Small-Town Immortal Cultivator

It's a readable novel, but the author's article on cultivating immortality is too petty, and the pretentiousness and slap in the face are too blunt. This ranking is a bit unworthy of the name.

When you update the first update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the writing style will be criticized When you update the second update, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is more valued When you update the third update, subtle praises begin to sound, and the number of dead ends begins to decrease When you update the fifth update, readers' defense spontaneously forms, and the voice of praise becomes more and more intense Loud When you are ten o'clock, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented inside and outside When you are twenty o'clock, the bookworm's memories have a place for you, and even your name will leave a dazzling trace in a long life Updating may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updating.

1. The older the bookworm is, the more I like it 2. I originally wanted to write it after reading the first chapter, but I endured it till the seventh chapter. The article is really beautiful! 3. Reading between the lines makes people want to read more, and the word processing makes people read heartily. 4. The author's introduction cannot describe your talent. I hope the writing style will maintain its original intention!

Speed ​​up the progress a little, use less slap-in-the-face plots, and show more of the protagonist's abilities, otherwise it will be too cliche and watery.

I think the previous writing was okay, but when it comes to plotting against the immortals, I feel like it's so weird. You can just put on a vest and say you're from another continent? There is no sealing technique in other continents. Are all the immortals fools? After all, there is no real-time information about the Millennium Immortal Clan's foreign continent, but there is no investigation channel at all?

It's eloquently told and has enough information to be worth looking forward to.

Why hasn't it been put on the shelves yet? It's so uncomfortable to read one chapter in two days. It's a rare book that I can read.

With this little update, it's hard for me to vote monthly again.

I have many years of experience in reading. If you stick to it, you will have no problem making ends meet. If you have a good idea, you will definitely make money.

If this continues, it will be even harder to get results. Does the author have another book?