Stranger: Biyou Village Chief, Xinjie Cult Leader

They have traveled through time and become Ma Hongxian and are still playing in a circle of aliens. It would be great to cooperate directly with the top leaders of the country. It would be great to use the magic machine Bailian to build some industrial machines. If it can be done, who would dare to mess with it?

Licking, mindlessly following the original plot, withdrawn

Author, do you want the protagonist to be wiped out by official cannonballs? Population red line! Unless the protagonist surpasses the Heavenly Master within two years, it's better to be honest.

Is the protagonist now a humanoid nuke? In modern society, if you want to cause trouble, you must have the deterrence of nuclear bombs. If you don't have the strength, you will be useless. Only with the power of a nuclear bomb will people listen to you. On this basis, with Mach 3 upward mobility, your speech will have weight and meaning.

The protagonist is too high-minded, and the plot is like a pool of stagnant water. There is no emotional fluctuation at all while reading, and I can't stand it after a few chapters.

Before I leave, I want to get a VIP ticket! ! !

This is already crazy. If you do it head-on, if nothing else, more than half of your penises will fall out with you. Damn it, they have started to experiment on human subjects, and Quan Xing is in this state (probably not as good as you). You killed a large number of people. I really thought that the people above were all vegetarians. You just sent six lunatics to create trouble. In this posture, you are planning to force each family to come over and wipe out their families.

