He Has Become the Leader of the Secret Cult and Said This Is Hogwarts.

So is there any secret teaching behind it? I had no problem being a professor before, but then you said that the Ministry of Magic took advantage of the protagonist's absence to brainwash the protagonist's secret cult, and a year of hard work was in vain. What did you say I came to see?

I thought it was creating a secret cult in London and remotely influencing the plot. The plot of occasionally going to Hogwarts to show off. The first few chapters were pretty good. Later, he went straight to Hogwarts to become a professor and re-invented the secret sect.

It's a very strange feeling. It's a bit like a secret book, but it doesn't have the full feeling. It's a bit like behind the scenes, but it doesn't have the excitement behind the scenes. It doesn't have the same flavor as a college story. The changes to the real-life plot of Harry Potter are also very bland. I don't know where the point of the plot is. The feeling after reading it is that every time I can't get to the point where I want to feel good. I just feel that I am about to get to the point where I want to feel good, but in the end, it just passes by insipidly. It's not the kind of frustration that makes him feel happy but he doesn't feel happy anymore. It's a dull feeling that I don't know where the fun is at all.

It feels like I've used too much force, it's too deliberate.

The current problem with this book is that the main character is too thin, and Pig's Knuckle is just the plot driver. It's the same with or without him, and it feels very bad to follow it.

I thought I was going to set up a church, but I didn't expect it would be a one-person abortion.

It feels like the protagonist has done a lot of things, but nothing. The plot is still the same as it was in the original. At first, the protagonist founded the Secret Cult. He thought it was through the Secret Cult and Si Chen preaching in HP to cause trouble. Later, he suddenly went to find Harry and attracted Dumbledore. Then he suddenly opened a new class and was recruited to be a professor. He only mentioned the secret cult he founded, and the members All memories were erased by the Ministry of Magic. Professor Liu? No, it didn't mention much about the protagonist teaching esoteric knowledge. Even if he taught it to others, it would not have any impact on the plot. Of course, the above is just my personal opinion. After all, it is only a few chapters, and the plot may not have unfolded yet...

The protagonist's weak strength leads to a weird feeling that seems to advance the plot but seems to have nothing to do with the protagonist. Even if he defeats the great enemy Voldemort, there is no sense of satisfaction. I hope to improve the protagonist's strength. As the leader who is won over by Si Chen, the enemy must be summoned and invisible. The protagonist is still using a gun, which is too abrupt in the world of magic.

So beautiful, take a breath of the light in your skull

Shock me and release Detective Douglas.

I keep pressing down on the protagonist, which makes me feel a little frustrated.

Don't just follow the plot and write something of your own, otherwise it will be boring to watch.

Speaking of which, the content of the Secret Cult will still be included in the Book of Si Chen. In fact, I feel that the Book of Si Chen is more suitable for being a fan of Harry Potter than the Secret Cult.

Writing about Hogwarts and Cryptozoism is a sight to die for, the two completely incompatible atmospheres. The last one was a hit, and your writing in this one is getting worse and worse. That's really funny.

We call on the night watchman to illuminate the way forward for this book.

This author's writing is bad and he doesn't listen to advice.

I thought it was the kind with a distorted world view style, similar to Emiya next door

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If you become a professor in the name of a esoteric sect, will people who come here for esoteric sects like to think that you are just a professor? Where has your secret teaching gone?

I'm here to comment again, and I just want to say, author, can't you write a little more about the protagonist's appearance in front of people, and the time is longer, so that people around him will say wow, the protagonist is awesome, and the protagonist is unfathomable, can't you write more about the psychological activities of admiration? You make me feel better

The author gave me an accurate letter, what happened if the book I raised is gone?

If it doesn't work, just switch to another book. Obviously this subject matter is not good. Although I like esoteric subjects, most people can't understand it. I give you all the votes I can, but I still hope that the author can achieve good results. We don't have that much energy and can't give You can just reward me with a thousand dollars. I know you promised before that you would finish writing, but I'm really afraid that you can't afford to eat 😭. It's not a big deal if you cut it. Really, if you want to change the platform and write again, just tell me and I will definitely go and support you.

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