One Person Becomes a Clan

This setting is really good. Most people in the world of immortality are morally weak, so you can kill them at will. The heroine's character is also likeable, but she is a bit slow to reach base, like a ninja 😫 There are too few people to post reviews of this book. Every time I click on it, it's the same person. 😵 I feel uncomfortable if I don't click on it. It's even worse if I click on it. It's true.

I just started reading it, and I don't know why. I feel like I can't stand it. Is the writing style different?🤔 I've read a few more chapters and it's not bad. I'll continue reading🌹

Have you ever practiced immortality? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

To protect the last piece of paradise, Guan Guan has begun to copy his own books. I hope not to follow Guan Guan's old path.

I hope I won't miss your forty-year-old mature woman anymore.

Investigation object: "One Man Becomes a Family" - Male Protagonist - [Su Cheng] Investigation Result: [Physical Time Travel] Judgment Basis: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, investigates and records the time-travel situations of the time-travelers Occupation, aiming to let observers (that is, readers) in all the worlds know in advance the time travel situation of people traveling in this world, and volunteer to provide observers with fast time travel information query services If there are any mistakes, Wan Wang will correct me ——All Souls Feast Zhenjun Stay on January 29, 2025

Wen

I really like the books before you came to Qidian. After you came to Qidian, I don't know why the love scenes were written so casually. The heroine fell in love with the male protagonist without taking the initiative. I felt like a bulldozer in the two books of Qidian. It was very inexplicable, and the writing became a lot whiter.

Mei Ke, I am a loyal harem writer. I really hope harem writers rise. I have only read one of your books, the one in Cat, and the writing style is very good. But there seems to be no story or imagination. Basically, I write the plot step by step. It's okay to read one book, but I can't stand it after reading it. I don't mean to be critical. I feel that this book's score is not good or bad, which may be the reason. I would like to ask if some heroines can be streamlined in the next book. More to shape. Or change the subject. Of course it is very tasteless to ask others to do whatever they want. Because this is not an easy thing to do. The votes are all for you anyway.

The sect's spiritual veins are bound to a woman, which is really difficult to stretch. In addition, a woman appeared inexplicably. The protagonist travels through time and has no understanding of the world, and is completely unprepared for people's hearts. "The Dafa of absorbing energy" is used in front of others, which is really speechless. To put it simply, the protagonist looks like a dumbass, and I don't really like this kind of protagonist's character. However, the style, pace, and plot of this book are all very good.

The new introduction is good. Don't worry, everyone in Mei Ke's harem, it must be from qcqs 😁😁

Phoenix

The author said it has blue eyes, so that's what it should be

Fu

Don't worry, Meike's lightning protection is worth trusting

If it were a harem, I would consider giving this book a few monthly votes. I hope the author will consider it

I hope the heroine will have more beautiful mature women in their 30s and 40s!

It is suggested that it is best to balance the daily and combat scenes. As of now, I feel that the battles take up a little too much. Inserting some daily routines in the middle can also enrich the image of the heroine. Of course, there is nothing wrong with anything else. The lightning protection and heroine settings have always been trustworthy.

₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑Good-looking

Either on the way to fight or on the way to fight

Don't touch the battle anymore. The battles you write are just a bunch of stuff. Have you not learned any lessons after writing so many books? As a married woman, just write about female characters and Seese, and don't touch the fight.

There's a big problem with the heroine's character. From the analysis of the name, identity, personality, etc., The design is too unreal and ethereal, with almost no sense of reality. I think it would be better for the author to write more about the secular world in his next book, which can also limit your literary youth.

You really need to think carefully about the plot concept. The previous book "Yao Mo" was well written, so don't rush it.

I feel like the score of this book should be even better. Is it because of the subject matter that it will be restricted?

The plot of the witch has already reached the standard. Mei Ke, you are already quite famous in the field of harem literature, and you have satisfied many people within your comfort zone. There is no need to force yourself.

First, finish scattering flowers! Reading all the way from the beginning, I was filled with emotions. My favorite among Mei Ke's works is "The Demon Girl, Please Stay", and this one ranks behind the Demon Girl. Because I don't like the system setting that destroys the subjective initiative of the characters. Although it is much easier to write, it seems that it can be more inclined to describe the male and female protagonists, but in fact the exploration scope is narrow. Of course, this book, as always, continues the idea of ​​an emotional drama that can harmonize a big family, and it is a spiritual pastry that is specialized in healing social trauma. Therefore, Meike is a certified author here, with a guaranteed completion from beginning to end, so you can follow it without any worries. In terms of plot, because the male protagonist rarely fails or regains his place within two chapters, and has no tragic life experience or difficult experience, these so-called "tensions" of the ups and downs of the plot have lost their "troughs" at the source, and cannot highlight the peaks. If you want to learn from this, you can refer to the book I am reading (it may not be useful): "Are all the ex-girlfriends in the world?" " "Taoist Tuogu: Eternal Life Begins by Raising a Demon Girl" and "Ninth Young Master's Sword". The emotional scenes are also almost free of charge. The advantage is that it is smooth and there will be no big surprises. It is a good tranquilizer for readers who are hurt by the elbow of reality. The disadvantage is that for readers who are looking for the ups and downs of the plot but feel it is dull, they hope that the ups and downs of the emotional line will gain motivation for reading, and the lack of the emotional line will undoubtedly smooth out the ups and downs. Coupled with the serious homogeneity of the characters in the extended family in the later period, multiple characters seriously crowded out the space of the original characters (the author has tried to give equal appearances), resulting in the lack of a continuous plot that can stand up in the heroine's character creation.

Recommended by a friend, and also specially registered for Qidian subscription support. It's a wonderful thing to automatically subscribe every day and be the first to read it. Looking forward to mk's next pure love harem book 🤓

I've ordered them all, and I'll read the previous books later 🤓

Finished Spreading Flowers, looking forward to the next new book 😆

First, judging from your works, I guess they are all about Se Se, so if you can maintain this part, there won't be much of a problem. Second, if the length is between 1.7 Million and 2 million words, about 10 heroines will be enough. And it is estimated that there will not be too many with more than 3 million, because it needs a relatively strong plot and rhythm to support it. The witch should be more than 300, but there is still a problem with the middle rhythm. But overall it's still okay. The last thing is to increase daily interactions. The plot should grasp the main line and land smoothly. That kind of ups and downs battle is not your style. Not all Japanese comics are hot-blooded. Many of them are very interesting if they depict daily life well, especially if they are suitable for driving.