Eerie Descent: I Become an Immortal on My Own

People talk about the feelings of family and country every day, which really makes people dislike it. Even if you are not a master, it is better than being a dog.

1. The writing is first-rate 2. The narrative level is clear 3. The character description is detailed and not procrastinating 4. The word count is not bad, the plot is tight and orderly 5. I am a 19-year-old bookworm, and I am guaranteed to eat books. Brothers, come and start dinner! ! ! !

The writing is really good, but Zhang Xuan deceives people to save the monk, which is a bit poisonous and disgusting to watch. The protagonist is portrayed as a good person at the beginning, and this is suddenly inserted in the back. The impression is particularly bad. At least for me, the protagonist cheating innocent people is a poisonous point. I don't know about other people.

Is this how you use omniscience?

Some reviews are too exaggerated. This book is above the standard and you can read it without being so exaggerated.

This slowness is too much. I saw that it was still selling the Krypton Life Spell on the shelves. I have not started cultivating immortals and have no aura.

It's suspenseful in the omniscient story, it's funny

After three chapters, it feels like it was written by a different person.

The writing of Wu Li Tou is very good, but I suggest you either follow the whole story of Mu Su Su as Wu Li Tou, or don't touch it Chapter 3 The master comes back from the dead, and the second senior brother whistles. . . Do you think this is a plot that adults can watch? Either write it like this throughout the story, or don't touch it.

The part about deceiving people to save the monk is a bit toxic. It feels contrary to the character and not in line with the identity of a heavenly master. It feels very tearing.