I Turned the Aloof Vatican Saint into a Fanatical Believer

One minute, the protagonist thinks that the waiter cannot look at the screen of his mobile phone. This beautiful heroine is his wife. The next minute, the male colleague who works with him sees the heroine in the bathroom on the mobile phone screen. He also writes that the colleague is surprised that the heroine is so beautiful. . .

The first time I saw him, he was raised as an electronic girlfriend as a villain. In other words, if he was raised as a villain, it would not be considered a bad deed.

I'm a little disappointed after reading chapter 30. There is too little interaction between the protagonists, and the nun from another world can be abbreviated. You can write a story but don't write it in such detail. If you write like this, it's better for the protagonist to travel through the past and take risks, and the protagonist actually receives the things in the game, and doesn't do experiments. If it can be done, this is equivalent to a cheat, if it doesn't develop immediately. I don't know if otherworldly adventures can still retain people now. As a novel reader of fifteen years, I don't have much patience anymore. Since you want to write a novel about Lezi people, don't hammer here and there. The completion of this alien heroine can bring reality back to reality, and then there are so many female characters in film and television dramas waiting for her. The originality is good, but it is not useful. It depends on time and age.

The Saint of the White Flag Country and the Saint of Britannia create a Saint from another world 🙂🙂🙂

By Chapter 10, the male protagonist has almost disappeared. I almost don't know whose perspective I should read this novel from. The female protagonist's perspective? The author could actually write a group portrait article, or change the introduction and directly switch to a group portrait direction. When writing group portraits in the future, remember to describe the protagonist first, otherwise it will lack a sense of involvement.

After reading thirty chapters, you might as well not want the male protagonist. The male protagonist's role is less than 1/10

This protagonist is so pure, a pure diaosi

The protagonist is a bit perverted and I doubt the author's mental state.

The male protagonist has no role at all except as a deus ex machina. If the reader's perspective is that of the male protagonist, then there is no need to be so detailed in the book's long adventure in another world and the turbulent power struggle. It is better to write about the man's mechanical deity and how to win the favor. The male protagonist is changed to stay at home, the game is automatically downloaded on the computer, the field of view is opened by himself, and the settings of the live broadcast are in front of him, which can be used as a reference. I came to see the beautiful girl🙂

If we could see Jeanne's evil fall quickly, many people would watch it.

In fact, I am not interested in the reality part. Writing like this will easily lead to collapse, but the world in the mobile phone is still quite good.

Too many elements! Just the name! 🤫

It is not an online contract and needs to be mailed, so the signing will be delayed. The successful signing will probably not appear until Friday or next Monday.

Respect the lovely author, you are one of my works (100 new book signings) statistics, please work hard to survive until the end!

Author, have you paid the fees?

With the help of you Shennong, I decided to remove this book from the bookshelf. 🙂

Are there any similar novels where the heroine is helped through an electronic screen?