Controlling the Beast, but the System Got the Timeline Wrong

I don't know why, but the novels I've read recently are all bland, too detailed and boring, and not enough fun.

Got the latest chapter. Looking at it, I have the same feeling, less refreshing. The contents of Xue 50's books are relatively bland, even a little depressing, and are more suitable for book lovers who like slow reading and relaxed reading.

Schools assume that teachers sell addictive drugs to students that are difficult to quit, and cultivate addicts under the pretext of increasing their strength. Even if the United States is not so crazy, being destroyed by the evil god may still be a good thing.

This book has shortcomings and advantages. I feel that the old author's writing style is pretty good, at least fluent. It should be a source of food. The disadvantage is that the protagonist's family has to raise a child in poverty, and the child is contracted to the outside world. It seems that the little green snake with low potential is not ready to repent in time. The protagonist clearly stated that they do not want the Yalong bought at a high price, and they agreed in their hearts, but the Yalong was not recycled (to recover the loss) There is also potion, which is sold openly by a slightly addictive teacher. After the protagonist's parents bought this high-priced potion, they discovered his addiction, and knew that their son would not drink it and did not return it. The world view is relatively depressing. The world is written as a place where people fight for money, and there are risks involved in fighting for money. My suggestion to the author is that the little green snake felt too defeated at the beginning. He should have written a pre-sale that looked good to the outside world, and then cultivated it to a higher level through golden fingers, instead of the current old plot that is a bit pretentious. And the author needs parents to confess to their children in a timely manner. Little Green Snake has already written it and cannot change it, so let parents discuss it with their children and use all resources. In the eyes of the outside world, for the time being, the little green snake has been piled up to two stars. In the eyes of the outside world, it is regarded as a transitional pet to solve the problem of pretentiousness and slap in the face. In addition, we must return the Yalong pets and potions that we bought at a loss in the early stage to recover the losses, and train the little green snake with all our strength Of course, we must have fun as soon as possible, advance the plot, and write down the advantages of the little green snake over other peers because of the protagonist. My evaluation of this book is that the writing style makes these small blocking points written by the author temporarily covered up. Therefore, if the author does not change it, it can be read without thinking. If the author makes some slight modifications to the subsequent plot changes, it will be a good pre-sale article.

Even if your parents have resources, why don't you use them? Are you here to deliberately raise your son in poverty? It's enough to start normally, you have the resources to be as good as if both parents were dead, and your pet has a certain bloodline, and then you tell the reader that the pet's talent is very poor...

I completely don't understand the thoughts of the protagonist's parents. They have pretended to be a gambler for more than ten years, pretending to be poor to save money to lay a foundation for their children. It's really a tadpole with a frog tattooed on its back. You're showing off your mother. Just pretend to be poor in a serious way. Pretend to be a gambler, but your son's credit is completely overdrawn. As a result, your son won't discuss anything with them. Now they do something good, such as getting some supplements, which in the eyes of the protagonist is called the prodigal son turning back (questionable version). To put it bluntly, the protagonist doesn't believe them at all, or he doesn't believe that dog gambling will change his evil ways. They haven't fully explained it yet. So is it so difficult to just pretend to be poor instead of just pretending to be a gambler?

After reading so many pictures, the author's idea seems pretty good, but there are two points I have to complain about, that is, the combat power and lifespan settings are too outrageous First, the combat power. You are a pet beast with extraordinary strength. The initial combat power description feels that it can't beat people. The combat power has few levels, but 0 stars can seriously injure 5 stars. What's more, the pet beasts have evolved to four or five stars and only live thirty or forty years? Long-lived dogs can live almost 20 years!

Seeing that the biggest poisonous point at present is that the whole world is tacitly borrowing money to cultivate, what the hell is distorting the economic view, cyberpunk wearing the skin of the beast, right, the end product of the beast, right?

The book is okay overall, but it has too many flaws. The heroine is a drag, troublesome, withdrawn, and has a flawed character. I don't see the advantages. How did she become the heroine? The male protagonist is a rag collector. Can't she be more normal? She is not a green plum, and there is no climax of emotional entanglement. She is just a passerby. Now she becomes the heroine. She got together with the male protagonist. This is too unreasonable. Abandoned😅😅😅😤😤😤

The book is good, and the writing is also great. The only problem is that the so-called poverty-stricken family is raised by parents. Isn't this really a good thing? It's really a good-hearted person who doesn't regard parents as enemies. And in the end, what qualifications does a poor and well-off family have to be so-called poor family?

Like the title says, it would be better for both of these parents to die, and the school clearly knows that the setting they don't know is to go against the will of heaven?

