The Master of Prophecy at Hogwarts

Unified reply, the current outline does not include arrangements for a female protagonist, because I really can't figure out how to let a person with a mental age of 80+ fall in love 😂

It seems like Polyjuice Potion can no longer be used after someone dies.

The introduction looks very divisive. On one side is a prophet with a high level of competence, and on the other side is a brat who plays pranks on his classmates. It's hard to trust. Is there a divine farmer?

You can't coddle Hagrid, just kill all the eight-eyed spiders. Hagrid's world view is completely different from that of the little wizard.

I don't like the deserted environment. Let's build a warm place for guests to come in and play.

The writing is quite good. I have been reading Hogwarts fan fiction recently. Most novels of the same type are written like those produced by an assembly line. They just changed the mold. This story is very well written. Come on.

When I read Harry fanfics, I like the author to make some logical expansions. This author is very interesting, his writing style is decent, his logic is reasonable, and his methods are appropriate when expanding on magic. A pretty good fanfic.

It's very good to watch. I become a student first and then a professor. The plot is detailed and has some explosive points. The main character has his own thoughts without a virgin. It's not bad without a female protagonist. Many HP fans become bad if they add a female protagonist. Hope it doesn't end badly

The comments are quite polarized. Is there a Shen Nong?

Seeing that the protagonist is about to enter school, what is known so far is that the protagonist has another Muggle life memory of more than 80 years stuffed in his mind, and this Muggle is from China, most likely born in the 90s. I don't know if he has read the original Harry Potter novel, but he must have watched the movie, played Hogwarts Legacy, and watched the three movies starring Freckles. According to the setting, the protagonist's family is of prophetic descent. Both Trelawney and Grindelwald have the ability to predict because they are related to this family. The protagonist's father also accurately predicted the scene of his death. But at present, it seems that the protagonist's situation is more like a confusion of self-identity after time travel, or that someone in the family's predecessors traveled through time but went crazy and died, and this memory was inherited by the protagonist (similar to the awakened ancestral memory in Dune). So here comes the question. It stands to reason that the protagonist's family's precognitive ability is stronger than Trelawney and Grindelwald. Especially Grindelwald, his ability is much more stable than Trelawney's. Of course, the latter's occasional outburst should not be underestimated, but the protagonist has only looked at memories so far. So Harry Potter In the ten years before admission and the time after Voldemort's death, there should be basically no information available in this memory. Even starting from the original work, these memories are only a general direction of the plot and cannot be very detailed. At least they are completely irrelevant to the protagonist himself. After all, there is no such person as you in the original work. So does the protagonist have real precognitive abilities? Can he predict his future like his father?

Instead of asking God for divination, it is better to make the decision yourself

In fact, don't be in a trance too much, and don't keep those memories coming out. It feels disgusting. A child who already has mature rationality and sufficient resources and confidence is already beyond the standard. I prefer him to have a different life instead of talking about memories of past lives.

The writing is actually very good, but the rhythm is awkward. After all, many people are addicted to technology and hard work, and they are not motivated enough if they add less 🙂

Personally, I really like prophet-like protagonists. In fact, the writing is not bad. The plot is a bit bland, but the writing style and logic are not bad. I am quietly raising my book. I will book it all when it is almost finished. I will take the monthly pass.

I remember normal spells didn't work on Peeves

It's a pretty good book, but I don't know why it didn't get any results. Maybe it's because of the original plot?

This book is really good, why isn't it popular? .

Yes, it would be quite interesting to write more. I am very curious about what the protagonist will be like at Hogwarts after going to school, and how he will get along with his teachers and classmates.

It's not that it's not well written It just feels very simple Especially the sometimes huge natural paragraphs

It felt like it ended in a hurry I subscribed all the way to 500 chapters. I saw that the latest chapter was the Triwizard Hegemony, so I planned to save up. But a week later, I finished the extra chapter directly Overall, it is quite good. I want magic and magic, and daily life It can be finished in the end (especially if it is tepid and still willing to finish it) Finished with flowers 🙂

The overall outline is very good. From students to professors, it includes both the daily flow of students and the content of teaching articles. It is arranged in detail, but it is not written down as a running account. Especially Selwin Blood Night is very similar to the one-on-one challenge of Professor Magic Text. Magic Text mentions it in one stroke, but here is a detailed description, and it is a dream come true. Generally speaking, it is considered a high-quality fanfic, which can be compared with the high-quality ones such as Magic Literature, Academic Master, Gray Wizard, and Model Wizard. The author's original work on the prophet is also very brilliant, and it is a pioneering genre. I won't talk about the advantages or spoilers, but let's talk about the disadvantages in detail. First, the pace in the later stages is too fast. The ending suddenly comes when the reading progress is 99%, which makes the book feel too rushed. Second, the characters were successfully created in the early stages, such as Bill and Durut, but they appeared too few in the professor era. I feel that they were created through hard work in the early stage and the role was not played, so they were not used. This is really true. . . There are also the two supporting characters of Hermione and Ron in the later period. In addition to promoting the plot, their images are not written. It feels like the author has acquiesced in the images in the original work. Although it is okay, I think it would be better to have his own second creation. Thirdly, it is a pity that the dream was not fully realized. Snape's life contained contradictions. In the full text, Sirius, Lupin, Dumbledore and others all realized their dreams. Snape and Lily were constantly edited. It is still confusing, and is rarely mentioned in the whole text. Only Prince mentioned it. After all, this is where Snape's bad guys and good guys intersect. If it can be described in detail, Snape's character can be objectively evaluated. (It doesn't have to be clean, after all, he is a Death Eater, but it doesn't necessarily mean that he is completely bad. He was bullied and took care of his love rival's son. The beholder has different opinions and the wise have wisdom. I can only say that one's deeds do not reflect one's heart.) Finally, the conscience evaluation, the writing is good and commendable, but why is the score so bad?

The first one is about the polyjuice potion. In the original book, Hermione was caught on her clothes when fighting with Millicent, and the second idiot was cut off the head when Harrow stunned him with a cake (I was also fooled by AI). But in the end, there is still no material that clearly states that the person must be alive. After all, it is just a change of appearance rather than a change of soul and personality.

It's good to read, and there's nothing surprising about it. However, there is no magic in the author's big books. It feels like modern technology has been transplanted into the magical world. They are too "scientific" and lack the imagination and fantasy of magic (I skipped reading many of them, mainly about magic creation and alchemy) and are a bit too bland.

Is there a Shennong here?😃

It's a good novel, and there's nothing particularly poisonous about it. Why doesn't anyone read it?🤔

Brother, are you coming back? Want to read new books😆

If you, the author, have poor writing skills, why not just write light novels? The long and difficult sentences throughout the article are mixed with a lot of erroneous sentences, which is tiring to read... A sentence either has no subject or only two attributives, and there are many without attributives 😥. A bunch of adjectives are followed by nothing 😅 You have to know what you want to express based on the context. Writing a novel is not about chattering. Just this article of yours would have failed in junior high school... There are so many bad sentences in the first chapter that you are advised to quit. "All of them who are known to have survived" should obviously be "all of them who are known to have survived". What do you mean by "all of them who have survived"? ? ? "They all became eternal idiots because they couldn't afford it." What about the attributive modified by "burden"? Not just anyone can write a novel, so learn how to write sentences.

I have read more than a dozen chapters so far. They are very well written. I don't know why no one has read them.

I'm not going to cut it, I've released all the saved manuscripts Don't do it.