This Is Our Mentality!

Setting his master to be a female seems like it won't work if he doesn't do something about it. It's a huge failure. It's vulgar.

It's too old and it stinks. Take it down quickly.

The main character's thoughts are too long.

The foreshadowing is too long and few people have the patience to read on.

I feel that the author's perspective and settings are very novel. It's the first time I've seen it. Although there are some shortcomings, the flaws are not hidden. I can just improve it more in the future!

I feel like what I wrote is pretty good, but you guys are too harsh.