Start Practicing by Adding Points to Your Destiny

1. About the beginning. Many brothers feel that this beginning is too old and was written many years ago. They know the ending when they see the beginning, and most of them are discouraged. I actually struggled with it for a long time, because someone has mentioned this problem a long time ago, and I have corrected it several times, but some people still think it is not good. In this beginning, I imitated "One Hundred Years of Solitude". I didn't expect that there would be the problems that everyone said was not good, that I immediately lost the desire to watch it, and that after seeing the beginning, I knew that there was no sense of expectation for the ending. I was still complacent before I published the book 😢 So, now I have simply modified it. It is also a relatively old way of writing, but at least it doesn't seem to have any big problems for the time being. I hope I won't step on everyone's poisonous points. 2. About bringing two oil bottles. The protagonist has two younger brothers and sisters. The younger brother is 12 years old and the younger sister is 8 years old. Both parents are dead. It is a classic ancient writing method. When I started the book, I actually knew that raising two children would be difficult and unpleasant to write about, but I thought about it and wrote it anyway. There are several reasons. One is a reply I once gave to a book friend. In ancient times, most families would have many children. Although there were some who died in infancy, there were very few only children, unless they really couldn't be born. In ancient times, children were productivity and combat power. Not to mention ancient times, even in today's rural areas, most boys can live more comfortably in the village, and others dare not bully them. Another reason is that many of Qidian's books are about friendship and love. I hope that the protagonist can not only have friendship and love, but also have his own family relationship. I don't want him to be a loner. Maybe it's because I'm getting older and I'm a bit lonely to begin with, and I don't want my protagonist to be like this. So the villagers in the village I wrote about, except for a few gangsters at the beginning, are all pretty good, and their relatives are all humane. I understand that when everyone sees that the protagonist has younger brothers and sisters, they will subconsciously think that this is a stumbling block and a poisonous point. This is because everyone has seen this kind of plot too much and it is very difficult to deal with it. If you are not careful, you will be poisoned. I myself have been reading novels for more than ten or twenty years. I have indeed seen a lot of this kind of plot, but I still want to try it. At least I haven't seen any book friends say how annoying the two children I wrote are. If someone later says that their character and behavior are annoying and they don't want to read it, that's because I'm not good at writing, but it doesn't mean I'm not good at family affection. I don't want to argue with my fellow book friends. I have an average personality. When someone refutes something, I easily want to argue with him. Unless what he says is really reasonable, I can't stand it. When you write novels, you will inevitably get scolded. Platinum masters are scolded by many people, not to mention a low-level and transparent little author like me. Moreover, if someone scolds, it means someone is watching. If no one scolds, they will start to feel sad that there is no one. I just hope that everyone can be a little more tolerant when reading books, at least during the free period, they can be more tolerant to mid-list authors, because I haven't started to collect money on the shelves yet 😁 It doesn't matter if you scold me for being justified, I have to thank you for pointing out the problem. I will delete the unreasonable abuse and accusations, thank you. Thank you all for having the patience to see this, and take a bow! Refill!

At least it's not a highly homogenized online article, so it's okay, come on.

Cool article. IQ online. You can watch it.

So far, I don't have any major problems. It's just that the plot is a bit rushed, but it's just for food and doesn't have many poisonous points. You can watch it.

This book is good to read, it is easy to read but not downgraded. It kills people and sets fire all the way to the golden belt. . .

The writing is not good, it can't even compare to previous novels

You're not stuck with the exercises, are you? What annoys me the most is the kind of introduction that clearly states that you can upgrade and integrate exercises, but when you get to the main text, you use the exercises to choke your neck and suppress your realm. If it were, I wouldn't go in and watch. If not, I'll go in and take a look.

Forget it if someone else has a girl, you still have two

Why do they always start like this? Make up a new name and then have the exact same details come to your door to ask for money and kill people behind the scenes. Without this plot, it would be impossible to write a novel. Think carefully about whether the writing will start smoother or lighter. It can be written by changing the outline and outline to a systematic routine, adding a few points, and changing the name.

Not bad, the protagonist doesn't want revenge overnight

When they left, they said at the door that it would be better if no one knew about it.

When Shen Nong makes a post, he will come back to rate it if it is good or not, but if it is mediocre, it will simply slip away. Full score: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ No ratings yet

It's true that it doesn't overwhelm combat power, but with unlimited upgrades in skills, what use are the bones and qualifications?

The opening and introduction are spoilers😅

Go buy two bags of poison and put them in the well. Isn't this destiny just coming?

If this plot continues to develop, he will enter the harem or even the Jinluan Palace. I just don't know how the author intends to use it.

The first two paragraphs of your first photo should be deleted. Is this how you wrote it 100 years ago? I gave up when I saw the first three paragraphs and immediately threw up.

Good looking, please read "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!

If you have money, why not buy steamed buns? You can buy a lot of steamed buns with 10 taels. At least get tens of thousands of destiny points.

Can anyone check to see if this book was written by someone from Guangxi? I ​​feel like it's very tasteful to kill four chickens!

What does it mean that the universe is the strongest at the beginning?