Senju Tobirama Is Also Changing the Ninja World Today

Although the writing has a clear flavor of Deepseek, I have wanted to read the idea of ​​wearing the second generation to revolutionize the ninja world for a long time, so I am still very happy to see such an article. Generally speaking, the plot arrangement and character control are reasonable. The word count and details can be filled in by AI. The plot development and character action logic still depend on the author. I hope the author can train Deepseek better and create a personalized writing style.

After reading a few VIP chapters, I would like to say a few words. The author focuses on the poor civilian class in these pictures. This is fine in itself, but it is particularly funny when combined with Naruto. It is really nonsense. Daimyo and nobles are superior, ninjas fight life and death, and the master of power In a world where individuals are not supremely powerful, the so-called rule-oriented nobles and daimyo are just two types of dogs. Not to mention the great ninja clan like Uchiha, as long as the daimyo is not a dog for the great ninja clan, any small ninja group can call the daimyo and kneel and lick shit.

It's useless. Unless you can get a Explosion Star for you in the later stage, Toneri raises the top line and uses a Kinrin Reincarnation Explosion to split the moon. This is the surface level. Boruto still fights Ōtsutsuki, but Naruto and Sasuke can't beat him. There is also Ōtsutsuki. God of Wood, this road of ninja is blocked, you can only take other paths, or you are so powerful that you are stronger than Otsutsuki, just open the big attack, you can almost explode the earth as big as the sun, you can get through by beating Otsutsuki, the God of Otsutsuki doesn't know yet

How can you fight with a big wooden barrel if you don't have the determination to break the boat? If you don't give up your chakra, you can fight with wool.

A lot of people are complaining. Why didn't Hashirama and Madara ever think about unifying the ninja world? Of course, this is precisely because the author is Japanese. So this is very taboo. At least it was taboo back then. Because during World War II, Japan not only had ideas but also took actions. Now Japan's right wing is rising. The resurgence of imperialism. I thought of a word that would make it go crazy before it can be destroyed. Formerly pro-China. When we have the upper hand, it's hard for us to take action. But now he is jumping more and more. Instead, I don't have so many worries anymore.

Doesn't anyone think the author's writing style is weird? It's not that it's bad, but it gives me a strange feeling of being a literary youth. It's so awkward to read, and after reading several chapters, it doesn't even explain whether the protagonist is a native or a time traveler. Although it is vaguely seen from the several incidents in the plot where Banma is rescued that the protagonist may be a time traveler, the protagonist's previous life is not mentioned. The background is so blurry that it makes you confused.

When... It becomes... Typical teacher D's words, don't underestimate my intelligence network

I have read many Naruto fanfics, but this one is the most satisfying so far. It has a multi-faceted visual development and everyone is their own protagonist. I don't have that old habit of picking up girls from everywhere or bragging about them.

To defeat Otsutsuki, you need to use senjutsu or taijutsu. If it doesn't work, just replenish your bloodline. You can't beat them with simple CKL.

Don't have CP Infrastructure writing must have no CP

This is like cultivating immortals. A powerful person can destroy heaven and earth with one glance. It's useless to have more people. The order of magnitude difference is too big.

You are a naturally evil Thousand-Armed Old Ghost.

Earth technology is useless in the Hokage. Otsutsuki's chakra civilization is very high, with high chakra upper limit and low chakra threshold Chakra civilization that can be achieved by earth technology is also possible, and it is simpler and more durable and does not require a bunch of circuit boards. Chakra civilization that earth technology cannot do Chakra can do the same, Chakra is a universal variable, the ninja world uses the wrong method, and the old man of six paths won't let it go. If the thinking of the ninja world breaks out, develop various uses of chakra, and what's wrong with the old man of six paths The assembly line method and the thinking of raising cattle and horses are somewhat useful...

Looking at it now, it is actually a good Naruto story. Although there are some inevitable mistakes in the process, it is generally in line with my heart. The third generation of Hokage is actually very controversial. Inaction is the biggest shortcoming. He knew that it was wrong but did not change. He allowed Danzo to do whatever he wanted. The Uchiha clan was exterminated, the Sannin ran away, and Hatake Sumo died. It was all the fault of the Third Generation.

The writing is very good and the main character is down to earth. Consider the factors of the times, economic and political factors and other factors.

It's a bit silly, you don't use chakra, start the industrial revolution from scratch. The logic is illogical and full of loopholes, forcing sensationalism.

Although there are a lot of good reviews in the comment section, 66 comments for more than 500 chapters? It makes people afraid to look at it

The most powerful people in the story of Naruto are actually the daimyo. Obviously they were just a few ordinary people, but they forced countless ninjas with extraordinary powers to hold down their weapons.

It always feels like AI creation🤤

Dragon Vein Travels Through Parallel Worlds doesn't look good, and it's poorly written. How many chapters do you want to write? Be prepared to skip ahead.

You can still be in the front row after more than a day to catch up on updates. Author, you have to reflect on yourself.

Since the plug-in that Senju Hashirama was born with is called the Sage Body, I would like to call the plug-in of Senju Tobirama the Sage Brain (Special Attack for Ninjutsu Development).

How should I put it? The more I listen to it, the more awkward it becomes.