Warhammer 40,000 Spring: Allegiance of the Realms

The order is not quite right. The first step is that your world should be biotechnology, looking for a world that replicates more gene seeds. However, there are gene seeds of dead brothers, which is acceptable in this world. What the main line needs most now is to quickly take the Titans and leave them, find the next world to recruit soldiers, and play less political struggles in the world. Just kill them all. Your battle writing is much better than those current chapters.

All I can say is that the mecha technology in Pacific Rim is not as good as that of the Mechanicus. Is it of any value?

The red smell is too strong. The great man said that he hated individualism.

It's so funny, it feels like watching a full-length version of Lobster Bullshit

After all, the safe and fast jump engine can make Old Man Huang excited 🙂

I remember that the genetic engine of the Super Seminary is a good match for the Astartes, and just one generation of the engine can resist missiles. It is much better than the Astartes, and can greatly improve the strength of the Astartes.

I see a lot of people giving you advice, and most of it is pretty good. However, there are a few people who ask you to write about Warhammer to practice Kung Fu. Don't listen to it. It will be too difficult to break down if you write like this.

To be honest, it's easy for Warhammer to be criticized by the big guys when it comes out of its own world.

When I read Chapter 4, the author's wording and sentences were awkward in some places, such as these sentences in Chapter 3: "But some blood oozing out from the damaged gaps near the joints on the ceramic armor showed his condition" "The bolt pistol fired rapidly, followed by the swing of the combat dagger in just a few seconds" "The experience of facing chaotic enemies makes it obvious that it is impossible for them to carry only one quantity in the face of important equipment." "But due to the chaotic energy of the subspace, the signal of the positioning beacon is also seriously unstable." No, you wrote it with AI, right? Is this a sentence that a human can write? Didn't you polish it yourself before copying and pasting?

The author has a big problem with the name design of the protagonist. It is very poorly readable and has no sense of immersion. He feels that he is seriously out of touch with the group culture and surrounding comrades. As a result, whether it is a third-person description or other people's name for him, he can only use his full name Quan Tiehua. There is no difference from any perspective, which makes the protagonist very mechanical like an NPC, with only one ID pointing to the only character. It just looks like a random name is assigned to a character. It's okay to use a Chinese name in 40K, but it must be concise and easy to pronounce. In the white scars of traditional oriental culture, Qin Xia and Juba Khan are relatively readable. People from other legions of non-oriental cultures can directly call him Qin Xia or Qin. You can directly read Sarkhan, the East Asian warrior who exorcises the Salamanders in the Dead Realm. His name is easy to pronounce for Westerners and is also a Western name. The pronunciation is very similar to the pronunciation of Wokan, the Lord of the Fire Dragon Legion, which makes you think that this person will not play a role in the Salamanders. The name of Fu Qingshan in the Infinite Flow Yuan Universe in the fan fiction is also good. It is not obtrusive at all in the cultural background of the White Scars. Qingshan is highly readable as a noun. The characters in the plot can call him "Fu", "Qingshan" and "Qingshan Khan", so even if he has a bunch of supporting characters with Western names, they will not be unable to call him. But the protagonist, Quan Tiehua, is very embarrassed. His battle group is the Seraph Angels, which sounds like he has a Western background, and his comrades all have names from Western cultural backgrounds, so it is impossible to call him Tiehua, Laotie, Ahua, etc. There is also no concise and nice nickname. As a result, I saw more than 20 chapters, and almost all of them were white descriptions such as "Quan Tiehua Xxx, Quan Tiehua Xxx, Quan Tiehua Xxx", which did not reflect the writing style and was very difficult to pronounce. It was particularly uncomfortable to read the words and sentences. Besides, we are all close combat brothers. How can we keep calling others by their full names.

It is better to directly tell that world that the protagonist comes from 40,000 years in the future, and then talk about the current situation of the empire, and then you can appreciate other worlds and even exchange knowledge with the protagonist. The protagonist tells them about subspace characteristics and demonic characteristics in exchange for weapon technology. Warhammer

Have Warhammer and Alien vs. Predator come to an end?

Or just open a group and try it out. If it doesn't work, delete it. 🤔 I guess there are quite a lot of people joining. According to Warhammer terms, it is better to expand the territory of the empire than not to expand the territory of the empire, otherwise it will just perish (?

Kill monsters and become stronger. The biggest problem in 40k shithole is that there is no stable way to become stronger. The Imperial Army blocking the network channel is exhausting. If you digitize it and add monster killing upgrades, it will be embarrassing just thinking about it.

Do you want to replace the Emperor Seat toilet?

Can the author go to the StarCraft/Halo world next time? I feel that these two worlds have the most value, and there are a lot of good things to get in them, especially the Forerunner technology in Halo

Will there be a Jedi Submarine scene? I remember the technology there was pretty good, and I wanted to see how the protagonist felt when he came to that world. In this worldview, the Earth has interstellar navigation capabilities and is very warlike. It basically fights everything it can fight, just like the United States... (The super-Earth itself here is a satire on the United States). There is also the world of Star Dome Railway. How well does the author understand it? Can I ask? 🤔

I started watching Linglong directly. Why did I watch it for a long time and I couldn't understand it?

No! Does it take you so long to fight an Iron Warrior?

There are too few posts. Is there no recommendation from the author now?

All right! Another cloud hammer! Going to the Pacific Rim is even more inexplicably individualistic!

Speaking of which, author, have you read the "Yue Kui Zhuan" comic? It is the comic version of Ling Cong, which seems to describe the story of Yue Kui, and can also better understand the world view structure of Ling Cong

Can we follow up with some fantasy worldviews, such as Oath of the Empire, Children of the Mist, and Medieval Warhammer? These novels are still a bit too niche, but I feel that fantasy and Warhammer go better together than science fiction.