Matriarchy: My Fortunes Refresh Every Week

All I can say is that except for the articles about women on the moderator, the articles on women on other platforms are all 💩. The male protagonists all have a woman's heart and are all eunuch types...

It's definitely not Zui Haoyue. This book is too plain. If he had written it, he would have licked every one of the 20 pictures, even with a collar on. This book is too plain, so it's definitely not her.

The abortion was dragged on for too long, which affected the perception of the novel.

This book feels a bit like a short drama on a female channel. They are all mute and don't say anything. It takes a long time to unravel it.

At first I thought it was a real man in the feminist world like Tudou. After two days of chasing it, I felt it seemed more like the green tea style of Yueyue's heroine. Now that it's available for first order, I've probably confirmed that it's a sadist style like Drifting Garbage. The various choices made by the protagonist make people anxious. He always bears the consequences of his mistakes for others. It's not that regretting his wife's love is not good-looking, but what I want to see is regret! It's the heroines who are bleeding like rivers! Having the protagonist makes me laugh for a while, Losing the protagonist makes me cry Finally the misunderstanding is solved and I can't wait to die for the protagonist!

It's interesting. The protagonist should change his mind. Although the blame is a bit unfair, the child is really innocent If you really see that child, if the protagonist still doesn't show any expression to his cheap sister, it will feel very aggrieved

Having an abortion while pregnant is the biggest failure, it's so disgusting

Previously, I was having fun watching abstract actions with different worldviews. After it was released, the author got into it and kept emphasizing the importance of purity. As a result, he was forced to push it by an emotionless female partner. The abstract fun suddenly turned into a drama.

My suggestion is to rewrite the part about the girl fucking, and then make the character of the queen either change her original image, or destroy her. The part where the girl fucks to death is too violent. Currently, everyone's favorite couple is Sister Lulu. The character of the queen first makes a video and then rapes the girl. I can understand that you chase your husband at the crematorium, but there is a problem with her character. Your book is different from Yueyue's. Yueyue's first time is gone, but everyone doesn't care about you. This is a sign. You also emphasized the importance of chastity before. You should deal with the first failure instead of giving it away directly. Then there is the problem of children. Either you rewrite it and there will be no children, or there is no part of the rape to death. Just like the previous book friend said, the first kiss ends here. And the diva you described, she didn't realize her mistake at all. She just felt that the protagonist was neglected, and then transferred 50% of the shares. This place is still taking advantage of the protagonist. Moreover, she was born with one more child than others, and the bond with the protagonist is basically broken. How does this allow other female characters to continue to develop? In fact, she currently has problems with her three views and character. My suggestion is to start over. Anyway, your book has already been written to this extent. There is no worse ending than this. You said that you use it to practice writing, but you should also listen to everyone's opinions appropriately. Since you wrote green tea, you should focus on tea and not chase your husband. The crematorium. Everyone said in the comment area that it is to keep your book alive, not to scold you. This will only make fewer and fewer people read it.

There are too many poisonous points, and the heroine's novel is just to see how the male protagonist who is not from another world can turn over. As a result, I can enjoy the heroine's world with peace of mind. I must fight, female author.