Danhai Juanxian

Today I was working in the field and it took more than 3 hours to take the subway back and forth. I browsed the new book list on the way. How should I put it? The current direction of the starting point is completely different from when I first entered the Internet writing pit. Times have changed. Short dramas can overwhelm dramas. People need a faster pace and more excitement. In terms of the setting of the protagonist, my original plan for this book was to take the path of accumulation and success. Inside the original outline. The replacement progress is even slower. There is even a plot of being surpassed by the next generation of disciples. But if you write it that way, the lines will be too long. There was no contract signed, so I sped up a lot of progress. But I also re-read it today. Further acceleration leads to deviation from the outline. The outline may need to be adjusted later. In addition, I also plan to change my style and try in-investment to test the waters. This book will be updated regularly. If the internal investment is successful. The focus will shift there. If unsuccessful, continue here. Preliminary estimate is that the success rate is not high. ʕᵕᴥᵕʔ

I just discovered that it's really nice to have an error correction function.

I just read Chapter 4, and I still like the protagonist's character. It's not abrupt, and the defeat is normal, reasonable, and exciting. The protagonist gave me the feeling of being calm and restrained, which is the same as the author's writing style. Personally, I like the ones with more dialog boxes, so read on and then comment.

Are you talking about doing a secret adventure? This is planned in the alternate plot outline.

The update of this book will take a while. Work cannot be delayed. 😡 It is not good to spend too much of your life without signing a contract. 😌 I'm very sorry. 🥺 I will try to guarantee an update. 🌹

Favorite each other, I followed you.

Upgraded to 3! But I found that I couldn't vote for the monthly ticket, so the author encouraged me to sign up! ✊✊

This book has 300,000 words and you haven't signed a contract yet? I don't know if I can finish writing it if it's free all the time ٩( 'ω' )و

I'm from a writer's assistant. After reading the first few chapters, I think the writing is okay, but the most important thing is that the newcomer must be able to attract readers. I don't think your first few pictures will attract editors. Try to make the first few pictures more interesting so that readers and editors have the desire to read, so that they can sign the contract.

After so long, a very serious question came to mind. The author writes long paragraphs every time, which makes it easy to get tired. While watching the video before, an editor asked a similar question.

😭It's very sad. Why don't you sign a contract with me? I really like it.