Eighty-Four Is the Age to Be Brave Enough to Win Three Armies!

There are no problems with the plot in the previous chapters. The plot and sense of immersion are excellent. The problem lies in that after chapter 18, the preparation time is too long, and the preparation is still carried out until chapter 22. The tension of the plot begins to be insufficient (there is no sense of crisis after entering the military camp, and the early sense of crisis is not enough to support such a long preparation), and a new crisis or conflict is not established in time to start the plot again The author has good writing style and good character creation with tension, but some insufficient control of the rhythm leads to problems in the plot... Come on, author!

I just became an officer Protagonist: How can I be considered a general? I have a big house, so what's wrong with how many maids I need? Hey hey hey... What's going on outside the door? The boy outside the door: Thirty years in Hedong and thirty years in Hexi... The maid inside the door: Do you want me to serve a man who can be my grandfather? I'd rather die head-on.

If you are over eighty years old, if you can walk freely, you are in good health.

In ancient times, if you had no money or ability, it would be unrealistic for you to live to be 84.

Why do you have to roar in every chapter? War Cry Old Man vs. Rich Family Nobles

In ancient times, if there was no money or power, the grass on the 84 graves would be several feet high.

He is eighty-four and has no wife. Does the author Lao Deng have a wife? How about not sending you one? Shunfeng free shipping! Then how about writing a wife for an eighty-four-year-old man?

As long as you don't regain your youth before the middle and late stages, I'm here to see Lao Deng.

When I saw the label "Pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger", I didn't even have the desire to click on it. Have you seen it? Can you get into it?

I joined the army at the age of 84, which is against the odds.

Liu Bang was forty-eight when he started his army Su Shi was forty when he was talking about being a teenager 84 is too much for your protagonist

Lao Dengwen is still interesting because of his online IQ, but what the hell is the hot-blooded Lao Deng in this profile? Will IQ still exist?

Save money to feed your 120-year-old parents with prepared meals, help your 60-year-old son rent a sewer near the subway, and earn tutoring fees for your 30-year-old grandson.

I am afraid that Master once said: At seventy, you should follow your heart's desires without going beyond the rules. I want to tell the world that as long as a strong person has cultivated to the age of seventy or above, no matter what he does, he can make those who make the rules dare to be angry and dare not say anything!

The writing style cannot be said to be bad, but the writing style is very strange and the pace is a bit slow. It is obviously a very enjoyable killing, but it just feels a bit sloppy.

The character is Huang Zhong, the template is Zhang Jiao, and the era is the late Sui Dynasty.

It's not easy to see the author's name

Extraterrestrial demon? Or is Lao Deng reincarnated?

If you want to feel good, feel it as low as possible. If you don't want to feel good, press it down a little bit.

If there is no resurrection, it will be too disturbing. Don't pretend to be cool, it's just like Jian Daoxing and Jian Lai. It doesn't matter how you put on a face, it's annoying.

Although the spear has an advantage over other weapons in terms of distance, in war, the spear should mainly rely on the formation. If the formation is broken and the less is used to hit more, the sword may not have the advantage. Just like Zhao Zilong, seven in and seven out of Changbanpo uses a green steel sword. It is better for the protagonist to learn a sword or sword technique while learning the spear. Of course, if the author does not want to create a desperate situation, then pretend that I did not say it.

From Douyin, the writing is great and the video is great too

It looks good, update soon, don't be lazy ❤️

Update

The protagonist is supposed to have been practicing boy kung fu for more than 80 years. Who can rival him?

It's well written, with plot, imagination, polished writing, and a powerful battle of wits.