Investiture of the Gods: The Rise of the Dragon Lord of the East Sea

The portrayal of the characters is a bit weak , and there is also the protagonist. At present, the protagonist will only interact with his elders when he has needs. The communication between Ao Guang and Ao Bing is really like dealing with elders they don't know. You can't just write what you need, so add some surprises and twists. Sometimes it is more suitable for novice writers. Anyway, come on

It gradually turned into a gangster cultivating immortality. It's a pity that a good idea was lost.

How about the author writes about the flow of the heavens, the multi-dimensional detachment of Zhengda Luo from the dragon king, and leads the dragon clan to rise once in each classic world? Or even go against the long river of time to compete with the ancestral dragon for status, win the Dragon Han catastrophe, and truly transcend, this novel is finished.

Insert part of Nezha's movie into Fengshen

Alas, the idea is good, but there are too many typos, I shouldn't have said it, and it's hard to read.

In Chapter 6, the main character's name is wrong twice. Change it and check it out.

I feel like my ink is stained. After reading about ten chapters, I still keep talking about how to practice cultivation.

The protagonist incarnates as Dongjun, so the King of Chu is a dragon species, a human dragon.

I'm not sure why Maimaru assumes that the Innate Dragon Clan is a demon clan and is under the demon clan Emperor Shun Taichi? Wouldn't that just become cannon fodder for the fight against the Wu clan and be destroyed? Moreover, the demon clan has to join, otherwise they are all one of the thousands of human races in the ancient world, and it is impossible to follow the principle of non-human beings or demons. Otherwise, the Wu clan, Sanqing, Hongjun, Luohu, raised eyebrows, Nuwa town Yuanzi, etc. Are all non-human demon clans? Normally, the ancestral dragons among the three innate clans competing for hegemony are all Hongjun, Luohu, raised eyebrows, Yin-Yang, Five Elements, Qiankun, etc. The Hunyuan Golden Immortal is one step away from reaching the peak of enlightenment and becoming the human supreme being of all races in the prehistoric world; as for the dragon clan becoming a demon clan, it cannot really be based on the principle of either human or demon, right?

There has been no update for 6 days. It seems that this book has also been bought (the other book is bought by Li Jing, the King of Towers).