All Heavens: Starting from the Substitute Messenger

No, when writing about fan time travel, don't write about those bad anime movies. The standard sea of ​​​​dead and alive and the hodgepodge of Marvel movies are a bit off-putting when you see them now. I think it's just a Jojo movie that I can watch. The most important thing is that there are a lot of fans who have written all the routines. If you try to write them forcibly, it will be a mess and there will be no sense of expectation. To be honest, it would be better to write about the parasitic beast, the great sword, and the red pupil.

This is still the story of Part 7. It's rare to see people doing this on this platform. But using JO7 to connect Naruto, Pirates, Dragon Ball and Marvel... Is too crazy. Without additional cheats, JO7 can only hold up a special continent even if it has complete control of the body. It is still aimed at the terrain and defense side. In actual combat, it cannot survive the multi-lateral explosion and this book It's too light to watch, the characters are too flimsy, the plug-ins are too limited, and the stand-in is too boring. The protagonist is currently a low-profile hot girl and a time traveler prophet, rounding it all off is a super low-profile Red King. Using this configuration to catch up with the world view of Gaowu is a bit self-defeating...

After seeing the Golden Wind, the author's writing style still hasn't made much progress. It's the same as a running account, and the protagonist's image is still similar to that of a small citizen, with no growth and enlightenment. The most important thing is that the writing is very messy, and there is no connection between the plots. Basically, he just writes whatever comes to mind, and one chapter is relatively watery. It can only be said to be a waste of starting coins.

What are the uses of the Infinity Stones? They are useless outside that universe. They are just the controllers of that universe.

Here's a suggestion: don't write about Dragon Ball when writing fanfics. Dragon Ball's combat power is too poor and will make it difficult to write about your subsequent battle system.

In the beginning, Touma Noro kept emphasizing destiny. I thought it was quite jojo-esque and I kept following it. I felt that the author's writing became average after that. In many places, I feel that the protagonist is quite stupid, so anything that can spin should be able to be used. Jero has been using that iron ball since he was a child, and he fights with it whenever he gets the chance. There is no need for the protagonist to carry a ball everywhere, even marbles should be fine. Fighting with marbles or shuriken bursts is more effective. The visual quality of fighting Su Nuo to make the ball bigger is really bad. There is also the setting of pulling people's souls to travel through battles together, and they will become tool men in the later stages. Moreover, writing with so many people fighting must be a mess. The protagonist already has a lot of abilities. If you add a bunch of others, you can't imagine what kind of chaos it will be in the future.

What the hell, especially the thief poison in the Blade Tooth chapter. The protagonist strives to regain the lost martial arts glory in the big arena. From Hanayama - Shibukawa - Motobu - Peak - Sabiga - Miyamoto Musashi, all the way to Yujiro, the writing is very good. But he was defeated when facing Yujiro. He said that he would rely on martial arts to defeat Yujiro and get back the glory that belongs to martial arts. But in the blink of an eye, he tried all his methods and couldn't hoax Yujiro. In the end, he used his stand-in ability and the soul of Miyamoto Musashi, who had been defeated before, to shake out to help. After defeating Yujiro with these, he began to say that this was a victory in martial arts. What the hell kind of plot is this? The avatar's attack methods can't be seen by the audience and can be used except for oneself, who knows it's not martial arts but NN. Miyamoto Musashi, why do you have so many nightmares? Can this be considered a victory in martial arts?

I would like to give you a small, very small suggestion. Don't write about Chinese comics. It is easy to die due to problems with the style of painting and readers. Don't write about anime that are too unpopular, otherwise you will think it is unpopular. Fans only look at creative novelty. As long as your creative novelty is attractive enough, you can write casually, but it is useless to rely solely on creative novelty for unpopular anime.

It's so funny that the Net King padded Jojo. I pulled a typical Love Train President and put it here. If the Net King pulls him up, the whole earth and even a nuclear bomb can't pass it All attacks against the President will be transferred to a random place in the world. If you play tennis against the President, you may kill people you don't know, kill people you know, and kill yourself. You will not be able to hurt the President even a hair. If you punch the Earth to pieces outside the universe, you may have to be transferred to In the parallel world, all attacks that cannot break through the dimensional gap are in vain In terms of attack, it has a noble instant kill mechanism. The parallel world objects/life and the body pulled out by the president will attract each other and then annihilate No matter how you say this kind of avatar, it is not something that can be touched in a world like the Net King. If the author can let the protagonist get a substitute of this level in jo7 to die in the sea of ​​fire and keep up with the pace of growth

I thought of writing an essay in elementary school. The whole text has no rhetoric at all in the vernacular Even this paragraph is considered good in the whole text. .

So many posts are all just pictures?

I don't understand the point of going to the world of the third volume at all, just to help the male and female protagonists of the original work get together? I can't stand it anymore

I haven't watched it for a long time, and it's so good to watch it again. 🙂

Where will you go in the next world? The psychic king who is also the spirit behind? Or a hunter with a complete system? Or go to Hokuto Fighter King Street Fighter to enhance your fighting ability? Or Yu Yu Hakusho Rurouni Kenshin Inuyasha Kamen Rider?

The protagonist seems to like to talk nonsense

The writing is so bad that I can hardly finish it.

