Lord of Calamity

It can 🙂 have a messy beauty, I obviously feel that my mental state is not right, but there are bright spots from time to time The author's mental state should be fine Vote three monthly votes to support it

The story is quite attractive, and some of the ideas are good. However, some of the transitions between the plots are not handled well. It seems that a few sentences are missing, which makes the reading a bit incoherent and confusing.

The ideas and plot are good, but the writing is not up to par, and the structure is even worse. No matter the characterization, the scenes and the plot are too dry, it looks very fragmented. Looking forward to the completion of the refinement🙂

I started reading from the first chapter. Compared with the book I read before, there are not many problems. That person only writes some gimmicks and blocks the plot every day, and bans readers for 50 years at every turn. It is really disappointing. Because I am a new author, I think I should be more understanding and tolerant. Angry Banana said that words are the carrier of imperfect thinking. As long as you write what you want to write and treat others with sincerity, you will have more and more readers along the way of writing. Come on! {"TopicId":"995701360950116352","TopicName":"Amway Famous Scene"}{"TopicId":"1104899576739856384","TopicName":"Angry Banana"}

. . What can I say? Many of the characters in it are like being possessed by a halo of mental retardation. . For example, Lao Wei, who has been able to seek good fortune and avoid evil for so many years, only knows how to hide here and there without thinking of asking for help. You can't fight monsters and you can't even act as a prompt for others. The same goes for Su Ziqing, what kind of idiots are your two subordinates? Don't you have any idea? How dare you make promises to others? Isn't your role positioned as an elite? You have no brains. . You might as well go straight to the stereotype. It's too awkward to look like neither up nor down now.

It's interesting. When I clicked on the first chapter, I saw the plot of eating buns with the outer packaging, which made me laugh out loud. This book is crazy.

Not bad, I feel like I need to grow my brain

Not bad. This book is a bit crazy.

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You guys who write supernatural stories like to dig holes.