Fighting: Xiao Yan Breaks Off the Engagement at the Beginning

I have been seeing it on the shelves. I wonder if the author has improved the rhythm in the future. Please comment The author obviously failed to grasp the style and rhythm after chapter 20. The self-explanation of good and evil in the middle, which is obviously a hit-or-miss, is too biased. Everyone wants to watch the story just for fun. This is mainly reflected in the contrast between the protagonist's straightforward character of modern people who dare to love and hate and the indigenous values. They don't really want to see the self-analysis of a mentally ill patient, and they are not interested in the so-called psychological depression or accumulation of murderous intent. Not to mention any "grand" literary youth content that I have seen about the dangers of human nature. In addition, the combat power expands a bit quickly. It's only chapter 50, and Xiao Yangang is a fighting master. He has the strength of a fighting king, a seventh-grade elixir, and even a quasi-celestial level technique. The system's mission has also been completely downplayed and turned into a material dispenser. As well as the content related to flesh and blood and nerves that the author has compiled, it can be seen that it is the author's characteristic setting, but personally, it is completely inconsistent with the negative points. Since everyone comes to read fan fiction, it is mainly because of the original work. What they want to read is based on the original work, the protagonist uses plug-ins, information gaps, and personality to affect the plot and characters of the original work. Too many settings that deviate from the original work are boring. After all, no matter how you write your own things, they can't compare to Tudou's own, right? As far as this book is concerned, I think the protagonist's early plug-in is to use Thor's Hammer, a weapon that can be used at the Fighting Saint level, and combined with some powerful martial arts and fighting skills is the limit. At most, low-level strange fires and "different thunders" of the same level can be added. The growth of combat power is almost half a stage faster than the growth rate of Xiao Yan in the original work. Then it is a more ideal rhythm to always be able to show off but not crush the game. It's a pity that the content in Wutan City at the beginning is the best, especially the protagonist using his unique personality charm to influence Xiao Yan and Xun'er, just like an eldest sister educating a child. She is clearly a "love rival" in Xun'er's eyes, but she has to be taught by the other party. The highlight is the design. But one year after the Yunlan Sect, the protagonist's physical strength exploded and began to break down. When he entered the Warcraft Mountains, the protagonist really became mentally ill and it was completely useless.

The story concept is very interesting. Although it started with the current relatively clichéd system at the beginning, it can be seen that the author did not want to be limited to a simple system-based novel. Later, he introduced a new parallel reincarnation setting, expanded the world view, and generally wrote more rigorously, adding some modern humorous elements. A small part of the understanding of human nature has been incorporated into the creation of the protagonist. He is one of the more fleshed-out protagonists I have ever seen in online novels. His crazy behavior is very much like that of a knight-errant. When I read it, I felt a kind of "sassy" rather than the clichéd and boring "cool". But the disadvantage is that the supporting characters are relatively stereotyped, including the creation of another evil protagonist in the parallel world, which is also somewhat unsatisfactory. The description of the character's behavior and motivation is still relatively weak. The advantage of writing this way is that it is easy to understand the story logic, but the disadvantage is that the story logic is a bit simple. Of course, as a fanfic, it is still a very interesting book. It seems that the heroine is crazy, but in fact it is a manifestation of gratification and desire. I personally feel very relaxed when reading this story, and I will smile knowingly many times. Although it is not a high praise, it is also worth reading as an interesting and strange novel to relax in your spare time.

At first, the ordinary transsexual heroine Xiao Diai was interesting, but then she collapsed into a lunatic. She started talking about the reasons and sensitive topics, and there was no problem in chatting. Suddenly, she started to mechanically ascend to me. The author wondered how the mechanical empire could lack parasites. The cerebellum was so fast that he wrote it. Someone wants to ask where do these things come from? Of course it's our slutty heroine, huh? I was convinced, and then the author wanted to write a plot about Xiao Yan who is dressed as a woman and whose soul is a super fusion of a male body and a female dressed as a male. I was very happy. Is this Nantong or Lily? I can't think of it? ? ? In short, I am complaining so much just to tell those who like me are attracted by the reviews of that thing called Dianniu Niu. If you don't like the content, there is no need to waste time. If you like it, just keep reading.

