Dragon Clan: Starting from the Hunter, You Will Receive the Final Dragon Type

The biggest problem with this book right now is that there are too few updates. At the same time, the author's performance as a super giant water monster is very stable. It is very difficult to read. Saving more than ten chapters to read it in one go is not enough.

Don't be fooled, the writing and plot are good, I really like Old Tang (Norton)

The writing is good The connection is good Problem: Cassell's recruitment of the protagonist is a bit dissuading me It's too frustrating

Is there no one in the Dragon Clan today who writes about the wisdom of little people? Rather than counterattack, what I want to see more is to break out of the chess game!

There is a question that I have to complain about. Your protagonist has obviously been a hunter for several years, but after entering Kassel, his personality is the same as that of a newly graduated high school student. You must have the characteristics of a hunter.

When you write an original Aboriginal character as the protagonist, you don't know where the plot will go. There is no cheat system or anything like that, so you have to rely on the author to forcefully arrange the content and plot.

I understand, I understand, the protagonist's ability is that of a beautiful widow who ran away from her husband (referring to flexibility), and can perfectly match their desires and completely surrender themselves (referring to weapon proficiency)

After reading more than 20 chapters, from the rainy night elevated road to Nono's enrollment, the protagonist has no power to resist at all, and can only passively be led by others. More than 20 chapters, 40,000 to 50,000 words, and I still don't know what is special about the protagonist? Do you rely on your physical fitness to cosplay Captain America? There has to be some foreshadowing or some explanation of the protagonist's confidence, right? In a dragon world where blood is paramount, the protagonist must explain why he should be the protagonist.

There is no reason to hate Nono, it is worth voting for

I thought they were hunters from Monster Hunter, but I thought that the group of humanoid ancient dragons really had the dragon clan in hand, and it turned out that they were hunters from the Hunter website.

Nowadays, most of the Dragon Clan fanfics are just returning from jail or something, and a Dragon Clan fanfic with an original protagonist has appeared, which is really interesting.

What should I say? Still don't want Old Tang to die. Although I personally don't have any particular feelings for him, I read the fanfic just because the original work was too depressing.

Let's take a bold guess. The protagonist's speech spirit is innate, and the dragon's bloodline may be obtained by using the ability of the speech spirit Old Tang may finally awaken into Norton, but the protagonist makes him into a ring grandfather, which is a disguised he

Have you ever been a hunter? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

Kassel College: A so-called Avenger principal who only asks students to slay dragons, and is also the back-up for the resurrection of the Dragon King I don't understand one thing

Why does Noono show me how Xia Mi feels?

After catching up on the latest chapter, I found that the author arranged the pacing too tightly and the writing was not clear enough, resulting in a poor reading experience. He had to go to the Little Man in the Bottle with his teacher before even one class after entering school. He had just finished the account book task and then went to the Nibelungen to rescue people the next day. It sounded like there was no one in the secret party. The S-class freshman was not a student, but a task tool. It seemed that the school recruited Song Zhong to recruit him into the execution department to do tasks. Although the author wrote that the task of rescuing the professor is not limited to the protagonist, but since the reader's main perspective is on Song Zhong, I just feel that Song Zhong has become the secret party's butt wiper. (Even how to continue the shareholder family requires the protagonist to ask the Little Man in the Bottle) One suggestion is not to rush into the plot. Now the three tasks are obviously very important main plots. The Man in the Bottle and going to the Nibelungen to save the professor are to save the old Tang, and the account book is to explore the mystery of the protagonist's bloodline and the girl in the dream. In the early stage of the writing, it is difficult for the main character to fully understand all the information (such as who the black-haired girl is, and the origin of the main character's bloodline). The author of the Dragon Clan fanfic is a bit of a literary youth. Without writing skills, he has to act like a riddler to point out the "gray lines", which makes it difficult for readers to connect with the author's radio waves, and it is very tiring to read. You can write more school dramas, content that readers can fully understand and understand. Don't be too anxious. These lighter content can account for two-fifths to three-fifths. (One thing is strange. Caesar's invitation to the protagonist to a party is a good opportunity for readers to "come out of the water and take a breath." I don't know why I didn't write it.) But this is also the most interesting dragon fanfic I have read recently. I hope the author writes better and better Attached are two monthly passes

It looks good from the front, and the characters stand up. Compared to Lu Mingfei, a fan of the protagonist, I still like the original protagonist to cause trouble in the world of dragons. Grain and grass are on the upper side. Chasable, readable and nurturing

Liangcao, good-looking, good writing, slow to update There are so many original Buddhist protagonists that are rare in Rebirth Road Mingfei. Like the previous book, it can be seen that the author likes Old Tang ww very much. There are many plots in Old Tang, and he is the author who respects the King of Bronze and Fire the most on the Internet The plot is okay, there is not much excitement, and the plot progresses slowly. Considering the previous book, there should be no shortage of explosive points in the middle and later stages I don't know why the results can't be improved? In fact, he writes much better than most authors, so don't be fooled.

Are you a part-time author, do you have other jobs? If you have other jobs, I won't say anything. If you don't have a serious job and are a student or freelancer, I hope you can spend more time on writing. The update speed is too slow. The writing is good, but the update speed is worrying, especially these days. Do you want to cut this book? If you don't plan to invest more time in this book, please tell me early. If you plan to continue writing, I can still support a little monthly ticket, 📖It's really not bad

Rt. This is not specific to this novel, but to most of the other Dragon Clan fanfics I read.

It's quite interesting, but I feel like my sister is a bit insecure? There won't be any part in the future where my sister becomes Deadpool, right?