The plot is very flat, basically a flat plot, and the character descriptions are also very flat. I feel that the writing is simply not strong enough. It is probably a newcomer and a new book. It just feels like everything goes smoothly for the protagonist, and all the growth seems like an epiphany or comes naturally, and the protagonist's efforts are brushed aside. Also, when I was reading, many articles had unfinished sentences, just like writing a paragraph and deleting it but not adding it. Before the deletion was completed, the half-sentence was left empty and confused, which affected the senses. The writing is not strong enough, the plot is flat, and the details are not in place. The first two can be improved by writing more, but the author needs to be more careful about the latter. If this book is a test of the waters, I think it's okay. The old bookworm at Qidian has read a lot of excellent books, so I can read books that are worse than those of great masters. I can only hope that the author will work hard and have a promising future.

Brother, you really need to read a book to make your writing better In this book, I can't say all of it. At least 90% of the dialogue is talking for the sake of talking. In the movie, the protagonist suddenly stops what he is doing, starts talking to the camera, and starts to explain the background of the story. Whether you add some movements or expressions when you speak, you always say: "Bala, bala, bala, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah." In reality, when you speak, you also have body movements. Your expressions, your small movements, and your tone are all used to strengthen your character; angry people will not speak slowly and quietly; when they are happy, they will not speak without expression or waves; and sad people will not move too violently. But you didn't. All your conversations happened in a very calm situation. I didn't order it all, nor did I read it all. I only read part of it, so I'll just talk about the part I saw. In the pirate chapter, the slaves of the Celestial Dragons were rescued. When they spoke, they only expressed gratitude in words. You can definitely add some expressions. Even the blue fish-men have some blood on their faces; But you didn't. All your conversations were just questions and answers Have you eaten? Eat. I don't even want to have feelings: "Boy, you've ordered this, have you eaten?" "You must have eaten, have you eaten? If not, I will get you something to eat?" After that, he turned around and went to look for food. Also, why is it that in an online novel, your protagonist is unwilling to show off? When you have already secured the victory, or have already won, you can explain how awesome your abilities are, just like in the Blade Fang chapter. After defeating Yujiro, you can explain your ability to Guo Haihuang. Why you didn't learn martial arts before was because you awakened the ability called a substitute, which can make soft things have the properties of metal. Then others exclaimed and suddenly realized: It turns out that this is how you can defend against attacks. You are so strong. So is it possible for me to awaken this ability? The protagonist said: I don't know about this. After all, I am from another world. In theory, you should not be able to do this, but I don't know the specifics. Isn't this just pretending? When you go out, your personality is given by yourself, so you have to pretend it yourself, right? If you don't return your wealth to your hometown and don't show off to others, who would know you are a billionaire?

Will you go to Overlord in the future? If you are strong enough... Can you kill Ainz?

What is the weird plot development of Integra turning into a vampire?

The protagonist has cleared the levels in various worlds. He is said to be the strongest, but he is always good at props. In fact, he is very powerful. Relying on external forces, what's even more ridiculous is that Saba's world number one is actually relying on a substitute. Did you just want the title when you became No. 1 In the world? Aren't process and growth the most important? Until the spell returned to the war, an unreasonable plug-in was opened. The spell can increase its own size. As it becomes larger, the spell power becomes stronger, and then it can become bigger and the spell power becomes stronger. There is no upper limit. After that, the protagonist of One Piece can be regarded as the strongest in the world in terms of hard power, but he is particularly complained about. The protagonist treats himself as a traveler in every world and treats the natives as NPCs. There is never any real business intention. Others are decisive in killing because of their own decision and belief. The protagonist treats everything as an NPC. The author calls it divinity. I've been hanging out with you for so long, but in the end you didn't consider the other person's affairs at all. You just slapped your butt and left after passing the level, saying that you don't pursue this or pleasure. It stands to reason that the pirate has cleared the level. Even in a regular world like a substitute, it is right to be cautious. The problem is that you have an advantage in intelligence and strength. A surprise attack or a swing of a knife will overwhelm the opponent. Even if Kaz stops overtime, you can't defeat the protagonist. As a result, this hand allows the protagonist to play a card that allows the opponent to evolve beyond heaven. Speechless

Unbelievable. Do you really accept this name? Don't you think it's weird😅

This writing style makes the reading experience of this book as uncomfortable as putting on new pants in the New Year only to find that the pants were scratched by a throwing knife thrown by Dio.

Although I only read the first few chapters, I scrolled to the end and felt like I wasn't finished.

Hardened Heart may have a chance to kill Yujiro Fanma the first time, but if he fails to kill him the first time, there is a high probability that a way to deal with it will be developed.

I don't really like reading comics and anime, but I do like to read fan fiction. Most of my knowledge about anime is from fan fiction. Can you understand this book if you haven't read JOJO?

Although you have disarmed the anti-theft, I no longer like watching it. This leveling flow has become too boring for me.

Is this the end or the eunuch? I was still following the update at that time, but when I saw the third world of Knights, I didn't want to watch it anymore. I didn't even think about it. I really couldn't understand it.

I want to see the plot of Uchiha Obito Kamui pretending to miss his true form and then being stopped for 5 seconds by Jo Taro🌚. It's very interesting, especially when the sexy Taiyo brother (Danzo) uses Izanagi to be deleted by the Red King. 🙂 It's funny just thinking about it