It is recommended not to bring it in too independently, as it may cause psychological problems. After all, good books always empathize with others. I believe you can also feel that there may be something wrong with you mentally. Think rationally and be careful. When you feel a problem, it is recommended to read the normal level first or put down your phone and look at the sky for a while! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It feels like driving high and going low. The previous setting is quite good. I thought it was the path of a big heroine. You can't escape the logic of female characters in the later stage. When you fall in love, you can directly do it according to the year. Then there is a question: are the tentacles on the heroine's body grown inside the body or attached to the armor.

If you ask Xiao Yan directly how he can travel through time and become a man, Xiao Yan himself wants to break off the engagement with you.

Why do you feel like the comment section is full of people criticizing people for changing marriages? It's not that you shouldn't read it if you can't get it. Why do you like to come to the comment area so much and make everyone who sees it feel uncomfortable? Those who like changing marriages will be angry when they see it, and other people passing by will not be happy when they see the smoky comment area.

It feels like a change of marriage. Emperor Yan still eats very well during this period.

Xiao Yan has had 3,000 beauties in his harem in the past six months~Who is missing the Heavenly Demon Phoenix and the Taixu Ancient Dragon?

I don't really understand the subject of gender reassignment. Well, why does a man have to become a woman and then be single or married or something? Could it be that Qidian male videos cannot tolerate girls as first-person protagonists?

The writing is good, and the protagonist is quite subversive, but the women's clothing is anti-inflammatory and evil.

I can't stand men, even men whose psychology is that of a man but whose body is that of a woman.

The author's creation of characters is quite likable, and he did not modify the original characters, but now I can't understand what he is writing. Especially when it comes to women's outerwear and systems, it's no longer an issue, it's too heavy-handed. Xiao Yan's character is very lovable. Even if you write about a change of marriage, people will still read it. However, since the little doctor fairy appeared again, I was confused by the plot. Do you have an outline, or what kind of story do you want to write in the end?

No matter how you change your marriage, you will still be called a male channel. Don't be angry. Nowadays, when you encounter a subject you don't like on the Internet, you have to come in and curse a few words. That's why the homogeneity is so serious. Is it difficult to seek common ground while reserving differences? Female channels invading male channels should indeed be scolded, but changing marriage is just a matter of male channels. This category has existed since then.

Anyone who talks about getting married has definitely not read the book. The main character is a spiritual man but a woman. He likes to dress up as a woman, Xiao Huohuo. It's so awesome that he can bring the male and female protagonists of the original work into the harem together.

There are so many ways to change your marriage, there are nine or ten books, right? Why don't you write a change order 🙂

Why are you writing female videos and going to female videos and running here?

The author is a god, and I am a god as well. Summary: There are no more humans.

It's interesting to see the promotion.

Thinking about the broken and helpless feeling of doubting life if Jing'er's three-year contract was defeated by Huo Huo, she dropped the little pearl and leaned her body against Huo Huo. I would be like a maggot in the bed slowly squirming. Even if I skip a few meals, I still have to support the author. The author doesn't want eunuchs anymore.

Coming from Station B, at first I felt disgusted by the system, but when I saw the heroine Lang Shuang's bold and independent character, I couldn't stop. Perhaps you are seeing your own reflection of your ideal? After the three-year appointment, the style and direction of the article are quite different from the first chapter, which is a bit hard to read. I feel like I have lost the vigor and vitality of the writing style at the beginning.

Is this the book that Nalan Yanran taught Xiao Yan to call mom?

The descriptions in some chapters are so real that the protagonist's disapproval of his daughter's identity has turned into violent pressure.

Why hasn't it been updated for so long?

Is the author still alive? Can this book ever be completed?

Who knows, after almost a year, I opened the starting point again, and the author committed a fraud.

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