Football: Liverpool's Cheeky Genius

Please write that Korean entertainment is divided directly into metropolitan areas, why come to the football area?

The writing is a bit confusing, sequence, flashbacks, memories. There must be a plan... The paragraphs are not divided well and there is no sense of beginning and end. I think you wrote that the male protagonist is Chinese... And you did not explain how he became the younger brother of the Liu family... You might as well change the background to the male protagonist who was adopted by the Liu family. That way, Liu Zhimin and Zhang Yuanying don't have to give up.

I don't quite understand how football and entertainment are related...

Author, look at this face! How dare you make her into a female supporting role! The first of the five generations…

…Originally, the good results of the National Youth League in the past two days made me want to read a new book on football. I didn't expect this. Why don't you let deepseek write it for you?

At the age of fifteen, he came on as a substitute in the 85th minute of his Premier League debut and then scored four goals. . . . You are more awesome than Lewan Nine-Five Supreme

The writing is so messy. After reading only two chapters, the distribution of the text is dizzying. It is impossible to extract effective information from the densely packed text.

It's strange how Ward's football game is connected with Korean entertainment

But as someone who is into football and Korean entertainment, I have really thought about it before, but I don't write novels and I don't know how to write them.

The writing is too messy, with a hammer on one side and a hammer on the other.

The author is talented in writing, but what the hell is wrong with his writing? For example, in the article, Liverpool played a big four for the first time. However, he did not describe such a refreshing plot at all. In the first paragraph, he was still writing about the goal, and in the next paragraph, he jumped directly to the Korean airport! There are many like this! He is the complete opposite of those authors who flood the market! Others can write a chapter for one goal, but this author only has a short paragraph.

How should I put it? I don't like to set the writing style.

The family background is too complicated, just write that the male protagonist met the idol female protagonist in an advertising campaign.