Dungeon Life: Start with Skill Mutation

It can be seen that the author spent time and energy writing the novel. What I put forward here is also immature. I hope the author will not take offense. Armor stacking completed. It's verbose, very verbose. If the verbosity described in the previous chapters can be said to be detailed, the battle scenes are really verbose. First of all, I think the text is rhythmic, and close combat is short and fast. If it's like Ximen Chuixue's sword coming from the west, flying immortals from the sky, you can start talking about the artistic conception. If it's like Dragon Ball, which hits from the sky to the ground, you can open a third perspective and let the supporting characters stand aside to explain. The knife you threw pierced the dog demon's spine. Not to mention that the knife was not a gun, and the weight was uneven. If it was thrown, it would spin even if it hit the bones. After missing the point, I still have to say that dog monsters are also mammals. It's like the animation progress of Gin Damn caught up with the progress of the manga and the animation team made a roundabout plan to make Gin Sang cosplay as Kakarot to make up for the duration, and the description jumped from a hot-blooded manga to a funny manga. It's nonsense. Also, when fighting closely, it is best to keep the camera perspective in the first-person perspective of the protagonist. Just like in the comics, add a close-up of the dog demon's eyes, and the figure of the protagonist rushing towards him is reflected in the eyes. Even the figure of the protagonist can be slightly distorted like a mosquito's perspective to illustrate that the hero is sprinting so fast that the dog demon cannot react effectively. However, all this should be seen by the protagonist. After the close-up of the eyes, the idea of ​​jumping the dog demon will greatly interrupt the rhythm of the battle. And the interruption was very uncomfortable.

There are so many things to write in one exam, so just stop copying and keep taking exams until you are number one in the world.

It's normal, tasteless, too much self-exaggeration, and the writing is long-winded. An individual author can handle a 200,000-word content with 100,000 words. Writing depends on the preferences of most readers. Too much self-exaggeration is not good for the performance of the novel.

People are ruthless and don't talk much

Front row, I hope the outline won't flow in the end

It's been more than fifty chapters and I haven't finished fighting in the ring yet. It's too boring.

The plot of about 10 chapters was written into more than 20 chapters. Even the map is in a village. It's true. . . . I came here to read it because I have already achieved some results. How could you possibly retain people after you just wrote chapter 20? I can't even imagine it even if I'm a subscriber.

It feels a bit forced, and the first plot is written like a game. Then there was the assessment where the feeling of pretentiousness became more obvious.

I don't know what the author was thinking, and I don't know the results very well, but the plot is clearly well written. If you are not famous, it will be difficult to become popular in the early stage. And although the previous book was said to be finished, it was actually unfinished. It's a bad character in itself, don't count on the popularity of the previous book to bring you many people. And this book has just started, just been put on the shelf, and you are gone. The second copy is the plot you just started, and you are gone. How do you get others to believe you in the next book?

Keep it level, the grass jelly will hopefully!

I'm here to read a new book. I hope this one has more writing 😁

I came here to read the new book. I hope I can continue writing it.

Recommended by a big sniper

I am an old friend who has followed from the last book, looking forward to the wonderful story of this book 🤭🤭🤭

It's a pity that it's only the third one. Come and see what your new book is like.

Hey, I saw Chapter 6. Realizing one thing, it stands to reason that the protagonist has a skill, and it is not weak (as for whether this skill [referring to entering the dungeon, another mutant skill is estimated to be unique] only the protagonist has is currently unclear), and the protagonist's father runs a martial arts school, and his income is probably not low. From this point of view, the protagonist only needs development time to become a strong person, so he should wisely withdraw from those assessments (after all, it seems to be of no use, or the harm far outweighs the benefit), and save his life and develop insignificantly. And I saw that the title of the later chapter also contains the plot of the assessment, and I don't know why. So can anyone tell me the reason? I will choose whether to continue reading depending on the situation.

The supporting characters on the opposing side are very smart and cautious, can you believe it? !

I really hope the author changes the title of the book. After all, 99% of books in xxx: xxxx format are the same thing. When I see the title, I lose the desire to read it.

Isn't this great? Isn't this okay?

I feel like it's enough to gain one or two skills and equipment in a world! It's a bit invincible at the beginning

Compared with the previous book, the author's skill has improved visibly. 15 Monthly passes are given.

Although the plot is slow, it has a visual feel and feels like watching an anime. The main and supporting characters are all plump and have online IQs. It is a good book and the author's writing is delicate. I guess it must be very tiring to write the effect and the number of updates will not be too high. The title and introduction of the book are a bit stretched, and I almost missed the food.

The writing is pretty good. Although it's a bit cliché, the design is well written. It's a pity that it was cut.

I feel that the fantasy stream is too homogeneous, and innovation is still needed. I feel that the author still has some requirements for performance, so he should be more determined.