Dragon Tribulation of All Realms

You are also a talented person. I wish you good luck in being able to write so verbosely.

Dragon feasting ritual and ancient dragon belief.

The author likes to create plots in the early stage where the protagonist encounters players who are not of his level. You can't let him crush the protagonist to death, and you can't have a protagonist who will never be able to resist the confinement for the rest of his life. It is completely meaningless. He is deflated purely for the sake of deflation. It feels like it is purely the author's private property. The xp in his bones is that of a strong and rational girl with a preppy style and a loli witch...

For this novel, I went to learn a little bit about the plot of the Overload Holy Kingdom. It's so disgusting🤮🤮. Do some people really like to see the animal race killing humans... I look forward to the protagonist using the Ainz Sword to disgust the NPCs in the big tomb.

The more books I read, the more I feel that "a limited stage can tell infinite stories." Novels that are omnipotent in destroying heaven and earth really become more and more empty in the later stages. The stronger the protagonist and the fewer restrictions, the duller the story becomes.

Protagonist: I'm just a monster, a monster! Do you know what a monster is? I'm not a human being, I'm not a human being~ That's probably what it feels like

To be honest, the author might as well write without a female protagonist. The female protagonists written by Jiuyuan feel that they have no self-awareness and subjective agency, and will only cling to the protagonist, while the male protagonist treats the aspect of having a relationship like completing tasks and meeting KPIs. In summary, the emotional drama is a mess, and the show is suppressed.

What a shame. I have been following this book for a long time, but I really don't understand why the protagonist suddenly went crazy and risked his life for a group of unknown people for no reason. In the end, he tried his best to sacrifice all the strength of himself and his senior sister before escaping.

After reading the first few chapters, I don't want to read anymore. It feels like reading an ancient Internet article. It's a long chapter on psychological construction, and it's a matter of life and death. Is it right to still want to kill the robber? Is the main character a child?

If you can accept a protagonist with a mentality similar to Lu Mingfei's "no progress" who has always been hiding a weak child.

Reading the comments section, I feel that the author Wen Qing is a bit sick. The male protagonist is like a beggar's version of Lu Mingfei. The key is that the writing style of the green-faced beast is not there, only pretentious.

Laojiu, come back and write a fanfic about the heroine Daguangqiu for a lifetime! ! I can't do anything, please! ! Even if I take a huge step back, it's fine if I'm not the heroine! ! !

Is the protagonist familiar with the people in Windhelm City? Is there any reason why they must be saved? It doesn't matter that hundreds of thousands of people died in the main world, it is a necessary price. Then in order to save Windhelm City, he tried his best to destroy his soul. Isn't it strange? What is the reason? After reading the previous chapters, I didn't feel that the protagonist was so noble at all, and the change in personality was too sudden. Then about the protagonist's account reshuffling and retraining, I actually think it's okay. Originally, the power system written by the author became more obscure and difficult to understand after high martial arts, and low martial arts was more interesting. But before, the protagonist was sweating coldly because he didn't have a senior sister to cover up, and now he dares to defend the city under the army of White Walkers. No, buddy, do you have the capital to gamble? Can the author's writing convince readers?

I can see that this guy is really not suitable for writing a male protagonist. He really created a mess. The biggest flaw in the book is that you can believe the male protagonist. I haven't noticed this before when writing fanfics about female protagonists. After all, Alice 42 and so on have already been designed, and the male fandom does not have high requirements for shaping the image of the female protagonist. Now let's start writing about the male protagonist. Each one is really better than the last one.

Is the author suffering from a disease that will lead to death if one is not educated?

Self-pleasure is getting more and more serious, and with a lot of mental descriptions, it's no wonder that my grades are getting worse and worse.

It's 50,000 words, but it hasn't hit the street yet. Has it really succeeded in overpowering the competition?

What does this book say? The first few chapters have a literary flavor, which makes people feel a little uncomfortable. However, after getting through these chapters, the writing in the middle is quite good, and then the author starts to wander again. The ending of The Elder Scrolls gave us a huge blow on the spot. What happened? You have done so many things, worked hard for so long, and finally got frustrated and had to start all over again. Oh, don't you know, this is a big poisonous point, I feel it is only a little better than giving away a girl or something. Generally speaking, the trick of starting over is that the protagonist is so awesome that you can't write it anymore. You have no choice but to find a way to improve the word count, so you write like this. In the end, you are lucky, the protagonist is not that awesome yet, so you start to toss and start over. Look, after that one, your entire pursuit dropped by half, at least

The Bone King's mentality seems to have changed now that he has gained strength. He can barely read it, but in the end, he just writes a bunch of stuff afterwards. He has to be forced to reincarnate and rebuild, right? I was just kidding, I was afraid that the protagonist would level up too quickly, so I would force this kind of thing, right? This is, if others are afraid that your combat power will increase, you will do this, right? Nowadays, who still likes to see me like this? Before the protagonist did it, did he know he could survive? Are the people in Windhelm nice to the protagonist?

In fact, the contradictions in Lao Gun's story line can also be explained in the original world view. In the original world view, there is an event called Dragon Breaking or the Millennium Dragon Breaking. Dragon in Lao Gun is time itself, and Dragon Breaking is a problem with time itself. When Dragon Breaking occurs, all possibilities have occurred. For example, if three forces fight during Dragon Break, after Dragon Break ends, all three forces will win. For another example, a person has to decide whether to hit another person during the dragon break. After the dragon break is over, he neither hits nor hits the other person. Putting this on the Dragonborn can explain all the contradictions.

I want to complain, at the end of the volume, the people who insist on saving a city, whether they can run away or not, all depends on the author's trick in the end. No, buddy, the protagonist has only been practicing for a little over a month, and he still has a golden finger at this level. Can't he run away first and continue the snowballing, then resurrect him later?

After building a chapter on psychology. The protagonist after killing several robbery-murderers with lives on their hands: Woohoo, I'm a big bad guy.

I saved up a lot and planned to watch it all at once, but after a quick glance at the chapter titles, I realized something was a little ominous. When I came to the comment area, I found a lot of wailing, which made me a little confused now. Can anyone tell me what the bad chapters are? I'll see if I can skip this part ()

. . . I'm speechless You can take risks if you take risks, but can you stop thinking about so much nonsense? There are already a lot of protagonists, and there are so many descriptions of NPCs. The most important thing is that the plot does not move and does not advance at all. I think the protagonist is too idle. I will quickly create a boss and beat the protagonist. The protagonist will know what urgency and efficiency are, and know how to pursue strength.

Or maybe I didn't read enough, so I didn't see that the author was writing a double-standard virgin bitch. After all, I only saw Chapter 8 and I couldn't bear it anymore.

I have a feeling that Wu Chen looks very much like Jiang Yu, the protagonist of the previous game. What can I say, whether it is psychological activities or behavioral principles, I can actually see similar feelings? 😅 Okay, let me put it bluntly, the character of this protagonist is a bit weird. The author is indeed good at writing female protagonists...

Alas, poor Wu Chen has been driven crazy by Jiuyuan ever since he thought he could be anyone.

How to say it? I also saw him writing about Lance a few days ago, so I went in to take a look, and found that Lan Lansi had become a girl, which gave me a slap in the face, and then I found out that the protagonist seemed to be traveling in it now, right... Because the protagonist had done it by himself before and lost all his power, so I gave up on it. As a result, I didn't watch Ice and Fire. I don't know what the protagonist is going to do now, but... The first two slaps made me lose the motivation to continue reading.

No... Is this the end? I wasn't interested in Lance at first and wanted to keep him first, but ended up raising him to death?

Jiuyuan, please come back and write about Miss Su 😭