Advance Branch Sword God

It is recommended to start with an orphan. Why do you think most novels have protagonists who are orphans? Advantages: The parents only treat the protagonist well and there is no dispute, and the protagonist is relaxed

It's my first time to write a book at Qidian. I don't understand anything. Please give me your guidance and understanding. I have written more than 10 million words outside. I think back to the first time I published a book at Qidian five years ago. I didn't understand anything and didn't sign a contract for more than 100,000 words. Now I finally have some writing experience, but it is also my first time to try Qidian and start from scratch. I hope you can give me more support, follow-up reading, recommendation tickets, monthly tickets, and please help! There is nothing I can do to repay everyone, but my hand speed, which I have developed over the years, is online. Once it is put on the shelves, it will be guaranteed to be 80,000 or 12,000 per day. Please support me!

The top picks in the college entrance examination are broken down, and then the talents are passed on to the next college entrance examination candidates? 😰

Why give a martial arts gym a name that has been played out for a long time? Is this ridiculous?

It's too abstract. Others come to the martial arts gym and spend money to take self-study classes.

Wu Dian overbearingly forces everyone to hand over secret books and then only spend money to practice with his authorization. This is very strange. If a race in a state of war behaves like this, it will be exterminated long ago, unless all martial arts have a demonic effect.

This is a basic logical problem. The number one scholar was cut into pieces and justly installed on a few people. Do you think a country like this will exist? No one is a fool.

The writing is a bit twisted, and some things are extreme. If you have a family member, write something sweet and interact more with your sister. Just rely on level ups to interact. Then after you level up yourself, the people next to you will follow you immediately. Either you have to show off and feel cool. It's no longer ten years ago. Internet articles are very voluminous. If it doesn't look good, it's just a waste of time. What you want to imitate is to get away, so start with priorities. Oppression. Release

It's reasonable at first, but when it comes to the martial arts, it starts to go wrong. It's understandable when you say that a martial arts school sells core skills to the martial arts hall for self-protection, but it's ridiculous to pay the martial arts palace. The martial arts is the unique competitiveness of each sect's martial arts school. All the martial arts methods need to be approved by the martial arts palace. So how competitive can this martial arts school be? This is digging into the roots of the martial arts school. At least the martial arts school must have the power to teach its core students the martial arts, otherwise everyone will go to the martial arts palace. Forget it, you can buy all kinds of martial arts in the martial arts hall anyway. What's even more outrageous is that the martial arts hall only has incomplete versions, not the complete version. So what is the difference between this martial arts hall and ordinary martial arts halls? The people in the martial arts hall don't work hard for this 🐷, everything else is okay. This place is simply explosive. It's like a company now sells its own unique patented technology and then has to pay others to use its own patent. Then why do others still want to cooperate with this company? It's simply outrageous.

The family's financial situation was pretty good before their parents died After their parents died, their family's financial situation plummeted? After their parents died, the whole family could only live on pensions? The family didn't have a dime of savings? My parents' monthly salary was all money? If nothing else, this was a drawback at the beginning Author, where did you write more than 10 million words? Written on a dog?

Is the coach just showing videos? No pointers?

After reading Chapter 11, the protagonist goes to a martial arts gym to be a coach, and then keeps practicing his own skills, letting those who have advanced skills to practice his own, and he still boasts about teaching students in accordance with their aptitude. What is the difference between this and the Douyin weight loss live broadcast? Those people are fools who have to spend so much money to watch this. If the author refutes me and says that there are other things that have not been written, then It's the author's problem; and you must leave this small place after the college entrance examination, and you have to write about the test of the disciples of the martial arts gym. According to the author, you join the martial arts gym to receive resources, and you will be rewarded later, but what can the martial arts gym in this small place help? If you have a golden finger, you have to be tied to this and you are invincible.

It's a bit unscientific. The top scorer in a country's college entrance examination is just a facade and a hope. Just die like this. If you look at us, the most chaotic country in the world, it is impossible for such a thing to happen openly.

A scarecrow is ruined. Chapter 3 is still the first level. There are still many people who have not participated in the assessment. There are at least 3-4 people who need to write about the core. There are another 10 chapters here.

🤔You all know that others want to know whether Wang Hui has sword heart, but you don't know how to remind them? You have done enough 😅 Without Wang Hui, it is not certain whether you could pay off the initial martial arts debt in one week 🤫

The author talks about why we need to pay people to patrol. Isn't this technology better than using robots?

Is it a point of view to practice quickly now? , Boring

The setting of a lawful tyrant, right😂

It was put on the shelves before I wrote any interesting plot. It is normal to send it.

I'm currently reading Chapter 6. I think the writing is okay and I can keep reading. I listen to books. The name of this martial arts school is Silver Sword. I always get into trouble when I hear it.

Too little vocabulary, always repeating: eyes shining, smile. Writing 1 Logic 4 The rhythm is a bit too slow and there are few interesting points. The supporting characters have some precognitive functions, especially the sprint class part. 1 The fluency is a bit poor, there are a lot of '''''''''''''''''' and ''some''. I suspect the author is in hydrology. 1 I can't write any emotions because my vocabulary is small. To promote the plot, it gives a double training. You have to practice the skills to worship the master. Generally speaking, it will promote the plot. It is too dull to watch. I am currently reading Chapter 10.