Dragon Ball: from Erasure

What's the point of putting a few small poisons in there? In reality, if you want to perform an inexplicable ritual and throw the dragon ball on your hand to hit Kame Sennin, why not make a wish first and then hit it? There is another cool thing about using an electric drill to drill out holes for dragon balls and thread them through ropes. I can only say 666. The original is still a sucker anyway.

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No, is the author serious? Five-year-old Vegeta's combat power of 15,000?

The protagonist is not Chinese. Since he does not want to save his own nation, this kind of thinking can only be thought by people from other countries. It is impossible for a Chinese to have this kind of thinking!

Bardos

There are many problems. To put it simply, the protagonist intends to exchange Coke for advanced space materials. I don't even know what the author thinks? Although the food in the universe in Dragon Ball is weird, it doesn't mean that there are no ordinary drinks, especially ordinary things like Coke, which is carbonated with sweetened water and coloring. As a result, the protagonist sells this thing everywhere like a treasure. The most stupid thing is to eat bread. The protagonist returned to Earth and bought a bread machine to make it in person. I don't know what the meaning of all this is? There's an information gap, right? Forget about practicing, can you stop using such stupid routines in daily life? Forget it if you say that the protagonist has very good cooking skills and relies on a bread machine to show off. When I watched it, my toes were about to pop out of the three rooms and one living room.

Vegeta's father will not allow anyone to be more talented than Vegeta. Anyone more talented than Vegeta will have accidents.

The Great Priest and Quan Wang are not on the same level at all. Quan Wang is an eraser, and Uncle Psy is an eraser.

The latest chapter is poisonous again. Dragon Ball is well written. What about Pirates?

Can you please stop smiling bitterly? And a bitter smile

Dragon Ball Bulma follows Vegeta, and the heroine follows the male counterpart. It has always been an uneasy feeling in my mind. When I first read the manga and saw Future Boy, I felt sick as if I was being fed shit. I didn't continue to follow it for a long time. If it weren't for the fact that the plot was really exciting later, this is not a manga that focuses on emotions, so I abandoned it at that time. This fanfic thinks it can make up for these regrets. As a result, the plot has now been completely changed. Maybe I feel that there are too many changes in the fanfic and no one reads it, but you have no new ideas. I really don't read it now. I only look at the titles of your chapters occasionally.

The Great Shrine is completely a porcelain king.

There are too many descriptions of women. Gods don't need to reproduce or have desires. It feels very inconsistent.

Don't make such mistakes. For example, the characters in the original work are a bit broken. For example, Vegeta's father's combat power and improvement are also written incorrectly. For example, I think Vegeta was born between 1200 and 3000, right? The Saiyans at that time were all barbarians who were very slow to increase their combat power and did not know how to practice. The upper limit of adult combat power of a Saiyan can be determined by the level of Saiyans born. There are very few Saiyans who can increase their combat power by 10,000 or more. Except for the lower-level Saiyan Bardock, the others who can exceed 10,000 and above are all high-level elite Saiyans. Vegeta is five years old and fights 15,000. The increase in strength is too fast. The original Vegeta only had 18,000 when he was about 25 years old. Looking at this, you will know that the savage Saiyans only rely on blood level talents and combat killings to increase their strength. They do not know the method of cultivation at all and cannot improve their combat strength quickly. Most adult Saiyans have a combat strength of 1,000 to 4,000 to 4,000 to 5,000. A small number can reach 5,000 to 9,000, and very few can exceed 10,000!

Talking only about quality without talking about quantity, isn't this just being a hooligan? Not to mention that it is becoming more and more difficult to purify it. The original combat power may only be around 100,000. How can it be mentioned like this? And it doesn't increase the basic value. Candidates for the God of Destruction must reach a certain level of combat power. How can you extract 100 pounds of gold from ten pounds of water?

I'll just update one chapter after it's on the shelves. Just order it and keep writing like this. I'll write another 200,000 words at most.

The King of Quan's setting is the eraser. That is, Akira Toriyama's eraser. The God of Creation in Dragon Ball Daimon is not as strong as you think. The setting of the Grand Priest is the best in the universe, and Kaiohshin says that the God of Creation is the strongest in the universe. The God of Creation didn't even understand how to play with the angels, let alone touch King Quan. You must know that King Quan is Uncle Psy's eraser, and King Quan's bodyguard is like a ✏️pencil.

Why are there Saint Seiyas? In comics, Saint Seiyas are very naughty. In comics, it is trivial for special warriors to destroy the universe.

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I've read a similar book, it seems like it was about destruction.

Does the heroine have a number 18? There is also author Bados as the heroine. I don't think it's a little bit blue-skinned.

Have you been slacking off recently? Just one chapter

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

Is the following plot funny to cats? Just lie to Beerus

The beginning of this novel is very similar to "Dragon Ball: Saiyan Angel", I don't know what will happen next!

The more I write, the more I get depressed. Was it written by one person? Jumping from Dragon Ball to One Piece Dragon Ball is not finished yet. Goodbye, abandon the book.

There is also an angel. Saiyans practice the ability of angels.

After purifying it 30 times, it feels so weird. It feels like there is a 10-fold difference every time it is purified. It feels a bit like the angel Luo Tian. In the end, the protagonist of this book will not become an angel, and the plot is a bit like