original text with various exploits
According to the author's setting, practicing for 24 hours will keep the cultivation speed at 4096 times. Chapter 57 and 10 days are 100 years of normal cultivation. The protagonist will increase the strength of Dou Ling One Star in 100 years. How useless is the protagonist
The anchor is the reincarnation of Poison Douluo and has been poisoned to death. Shen Nong can't stand it anymore. It's disgusting to bring up old things again even though he knows his weakness. It's disgusting.
Ask the author a question
Why don't you like to have female protagonists in the books you write? Whether Dou Po or the Great Master, they have to go around the male and female protagonists and have to help them. Doesn't this have a bit of a licking meaning in it?
This author is really not suitable for writing books. He has written eight books and is still a level 3 author. There are 4 Dou Po books, each with an out-of-circle index of level 1, and all books are level 1.
Many people in the comment area have scolded him, and he didn't even read their opinions. Maybe I just wrote it for fun and didn't care.
I can't stand it anymore until Chapter 8
The biggest effect of the protagonist's golden finger is to exponentially increase the speed of training. As a result, the protagonist, a tough fighter, ran out and wasted his training time. Moreover, there are no details at all. A map of 100 gold coins is too expensive for an orphan. When he goes to Qingshan Town, everyone calls him Young Master. Where does the money come from? Why should he be Young Master?
I read comments earlier that there are only three of them: Little Medical Fairy, Qing Lin, and Zi Yan. I also paid to see it. After all, the little medical fairy is really perfect, with the green scales, Zi Yan is okay, I thought that I finally have someone who is not a stallion, and I will fall in love with women whenever I see them. As a result, I saw another Yunyun come out later. Give up here. After roughly looking at the catalog, it seems that Yun Yun even had a child. Whether it's because the stallion is disgusting or because I personally don't like the character Yun Yun, I've given up on it at this point. I've been looking for a book with a single female protagonist and a little medical fairy, but I haven't been able to find it.
What supports the author to continue writing?
Look at the comments. The author is really perseverant. There is a problem. The protagonist does not need to be in the same family as Xiao Yan. Later, they can get to know each other and become friends. Each has its own opportunity and can then link up.
The protagonist of Fighting the Poyang Emperor met Xiao Yan and it was quite interesting. You know that Xiao Yan is a time traveler, and you find a way or happen to meet each other and say some modern words, and then you naturally get to know each other and become friends. But you don't have to follow Xiao Yan's route. You can have your own route and link up with each other. It's good, but you and the protagonist are from the same family, tell me, what's the point?
Who are the heroines? If you don't reply, just assume there is a trap and moisturize immediately
It's okay, the combat power is only on paper and has not been implemented in practice. Chapter 129: The one-star Douzong's combat power is invincible at the same level, Chapter 143: The eight-star Douzong's combat power can kill Dou Zun
He's an ice type, and he's running into the desert. He's really unstoppable.
Has the author never made any friends or brothers in real life? Are making friends and licking the same thing? ? ?
The AI-polished fighting scenes are too watery 💀
This book is so powerful in combat, it doesn't have the feeling of the Great Master at all. That book was upgraded directly from the panel. I even doubted whether the Great Master was written by you.
The operation of breaking into the little doctor fairy's room at the beginning of the night is really confusing.
Brothers who like Dou Po, do you like martial arts? A new work by a newbie, a martial arts fan, come and review it.
The writing is okay. Why doesn't the author make more updates?
I've read a lot of Dou Po fan fiction, and yours is pretty average.
I don't know why so many people say that there are people who give away girls. I don't think so. Gu Xun'er already liked Xiao Yan during the time when the protagonist came here. There is no need for the protagonist to go to the desert just for Medusa. If this is also called giving away girls, maybe everyone understands it a little differently.