
Cause and Effect Panel: from Advance Blacksmithing to Loan Wu Sheng
因果面板:从预支打铁到贷款武圣
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- Completed
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- 736k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
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- Male
- Subgenre
- Eastern Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Let me take a look at this small loan.
Shuangwen Liangcao
It's quite silky and there's nothing wrong with it so far.
What is written in Chapter 20? After you finish writing it, you have to read it for yourself and see if it makes sense.
The downfall of this book is that it is too rushed. Things happen one after another, and there is no time to worry about it. I can only forcefully write that the protagonist does not need to take a rest to squeeze out time, and it does not blur how much work can be done in a day. If I really have to calculate it in detail, there is absolutely not enough time. There is also the poisonous point of writing about leapfrog combat. Nowadays, leapfrog combat is not popular. It is fun to crush the same level. Otherwise, it will look like the cheating is so stretched that you can't crush it, and the fighting is so hard. It would be much better if the timeline of this book was extended. For example, the main character would have a normal time, and then the conflict plot would be written after the main character recovers, instead of rushing and the main character doesn't have time, and then another thing happens.
This book is probably a revised version of Goldfinger. The plot is very familiar. I think I just replaced the old book Goldfinger with Karma Goldfinger and put it back on the shelves.
These civilian warriors have all been killed, and no one is innocent.