
The Great World: Rise from Liuyu
大千世界:从柳域开始崛起
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.7M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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It's not to my liking. It's quite watery. I can write a few pages about a very small thing. Moreover, the protagonist relies on the system throughout the whole process. Without the system, he is just a noob. The protagonist with poor talent can rely on the system, but the protagonist has no sense of survival in the world of the jungle. At least he should not be so brainless.
Back then, the big motivation for pursuing the Great Master was to see Muchen return home in glory. The Bailing Continent was the most ridiculous territory of the Heavenly Supreme, and it was also the Immortal Grade. According to the previous plot, the strongest Bailing would be given to the Intermediate Supreme.
I hope that the female protagonists will be Luo Li, Jiuyou, Lin Jing, Xiaoxiao, Lingxi, and Wen Qingxuan. The protagonist will take the path of the Sword Immortal, and the Supreme Dharmakaya will be ranked sixth.
Laughing to Death
It's okay, let's see again. I have a question, why do so many novels like to let the protagonist do a lot of things at a low level, euphemistically calling it invincible? There are benefits in the later stage and so on. Isn't it possible to directly upgrade to a level first, and then practice again when the level is high and have a good location?
Is this fanfic? Isn't it just that the protagonist used the system to take away the path taken by the original owner, and then basically wiped out the plot of the original owner?
It's rare to see someone write something so poisonous.
This is too overwhelming. The sixth-grade Supreme went to the Nine Nether Bird Clan and was ridiculed in all kinds of ways. Brother, it feels a little bit better to pretend to be slapped in the face. Your routine has long been outdated. Why do you have to move forward? Otherwise, you just don't like the protagonist. 😅 It's just that you feel disappointed after going there. I think this kind of people don't have the guts to believe whatever others say. It's not that the protagonist has died long ago.
I don't know how they kept reading. I was so disgusted when I read Chapter 6. The protagonist's panel needs to be written two or three times in each chapter, and as many as four or five times. It's so stupid at the beginning. Can I still read it later?
Surgery failed? No news at all.
In the beginning, just increase your cultivation level in front of outsiders. In the Spirit Art Room of Bei Ling Yuan, I directly practiced it on the spot after getting the Senluo Death Seal, and even used it. The key is that there are people watching... It really has the flavor of early online novels. The protagonist and supporting characters each write their own story, and the single-player protagonist does not consider the influence of the protagonist's behavior at all. ,, This book is like this. No wonder so many people say that the author's previous books are extremely poisonous.
I feel that the plot of this book is a little slow. I update two chapters every day and still have some content. One chapter feels really uninteresting. It is not as compact and exciting as the plot of the previous book. I look forward to the climax of the subsequent chapters.
I didn't want to complain at first, but I was really offended. I won't talk about the bland plot. At least the expression is fluent and acceptable. But this panel problem is really unbearable. It is normal for the panel to flow and write panel data, but author, you can't let the panel appear too frequently. In the first ten chapters, panel data appears twice per chapter on average, and chapters are copied four times. There is only one or two paragraphs between the previous panel and the next panel. How can you retain readers with your writing attitude? I am speechless.
It's another poisonous book, I don't dare to be bold in cheating. Since I don't have to worry about the ban, I can record the spirit from a distance. I don't care about this or that. I don't care about the family of gods. What qualifications do I have to be picky? After three consecutive books, I haven't made any progress.
In fact, there is no need to be hostile to Muchen, and there is no need to lick it. Just maintain a controllable state. Once you become hostile, you will have to face a Heavenly Supreme. You have to keep rushing forward. It is not pleasant to have a threat behind you. Unless you find a backer in the mid-term and then show off in the later stage, it will be fine.
Thoughts after reading Chapter 279
What are you doing? Helping Mo Ling for no reason can explain that he wants to train his subordinates. Recruiting beast slaves can explain the plotting of traitors. What is the purpose of destroying all the teams that come here? All the mythical beasts that came here were wiped out. How can you shoulder such a big burden? Are you so hungry that you slaughtered the Seventh and Eighth Grade Supreme Beings? Is this experience point so attractive? Are you starting to do whatever it takes to achieve your goals? Have you really been taken over by the system? Let's talk about the so-called Phoenix Clan's plan to take over. They are bad. This is undisputed. They may confront each other in the future, and the layout of the traitor can barely be explained. But from a logical point of view, they haven't provoked you yet, but you want to devour them, which is too aggressive. As for whether he is qualified or not, I don't know if the author has thought about it, or whether he has directly stated from God's perspective that this matter will definitely succeed, but never thought about whether his strength and power at the time would support his plan. What a sin of arrogance! And what about that Bai Bai? He just had a quarrel with Mo Ling, and yet you destroyed the Phoenix Team and even kept him here. You didn't talk about destroying the team, so you left him to continue to be disgusting? I couldn't understand it, but I was shocked! Maybe I'm a little unhappy about this kind of thing, and I can't express how disgusting I feel! I can only congratulate you for changing the protagonist's mentality from passive counterattack to proactive attack. Although I don't know why the change happened, you are the author and you have the final say! I also wish you the best to finish this book normally, but I won't accompany you on this matter!
