Doomsday Flood, I Build an Invincible Battleship

Chapter 30 is a bit abstract. I don't know what I'm struggling with. I don't want to take those ordinary people with me, and I don't want to kill the leader. Those ordinary people at the beginning also abandoned them as soon as they said they were abandoned. I don't know what I'm struggling with here. Those two bitch men and women before killed them whenever they asked. I don't know. What are you struggling with here? People are trying to steal your partner. Although you gave up later, you are so aggressive in the nose and face that you are not guarded. You have to take action before you get the gun. When you get it, you don't just fuck him, but he still counts. Is this person your brother or your father? The character image is too fragmented. After finding his wife, he changed instantly. Before, he was a self-interested ordinary person, abandoning civilians and stealing food and doing things casually. Killing people when asked. But after finding his wife, he instantly became a saint, right? And he actually shed tears. You learned from the pain and made up your mind secretly, can't you?

There is a particularly clever thing about this book. It just hangs and never explains why. This is good. Half-informed explanations and forced explanations are very disappointing.

You can't live without women 🙂

The heroine is the biggest failure, she is like a retarded person, she keeps yelling at her endlessly.

The female protagonist makes people want to curse, and the male protagonist's dog-licking behavior makes people speechless...

It's real food. The protagonist you wrote had a cheat to become such an idiot. How long did it take from the end of the world to meeting the checkered man? You are such a badass, but Hua Gezi is better than you? Okay, even if you have foreshadowing and people know about it before the end, just talk about your plug-in, can't you imagine that your own physical fitness is stronger? Everything relies on external forces. This plug-in of yours calls me the power of thinking, but you don't know how to think. It's really delicious

This is a romance novel disguised as a doomsday novel! It gave me goosebumps all over my body!

It's just an unclear love story. This is a post-apocalyptic novel, not an urban romance. When a girl makes you cry, she spends a lot of time decorating the room. She can't figure it out for those who are preparing to take a bath. I don't know what's important? It's okay if you don't upgrade your wings first. You just leave a few alienation points and go to fight zombies. There is no error tolerance. You can run away in the end. In the end, you are almost two alienation points away from upgrading the wings. It's okay to take risks, but you have enough escape routes. Have you left enough? The article also says that the protagonist is very hot and not clear-headed. A few years ago it was okay for you to write like this, but is it popular now that you can't understand it clearly? In your own life, would you, the author, be willing to spend hundreds of dollars on a trip, and then be stuck in the mountains unable to go back because you have no money, and you can still prepare enough money in advance? Moved to tears😅

Hey... It's so brainless... Brother, if you don't know how to write about contacts and cooperation, don't write about it. You have to force it.

As a result, you wrote this heroine and this emotional scene, and the toes and toes dug through the shoes 😐. Although I can still bear it, how can you retain people?

A ship with wings... It would be more acceptable if it were replaced with an engine and could fly big.

There are such awesome recommendations in the daily guide, why don't you cut the book? !

I have read a lot of doomsday articles, and most of the plots are plot stories that use the same template. When the apocalypse comes, the protagonist does not survive the apocalypse, but first finds a few women. There is no innovation at all. Also, in the apocalypse, the protagonist is persecuted by his girlfriend and is killed, reborn and comes back to pretend. X slaps his girlfriend in the face to take revenge, and then builds a shelter with pure material without any brains. After the apocalypse, he goes out on adventures and commits suicide crazily 😅 The above review is not about this book, because I haven't read it yet, so I just came to the book review area to read everyone's comments and complain. In fact, the theme of doomsday flood is quite good. First of all, the world will be flooded. Once the flood floods, all the underground shelters built by the rich will be destroyed. In the face of the doomsday flood, everyone will really be equal. The author can use his imagination to flood the world and turn the earth into a water ball. He can write about a giant and very fragile ice asteroid flying towards the earth from the depths of the universe. In order to protect itself, humans use nuclear weapons to explode the asteroid and then a large amount of ice enters. After entering the earth, the ice cubes melted into rainwater through the friction of the atmosphere, causing heavy rains all over the world. The rainwater submerged all the land. The remaining surviving humans tried their best to build ships. Countries can build floating mobile land, and private individuals can build their own ships to sail on the water. In fact, the plot can refer to the doomsday ark built by the country when the world was flooded in 2012. The sudden flood in 2012 required a fully enclosed ark. The plot of heavy rain slowly submerging the land can be based on the country building a large floating land platform. The protagonist obtains doomsday information in advance and secretly builds his own doomsday ark deep in the mountains. As for the funds, he secretly sells ship tickets to the rich just like in 2012. This is more interesting than a simple post-apocalyptic protagonist who competes with his neighbors in a battle of wits and courage to become the god of war in the community. In the later stage, you can write that the water ark is upgraded to a starship, and then flies away from the earth to find a planet more suitable for human survival.