Martial Arts Longevity Starts from Hanging Up

After writing the first dozens of chapters. The author feels that he has found some writing style that suits him. From the fourth volume, the writing style begins to favor decisive killing. If you like to read this kind of writing style, you can start reading it from the fourth volume. At the beginning of the fourth volume, the protagonist Li Xuan experienced the battle between the Erhushan undercover and the Kunlun Sect. Reflecting on the past, his character became calm and decisive. The Immortal Sect proclaimed itself, the demon clan retreated outside the territory, and the plane began to focus mainly on martial arts. Please give me your valuable opinions. The author will definitely finish the first contract book. Thank you for your long-term support~🌹🌹🌹

The beginning is a prison situation in a fantasy world, and the subsequent story will be more exciting. Looking forward to everyone's support.

The flow of waste material is not terrible. What is terrible is that the author does not think that the flow of waste material he wrote is terrible. When they first met, the protagonist's realm was higher than Shangguan's sister, but after five years of hanging up, the protagonist's realm was surpassed by Shangguan's sister. . .

The beginning of the abuser is great

I feel that the protagonist is a bit frustrated. Anyway, I have read more than 20 chapters. I feel that the protagonist has been pushed away all the time, and the golden finger has not been of much use. The protagonist seems to have been pushed away from the beginning of the mission by the Shangguan. I can't see it, maybe I haven't read much. I think, because he was unjustly accused and imprisoned for no reason, at least there must be a fire in his heart. Why did you arrest me? Is it my fault that I survived? Anyway, I don't like that kind of protagonist. He is always being led around by others, and he has no idea or goal. Anyway, I can't stand it anymore. Farewell author.

I read more than a dozen chapters and still don't see the use of hanging up.

Is abuse still mainstream now? Anyone like to watch?

I feel that the protagonist is too rubbish. You have a golden finger, but you don't care about it. Instead, you go around seeking death. If you don't die, who will die? It doesn't matter if you're in the deep prison in front of you, but if you're out of the prison in the back, you're really seeking death, you're rubbish

What kind of plot is this? The protagonist is in prison at the beginning, anyone can beat him, and anyone can easily enter the prison and cause trouble... Has the outside system collapsed?

Chapter 25.26 Is so exciting, the plot explodes🤭🤭

The most unacceptable thing is to give the protagonist strength in the first chapter. Even if you don't explain everything, I can still finish one chapter. You are a piece of rubbish novel. I'm sorry that I can't even finish the first chapter.

The routine is old, the golden finger is useless, the protagonist is suppressed, the material is useless, time travel is a life and death crisis, and it is boring.

The protagonist's personality is not likeable. A lot of times it's inexplicable. And a little weak. The front part is a little bit toxic, I personally suggest overturning it and rewriting it.

When I saw the waste flow, I just threw away the book.

The new chapters are so exciting! Loyal fans🤭🤭

Introduction: The first half is okay, but the second half... Quickly remove the poison

I can't read it, the writing is very messy and white...

I was really taken inside and felt like I was a character inside🤭🤭🤭

The author's writing is so exciting~ I look forward to it~

👍👍👍🌹🌹🌹Looking forward to looking forward to it

Don't kill after being awesome and let blood flow like a river?

I can't see any plot outline, the plot is a mess.

Writing style: starting point white text. A little bit of logic. Like other time travel stories. One second you traveled through time, the next second you adapted, the whole process was seamless. Basically, more than 90% of the novels written by Qidian are illogical. Fast food novel, the plot is just okay, but there are some unreasonable parts, so you can still read it if you step over it.

What does this mean?

It's a mess, and I have no clue.

It is difficult for mortals to live forever, and the road to immortality is even harder: "Immortal martial arts starts from the entry of mortal Dharma", Let's see how a mortal blacksmith starts practicing by grabbing half of the broken martial arts skills, and embarks on the road to immortal martial arts step by step! Every book lover is welcome to take a look! Thank you!