How is your plot progressing? It's almost 200 chapters. How many days has passed since the plot? The 200 chapters of other books must have at least passed the early stages. You are still wandering around in Novice Village after writing this book. Do you expect this book to last you forever?

It feels like cheating, and you have to cheat but you can't open it up too much, so you add a lot of external circumstances. The parents who are addicted to gambling still pretend to be poor, so it's better to really gamble and make a complete counterattack. It feels like common beast-control novels have added very weird things, but the author's writing style can still be read smoothly and disgustingly.

This book is interesting, but not interesting enough. The 190,000 words and 86 chapters cover the period from the protagonist's awakening to Su Hui to the eve of the college entrance examination, less than half a year or even two months. I deeply suspect that this book will suffer from the extreme old problem of this writing method. The opening plot is infinitely prolonged and the protagonist's strength development is infinitely slow. One star is given here and there, and everything is written down to one star and two stars. Then three stars, four stars, five stars, six stars, and even nine stars are taken in one stroke and the chase finally reaches the finale.

In any case, selling addictive drugs, even potentially addictive drugs, is unacceptable to me.

There is no heroine, at least not this heroine. Even if you replace it with your rich store manager, your results will be much better. First of all, this heroine and the protagonist have no interaction before, except for buying pet beasts. But the store manager communicated a lot with the protagonist and even invested in the protagonist Secondly, the heroine did not help the protagonist much, and she was not written so beautifully that she could be used as a vase. What was your starting point for writing this heroine?

This family setting looks uncomfortable

Hey, the prince asked the protagonist to give up Xiaoqing to his younger brother. The pet beast can be traded. Then wouldn't it be stupid for the protagonist's parents to spend money to open a second contract for the protagonist because the protagonist contracted a low-level pet? They just terminated the contract.

Not bad, but let the protagonist know the true situation of his parents quickly. I feel a little sick every time I see it.

I picked up this book on Daodu at the beginning and read dozens of chapters before giving up. Even though it's limited and exempt, I still can't chew it. Although lone wolf protagonists are a big trend, group portraits have a wide audience, and skin-changing romance novels also have a large audience, but this book doesn't touch on any of them. It's basically just a futuristic, micro-Tang daily novel. The heroine is just a random passerby who has no outstanding contribution. Her only role is to help the author with settings.

I'm speechless. Someone caught this and started trolling the screen. (The malicious screen spam has been cleared) I write about timelines and beast control. Paired with a dragon pet to look taller, this is not the Dragon of Time. This kind of dragon is not created by anyone. Put it at the starting point, a bunch of people have written about it. What I am writing about now is a snake, which has not yet evolved into a dragon. —— As for the poor support design. I watched the movie "Catch a Baby" starring Shen Teng as a poor son in 2024, and I drew inspiration from this. Mainly used to create family contrast and increase interest. The economic debt is set too high. I plan to revise it back during the Spring Festival so that the protagonist's family economy can meet the position of being about to fall out of the middle class —— I have set a fan value threshold. If you don't like reading it, don't make it difficult for yourself and change a book. Welcome to give serious suggestions and discuss the plot. If you say that my setting up a poor family is unreasonable and disrespectful, I understand. I have written it all. As long as there are no flaws in the logic chain, so be it. But trolls who scold for the sake of scolding are not welcome. After the troll finished cursing, he felt happy and left, leaving a pile of chicken feathers on the ground.

PK at the same time, please continue to read. Students who can't help but read books can save their money until Wednesday to read it. The update time is tentatively scheduled at 11pm and before 0pm. It is expected to be available at the end of February. It will also be updated during the Chinese New Year, and I will work hard to save it.

Every time I practice and improve, there are a lot of people. As soon as we arrived at the competition site, it turned out to be a wild dog on the roadside. You can imagine the combat power of our current China and the China of 50 years ago. You will have no shortage of resources when you get to university. In the end, they did this to me. Hurry up and crush the few pet beasts you originally had and practice again.

Hope is an illusion

It looks good, you must keep writing it to the end 🤭 Describe images and have rich imagination. The arrangement of the heroine is also very interesting. The heroine cannot live without the hero, and the hero also needs the heroine.

Why are recent updates so much slower than before?

It's good to read. I'll slowly add to the book. I hope the author will continue writing. I like the little couple, they're so cute.

There is just one thing. I would like to remind the author that the word "beast" and "Jiao" are put together and it will cause trouble. I don't know if it can be changed. The author should try to pay more attention to it later. I will give you four monthly passes. Come on, come on! 👏

The author who can die during the game is really a genius. Let me ask you something. Will the referees in this best empire arena be weak? Small clerks like your parents can reach five stars. Isn't it okay for people to reach seven stars?