Strangeness Is Coming: I Became an Immortal by Myself

People talk about the feelings of family and country every day, which really makes people dislike it. Even if you are not a master, it is better than being a dog.

1. The writing is first-rate 2. The narrative level is clear 3. The character description is detailed and not procrastinating 4. The word count is not bad, the plot is tight and orderly 5. I am a 19-year-old bookworm, and I am guaranteed to eat books. Brothers, come and start dinner! ! ! !

The writing is really good, but Zhang Xuan deceives people to save the monk, which is a bit poisonous and disgusting to watch. The protagonist is portrayed as a good person at the beginning, and this is suddenly inserted in the back. The impression is particularly bad. At least for me, the protagonist cheating innocent people is a poisonous point. I don't know about other people.

Is this how you use omniscience?

Some reviews are too exaggerated. This book is above the standard and you can read it without being so exaggerated.

This slowness is too much. I saw that it was still selling the Krypton Life Spell on the shelves. I have not started cultivating immortals and have no aura.

It's suspenseful in the omniscient story, it's funny

After three chapters, it feels like it was written by a different person.

The writing of Wu Li Tou is very good, but I suggest you either follow the whole story of Mu Su Su as Wu Li Tou, or don't touch it Chapter 3 The master comes back from the dead, and the second senior brother whistles. . . Do you think this is a plot that adults can watch? Either write it like this throughout the story, or don't touch it.

The part about deceiving people to save the monk is a bit toxic. It feels contrary to the character and not in line with the identity of a heavenly master. It feels very tearing.

Personally, I feel like it's a bit of a show-off.

Damn it, the writing is so damn good, I read it in one sitting, it's not satisfying or satisfying.

Why do you live alone with three wives and four concubines? Can't we have fun together?

It's understandable to limit omniscience, but the book is so restrictive that it's uncomfortable to read.

Chapter 95: Why are you still lingering in the mortal world? How many times will the protagonist use the sand and mud of the mortal world to cultivate immortality? Slipping away

In addition to the layout that needs to be improved, this book's plot rhythm, characterization, and foreshadowing are all remarkable. I have been a bookworm for ten years and I will not regret reading it 🤭🤭🤭

It's so damn good-looking, the writing is excellent, the plot is very interesting, the characters are very distinct, and the logic is smooth. It's very good so far. I gave a reward of 100 RMB. I highly recommend you to read it.

This routine is really old and hopeless. It adds a little weird element that has been popular recently. It is essentially the same old fairy tale novel. If you just try to read it, at least it will not reduce your intelligence. It is already good.

It feels so cloudy and foggy, so uncomfortableπ_π

Dear book friends, it is really important to read every day. Please save the poor author, thank you!

From the beginning to the point where the identity of the protagonist is revealed, there are more than 300 chapters, which can be regarded as enough climax and reversal. It is not clichéd or inconsistent. It is really awesome plus for such a long time, but it is also a bit worrying. From then on, with the addition of the senior sister, the identity and combat power of the protagonist and the enemy suddenly feel like it is going to skyrocket. Can the author grasp it?

Nowadays, singing is also about love, movies are about love, and festivals are also about love. What's the point? Love and love will only affect the drawing of swords. Don't be invisible and intangible fairies. I want to see rivers of blood. Killing my sister proves it.

Is there a female protagonist in this book? Is she a single person?

I've been following the book since it opened, but recently I haven't found it to be as engaging as before. I originally wanted to wait and see if the follow-up would be better, but I couldn't keep up with the book, so I couldn't hold it back anymore. After I wrote about killing the ghost golden sheep, the pace obviously accelerated. Why didn't it look good? I think the reason is that the characters in the early stage are flat, the new characters in the later stage cannot stand up, and the environment suddenly changes and lacks a sense of substitution, so whether it is pretense or the battle plot, it cannot attract people. 1. The characters in the early stage are flat. In the early stage, the author created many attractive characters with strong personalities and backgrounds, which are like hooks to attract readers. For example, the monk, with his painful past and inheritance, was supposed to shine when the Gray Fairy came. But now, he has been reduced to a warrior-like role. Although the senior brothers introduced the past, they lacked a personal branch. Even the senior sister who came with her did not make people feel what her character was. There are countless such characters. It is obvious that we can dig deeper, and readers are also looking forward to digging deeper, but as they are written, they become tool people. 2. The new character did not stand up. I can understand that in the new chapter, there will be a lot of new characters, but the Gray Fairies are like flat villain templates, killing people one by one. Their terror is not exaggerated, and the protagonist does not feel any sense of satisfaction when killing them. And for a character like Shangguanjing, because she has no standing, it is understandable that the author wants to use the heart of a female character to create a sense of satisfaction. However, because Shangguanjing lacks personal events, readers are very unfamiliar with her. What does the heart of a stranger mean to us? 3. The environment has changed, but there is a lack of corresponding description. At the beginning, the author wrote about Southern Xinjiang. After the arrival of the Gray Fairy, Southern Xinjiang changed drastically. But this kind of change only exists in the author's mind. The reader's feeling is, I know you have changed after writing, but I have no sense of involvement. To sum up, this is the reason why I can't read it. Between individuals, for discussion.

Did the author write a physical book? The writing, outline, and detailed description are all very strong. Except for sometimes showing off his skills in writing the fighting scenes frame by frame, it made me have the illusion of watching two episodes of Slam Dunk shooting one three-pointer in two episodes when I was a child. The character portrayal is a bit deliberate, but the flaws are definitely not hidden. If you polish the foreshadowing echoes and the explosive techniques of the Internet article, it will be a masterpiece. Overall, it looks good. I don't understand it if it's not popular.

No, why is it limited and free?

I subscribed for a few chapters, but suddenly I couldn't stand it anymore. There were too many companions, and I kind of wanted to watch "The Enemy of the World" kill everyone on sight.

At present, it seems that the main plot now is to kill the Gray Immortal and save his friends. Will the line between monks and yin sects be drawn out?

The writing is quite good, but the author keeps updating one update every day without adding any additional updates. When the plot is exciting, it takes 3 to 4 days, which is four updates, to read the climax of the chapter. Once or twice is fine, but it happens every time. It takes only 3 to 4 days to read the climax of the chapter. You have to wait two to three days to finish updating the climax plot. It's the kind of thing where when you reach the climax, you suddenly stop. It's too many times, and you're jumping to watch it. When it's time to update more, don't update it as soon as it reaches the climax. What's the point of having to wait another two to three days?

Where was the ancestral corpse in the Thousand Barriers dungeon before?