Admission to Hogwarts Begins with Receiving a Suicide Note

Because many authors don't like to write the protagonist's abilities and characteristics in the introduction, making it inconvenient for readers to filter directly, so I will briefly describe the plot I saw. We are currently reading Chapter 50. The protagonist has traveled to an artificial human with Nicoléme's bloodline, which was created by Nicoléme using the method of creating a villain in a bottle. Nicoléme created the protagonist in order to deal with the crisis of Voldemort's return. So the protagonist's plug-in is the alchemy taught by Nico and the alchemy similar to Fullmetal Alchemist developed by himself. At the same time, the protagonist's mother is afraid that the protagonist will be lonely when he goes to Hogwarts, so she also arranges for Fleur to be the protagonist's school companion and go to Hogwarts with the protagonist as a fourth-year transfer student. At the same time, the author added a suicide note left by another person who traveled back to 1970 and appeared in the mind of the current protagonist, telling Helena that there is a secret to quickly and stably becoming an Animagus, advancing the plot as a double main line. Then there are some complaints based on my personal subjective opinions, which are purely subjective opinions. 1. The protagonist's use of alchemy is more like the method in Fullmetal Alchemist, while the use of alchemy to create various magical props in Harry Potter is relatively rare (only one automatic translation lens made for Fleur appears in Chapter 50). I think this is actually a bit of a waste of alchemy in Harry Potter. 2. The protagonist's suicide note is actually written a bit strangely. The intended recipient of this suicide note should be the Hogwarts student who received his suicide note shortly after his death, because the suicide note states that if you want to know the secrets of Voldemort's immortality and power, you should go to Helena. Only students and teachers can enter Hogwarts casually, and the teachers can basically be accurate to their names except for the defense class teacher who is a senior, and it is not written to the protagonist, because the protagonist knows that his immortality is due to Horcruxes and his power is due to black magic. And the dead protagonist followed James through Hogwarts. But based on this premise, the suicide note begins with "The time I live in is 1970." The protagonist and God's perspective know that the author wants to say that the dead protagonist traveled back in 1970, but normally the dead protagonist should not write the time he wrote the suicide note in 1980? 3. The plot of arranging Fleur as a school companion is a bit awkward. The protagonist, a fourth-grade student, should be self-study at home, so he and Fleur basically don't know each other at all. In the last chapter, Nico just said to the protagonist, "You have a great mission to prevent this dark future!" It's completely impossible to see that Furong has any helpful role for the protagonist. Furong even doesn't know much English and needs the protagonist's help. I can understand that arranging a good-looking and popular original character as the female companion of the protagonist can provide positive emotional value to readers, but from the perspective of the story, this arrangement is unreasonable and a bit awkward. You can definitely use a more reasonable protagonist who went to school in Beaubaston before, and has a relationship with Fleur who is familiar with her. For example, she taught Fleur alchemy for a period of time, and Fleur took the initiative to apply after knowing that the protagonist went to Hogwarts. This is relatively more tactful. 4. From the current point of view (Chapter 50), the protagonist of 1970 has only direct impact on the present by taking away the Horcrux in the Room of Requirement. Other than that, there is almost no impact on what he did after traveling to 1970. The plot of the first part basically follows the original work. I feel that you are a bit weak as a time traveler. The last remaining small item is "Li Huo·Samadhi True Fire", which I won't list separately. This is purely subjective and a bit awkward. To sum up, this part of the complaint is purely subjective. I only express my opinions. It is not recommended to be used as a reference. If it is objective, it is recommended to read it directly.

It's over, I feel like I've spent a lot of time feeding myself to death again.

The parents are over 600 years old and the children are only 10 years old?