I would like to discuss the plot with the author. First of all, let's lay down some armor. Just like the same bowl of tofu, some people like to eat sweet, salty, or even spicy or sour. It's hard to agree with everyone. It's normal for some people to feel upset. Even if our parents quarrel with us, it doesn't mean we don't love our parents, right? I liked this novel, but there were a few things about it that I wanted to address. I didn't use abusive words or call on other netizens to be violent, just treat it as a questionnaire type survey for the author. After all, aren't you just writing novels to make money, to earn monthly tickets and recommendation tickets from our pockets? Then I will write a review. I think there is something wrong that can be improved. I hope you won't be angry. First of all, the first thing that makes me feel uncomfortable about this book is the licking of the original protagonist group. The protagonist's position is first and foremost a time traveler. Why does he want to help the original protagonist group? When I started reading this novel, the only protagonist I recognized at that moment was the time traveler you wrote, Ma Xianhong, who is not an aborigine. Ma Xianhong is not the original protagonist, but the protagonist you wrote. My position is to follow yours, do you understand? Why didn't Feng Baobao kill the protagonist when he attacked him? Didn't he come with malicious intentions? When you pick up a knife, you have the consciousness of being killed. Because I like the protagonist you wrote, I hope that when others attack him, he can retaliate quickly and swiftly. Can you understand this? Second point, I feel that the three views of the protagonist you wrote are constantly changing due to the audience's evaluation. When beating Wang Bing, I don't object to you beating him, but you can first write a scene where he actively provokes the protagonist, and then let the protagonist fight back. Beating people half to death for no apparent reason. How can there be any black and white in this world, good or evil, only one has nothing to do with me? Then use a so-called audience to read the wishes of the entire audience. To be honest, no one in the fan fiction with Wang Bing as the protagonist found him disgusting, just like the Antarctic Immortal in Nezha II now. To put it bluntly, it's just a matter of different forces. A group of people lamented in this play, why am I not the one born in Rome? In essence, it is no different from bullying when many people use the Internet to bully others. Please don't use the word "all" to speak for all readers and viewers, thank you. Because we feel this is wrong, we will not be like those who break the defense, yelling and wishing others to die. This is called survivorship bias. As long as you write the protagonists of the original novel, the protagonists will almost feel like a licking dog to me. Well, let me ask you, if it is the Wang family that holds the competition this time, the person who cheats in the competition is Wang Bing. Can you tell me that the protagonist you wrote will have this attitude? No, to put it bluntly, this is a common problem in fan fiction. Either he is rushing to lick the company or he is rushing to lick the master, such as Dou Po Chang Hong, etc. Can you tell me if the protagonist will lick when this kind of thing happens? No, he would slap the old master in the face, which is what a creature like the protagonist should do. Don't tell me that it can't be beaten or that there are other weapons that can block the weather? Can it stop a nuclear warhead? If nothing else, can you tell me if a person who can't even do a critical hit can block Barrett? Can armor-piercing bullets work? I can't beat you, but can I kill all the people you've assigned to me, so that you are the only one left in your entire sect, and tell you the price of messing with me. If it were a competition held by the Wang family, would your protagonist do this? Will it? So he licked the Heavenly Master without any reason or conditions, which made me feel particularly uncomfortable. His strength is none of my business. In reality, if you encounter a competition organizer, um, they are cheating to flatter their daughter, and then they modify your results and attack you. Do you feel disgusted? Oh, why should others pay the price for your concern? I have the ability to get first place on my own, so why should I give up my position to your disciple? In any fan novel where one person is different from another, does every protagonist have to slap him in the face? Why dump? Because you can't do it in reality, so when you see this kind of scene in a novel, you feel really happy. Do you understand? When reading a novel, you want us to pay for it, and you want me to feel like I have a place to vent my emotions. You make me feel comfortable when I read your novel. This is the driving force behind reading novels, right? What is the most important thing about writing a novel? It's fun, not logic and you don't have a grand world view, it's not anything else. It's you who make me feel like I can laugh when I read your novel. I'm talking about my point of view when reading novels. But seeing the protagonist and the Heavenly Master acting so respectfully and proactively like dogs made me really sick. This is simply a common problem in Under One Person novels. The entire Under One Person fan fiction is, to put it bluntly, the art of being a dog. I tell you very clearly that I am not interested. Do you know? I just want to see the protagonist show off his power and win the championship in an upright manner. I want to see someone bully the protagonist, and the protagonist can slap him back. I want to see that even if the protagonist faces those powerful people, he will not bow down and treat him like a dog. Not to mention that just because I met some of the protagonists from the original work and stood on their noses all the time, I would go up and lick them with a smile. Why am I like this? Because the first moment I read this fan novel, my position was on the protagonist you wrote, do you understand? I hope he can win with dignity and live with dignity. Don't be bullied by anyone, don't bend down for anyone. Even if it's the original protagonist group, even if it's the main characters of the original plot, even if it's people who are liked by fans of the original work. Or someone fans of the original hate. My position is only on the protagonist you wrote. When I read your fan fiction, I only care about it, I only like it, and I only bring in the protagonist of the novel you wrote. You told me that I have this need. Am I wrong? The protagonist of the original novel has nothing to do with me? The only protagonist I like at this moment is your protagonist. I hope that the protagonist I see, the protagonist you wrote that I like, can slap him back when he is bullied, and can slap him back when he encounters unfairness. When you meet the original protagonists, there is no need to grovel or lick. Author, I hope you can tell me, is my position wrong? Did you know? The biggest thing that makes me uncomfortable about your novel is why I feel that the protagonist of this book is still Zhang Chulan, not Ma Xianhong, the protagonist you wrote? I want to see the protagonist win the championship in an upright and upright manner, without having to talk about those bullshit unspoken rules, without caring about the worldly affairs and get what he deserves to stand on the championship stage. Tell me, I am on your protagonist's side, am I wrong? Sorry, my voice input may have been a bit emotional.

"Ma Xianhong" conducted experiments and killed thousands of people, and directly killed the company's spies. It's really amazing 👍😂😂😂

Are you hiding in Biyou Village and dare to practice evil?

When writing novels, eunuchs are the most taboo thing! ! !

Originally I thought this book had at least the potential for a young man, but the author updated a chapter in a few days, especially two or three days apart, and then suddenly it was put on the shelf. After it was finished, he updated a chapter and then stopped updating.

In one sentence, the protagonist of "Inhuman World: The Depths" is afraid of everything.

Generally speaking, some titles have nothing to do with the content of the article, such as War Machine, and the content is completely irrelevant.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

It seems that one person cannot be the same person as everyone else.

The update is too slow, buddy, please speed it up.

Wukong, what he cultivates is the heart fire, lungs and gold energy, what he cultivates is the mind, ape, mind and horse! Wu Neng cultivates kidney, water, liver, and wood qi, and controls desires by observing the Eight Precepts! Wu Jing, what he cultivates is the Qi of the spleen and earth. Its function is to reconcile the heart and kidneys and prevent them from fighting! Author, what are you making up?

This was a good write-up, but it ended up being discontinued.