In Middle Age, My Intelligence Updates Daily

I just read a similar book, and I suggest the author not to let the protagonist get involved with some big shots, and be hostile to some people, and then the protagonist transforms into some abyss organization or the like. I don't even think that it is necessary to gain wealth and freedom so quickly. The small characters can reach the middle class and finally the rich class, just climb up a little bit. If you gain wealth and freedom too quickly, it may be difficult for you to write.

Some plots may need to be optimized → this system, one of the common flashpoints is suspected of breaking the law and violating social ethics: If the protagonist knows that there is money and property hidden in the waste by others, but still takes possession of it, it meets the elements of the crime of embezzlement and may constitute the crime of embezzlement.

A woman must be described as if she has never seen a man's sexual hunger and thirst. It's off-putting. I put it down and read other books. When I came back, I still felt off-putting and couldn't stand it. The other female characters are actually not much better. Readers of your book are not here to see women having sex. It's an inexplicable design. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. In fact, many books nowadays don't have emotional scenes. Why, isn't it because they are afraid of disgusting readers?

How old is the ink on a broken USB drive? What is the difference between reading it and not reading it? What big thing can happen if you and Mr. Reader are still hiding it? Corruption, bribery, organ trading, and selling secrets, aren't they just these types of things?

The more I read, the more speechless I became. I didn't know what the author was writing. I was cheating, but it was useless. All sorts of things you can't think of. I'm building a lot in my heart.

Why did the camel caravans from the Western Regions pay tribute to the Tang Dynasty have Qingnangshu?

Okay, it's much better than the other Jiu Mengzi.

I wasted so much time writing about Faye Wong. Don't tell me that I will let her go like this. The single heroine should have said it earlier so that I could run away easily.

How could he not be reminded of important information about being attacked? The author is messing around!

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