Dragon Clan: Not Coming Back, but Restarting into a Hard Copy

The opening is well written and raises expectations. Then it was quite satisfactory. You thought he could score 90 points, but the result was 68 points. That's what it feels like.

I can't stand it anymore, tm Fenrir is an older brother, an older brother

I feel like this is one of the top among Dragon Clan fandoms. It's very interesting without following the original plot, so why isn't it popular? Is it because of the name?

What are you doing? It's purely poisonous to write a cool article and let the villain take the secret treasure and then escape. The protagonist is like a clown watching others run away. This chapter is really poorly written.

Why is this book not popular? Compared to some junk dragon fics that have better results than this book, why is this book not popular?

The writing gets worse and worse, and the rest is pure money-making, all anecdotes, no climax Mai Shukutoku's handling is also messy, she kept calling Lu Mingfei after she passed out. As a result, you directly sent the nanny group to Norton, and only eats settings. If you can write like this, your family will have to hire Haji Gao

Bro, there is definitely something wrong with the outline. Anyway, I haven't finished reading it yet, but after seeing more than a hundred chapters following the second restart, I can think that there is definitely something wrong with the outline, because there is no need to do this for a copy that has already been typed. You are the author of the Dragon Clan fandom with the most Jiangnan flavor I have ever seen, so it does mean that what you write is definitely not the Lu Mingfei that netizens love to read. After the setting of the Black Prince is thrown out, at least until the second restart. The previous setting seems to be useless. This is the biggest problem of this book, and the restart at Catfish after Odin directly gets the Black King's relic is handled too hastily. It doesn't look like it was written by the same person. Then I can only think that the author has a problem with the outline. Just like that destiny, every dragon fandom that I see with a Jiangnan flavor will have similar problems. The Curse of Jiangnan, right? It's a bit outrageous.

Failure here refers to failure to achieve the ultimate goal. Now I have seen the chapter where Dionysus took away the secret medicine. I can't hold it anymore. I feel that everything is moving in the general direction of Loki's benefit. The baseline of Loki feels that Loki is planning - there are changes in the plan - and some of Loki's forces have been damaged. - Loki seems to be losing - Loki succeeded again. The previous variables obviously dealt a certain blow to Loki's organization, but in the end Loki achieved his goal again. The previous was fine. I kept reading. I couldn't stand the secret medicine part anymore, so I just gave it away. If Loki hasn't really failed once yet, I'll wait until he loses once before coming back to watch.

Holy shit, the author wrote really well in the chapters where Lu Mingfei and Eri Yi met for the first time! ! Absolutely amazing! 😭I cried on the bed for a long time, I couldn't help myself, and my emotions broke down directly, as if I wanted to cry out all the regrets and sorrows I had before😭I read a lot of Dragon Clan fandoms, and many people just brushed off the psychological description. I just discovered this treasure book today. It is the first time that this kind of psychological description is so profound and true. It can be regarded as making up for the regrets I had at the beginning. Thank you, really thank you❤️

Let me show you the authentic way to kiss Jiangnan

The author is Superman... This article is dreamy and beautiful to me...

Brother, don't stop updating. Although the latter part is not as good as the previous one, I still think it's pretty good.

There is too much written about the humanity of the Dragon King, especially the Norton section, which is very out of place.

Good, good, good, come on, come on, it's really a breath of fresh air among the returning Lu Mingfei

It's rare to see Dragon Clan fandom written so well, why isn't it popular?

The first fully-ordered Dragon Clan fanfic, bro, you are just like Jiangnan, you must write it down

It's really outrageous. Lu Mingfei is either coming back or restarting. If I change the protagonist, he will die. I'll go through time travel. Why is it always Lu Mingfei?

The more you write, the better. Come on 😍

Not updated yet? I promised not to be a supervisor

Almost all ordered, the author writes well😋

The emotional scenes are really well written, I give it a thumbs up.

It was a happy time with regrets

Come on, come on

What is Lu Mingfei's identity in this fanfic? Can Brother Shen Nong explain it?

I have read a lot of fanfics (for personal reasons, I only read Lu Mingfei's protagonist, no time travel, no harem, no teardown of the original CP, Lu Hui's novels, so there are some good fanfics that I haven't read), including Restarting Lu Mingfei (broken update), Lu Mingfei's Second Life (broken update), Lu Mingfei who was A-level at the beginning (broken update), Restarting Life (completed, read) The Head Is Not Enlightened), Lu Mingfei Returns from Sekiro (Completed), The Final Chapter of Dragon Rights (Completed, Free), Lu Mingfei and 17 Years Old (Serialized), Lu Mingfei Read Dragons Before Slaying the Dragon (Serialized), I won't write specific reviews of these books. In short, the ones listed above are all ones that I think are well written (selected from dozens of fan books). This book is still being serialized, but I can already rank it in the top five of these books. In terms of writing style, it can be in the top three (personal opinion), and the world view and plot supplements are also well done (except for the opening events, which are a bit confusing). To put it objectively and concisely, if you are a fan of Dragon Clan, it is definitely worth watching! ! ! ps: Don't be dissuaded by the title of the book. The early plot design is not good, but after reading chapters 2 and 30, it will feel smoother.

I only saw the Norton part. The author weakened the arrogance of the dragons. After all, the furious Norton cannot be gentle to creatures other than his own brother. This problem may be small, but it is too fatal for me. Norton's memory is too long. For the immortal creatures in the setting, the era is like white. The 20 years of Old Tang's experience are too short, and it makes people feel that these 20 years are very important. But in fact, these 20 years are just the ashes of Norton. It is just the readers' own senses that define these 20 years as "important". The separation is too strong for me.

Here is the author. After much thought, I decided to post it. The moral of this article is to develop a larger dragon world, which will connect many myths and gods from all over the world, and fill them with dragon identities. And it will epically strengthen the next generations, such as the crotchless Old Tang and Teacher Daye, giving them the oppressive feeling of the Dragon King they deserve. I have a wonderful idea about Long San, and I hope to be able to write it down by then. Although not many people will read it, I will probably finish it. At least now it is for myself back then, using another way to make up for the regrets of youth. Thank you to the readers who like this work. If you don't give up, I hope I can show a dragon world in my mind.

The content related to Old Tang is so well-written, but it may not be popular because there is too much irrelevant information written in the early stage; for example: 1. The sad story of two minor supporting characters 2. There is no foreshadowing of the battle with the blood of Loki. This group of villains just appeared inexplicably and has nothing to do with the original work, and it is still at the beginning. The lack of foreshadowing does not mean that it is simply foreshadowing, but that it is not linked to the original plot. For example, I didn't know that the plot line you wrote in the early stage was not Long Yi There is less about Lu Mingfei and it is not Chuzi Route. The early writings were personal creations that were not linked to the original works. Readers abandoned the book as soon as they saw it was different from what they thought. 3 There is less interaction with other characters. Everyone likes Chu Zihang, Fingel and even Nono, but there is too little written in the early stage, and there are only a few conversations with Zihang. Although they fought together and separated on the battlefield, the content is still about 50 chapters. (However, the description of the second-tier characters is very good, such as the principal, vice-principal, original characters, Old Tang, and the nanny group. At this point, all the Dragon Clan fans are not as good as yours)

I don't have any other ill intentions, I just take the liberty to ask. Is the harem still a single woman? If it's about stock trading, I won't read it.

Make a note, starting from today, cast three recommendation votes. If not, then I forgot.