This author is extremely poisonous, how did he do it🙂
Suggestion
I've read a few chapters... I'd like to make some suggestions. I hope the author can make a patch to make the book smoother (*/∇\*) ① The protagonist was too hasty when he killed the spirit beasts to gain experience points at the beginning. He should have included a line about adapting to killing in advance and explain it a little. Otherwise, he asked his father for the spirit beast, killed it as soon as he brought it in, and then had the body disposed of, which was a bit stiff. ② Is the protagonist's source of experience points only from killing spiritual beasts, or from fighting with people beforehand? This acquisition method is not well explained. ③ The protagonist's cultivation level has improved... I feel like there is still a time buffer as an excuse. When I was repairing on the way back from killing the spirit beast, I went directly from the middle spiritual stage to the peak level... It was also said earlier that Liu Jingshan (the protagonist's grandfather) could see the protagonist's cultivation level. Is your sudden improvement a little unreasonable? ? It will be much smoother if I add an excuse to retreat for inspiration when I return to the city. I'm not nitpicking. It's easy to change the book at the beginning during the new book period. I just hope that the author can sort out some details to make the book better. Oh, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
Now his level is so much higher than Muchen's, why did you call him here to make soy sauce? He's not going to start giving away opportunities, right? The battle master's inheritance will definitely give it away. This is for the purpose of integrating his combat power and spiritual power.
This is the best novel written by a fan of Big Lord. It is not black, not licking, and not ink-stained. Not hydrological. Unlike other Big Lord fan fiction, the protagonist directly pursues women to develop emotional stories. Isn't it just licking?
Author, did you make some mistakes in settings?
One Qi transforms into three pure beings is one of the 36 peerless magical powers. They are all unique. If the protagonist already has one, how can Muchen still have it? If anyone could use it, how about giving Xiao Yan and Lin Dong six and a half-steps of Domination Realm to defeat the Evil God? Is there a role for the protagonist to show off?
The protagonist single-handedly kills the Black Corpse Heavenly Demon Emperor in the late stage of the Saint Stage. Everyone thinks that the protagonist is only slightly stronger than the early stage Saint Stage. Anyone in the early stage of the Saint Stage can stop the protagonist😅
In this article, the Western Heaven War Emperor was hunted down by Lin Dong for one month, and in the extra story, the War Emperor was suppressed for three years. This book was changed to hunt for one month and suppress for three years. In this article, Lin Dong singled out the Ice Spirit Clan without going into detail. In the extra chapter, Lin Dong first picked the Spirit-level Ice Spirit Ancestor + the Zhen Clan Formation, and then picked up the three Spirit-level Spirits: Dragon Venerable, Snow Demon Old Man, and War Emperor. This book strengthens the Ice Spirit Patriarch to the late stage of Immortal Grade, strengthens the War Emperor to the early stage of Immortal Grade with combat power comparable to the former, plus an unknown level of Heavenly Supreme vs. Immortal Grade Lin Dong. Lin Dong went from being invincible at the same level and suppressing the War Emperor with one hand, to becoming an average genius who chased the War Emperor for a month. How much does the author hate Lin Dong?
I want to ask if this book has a single heroine or multiple heroines?
Also, the comment section seems to be about nannies?
Data that goes against the sky
The author's incredible design
The logic doesn't make sense… the expression of the work is poor
The system does not include other spiritual techniques that cannot be practiced... Then keep them for now. If you need to use them in an emergency, you can directly add points to create an information gap, and it can also be used as a trump card. If you can't practice it, it's because others haven't failed. Why are you pretending to have failed? Moreover, after you learn enough, your understanding of the spiritual arts will improve, which will definitely be a positive help in the future, and you can even develop the spiritual arts. If you have learned so much and still can't master it, then it can only be said that the protagonist is really rubbish. As for the word count of water or not, you can use the added points: bala bala; the unadded points (hidden) or even the fusion of spiritual techniques and so on. I shouldn't need to teach you this part... This is the expression of the work.
This book seems to be almost finished, when will the next one be released?
It's all over, the Five Elements Continent has not been taken back yet