The Apocalypse Has Come, and It Was Me Who Did It

The introduction is probably the author's dream and we decided to elaborate on his dream

I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 34. Why do I always want to write about others and not improve myself? After reading it, I lost my IQ. I was also drunk when I created 6 parchment opponents for myself. You can change your powers to fantasy or science fiction to strengthen yourself. And there is a trick around you, so you just bet that you won't kill yourself. It's really stupid. I didn't know there is a saying called nonsense. I read it later. After downloading the directory, I saw that others had talents before I thought of myself. It was really frustrating. I read the comments and said that they were playing with the rules later. I was speechless. You waste the number of words in the early stage without improving yourself. You always want to add something to your children. You are not a pension stream, you are a post-apocalyptic survival stream. If the golden finger is so big, I will go to the invincible stream.

I wanted to read this setting just by reading the introduction, but after reading the specific content, it was a pity that the author's writing skills were not good enough.

The expansion of the world view is inexplicable, and the restrictions on the protagonist's abilities are serious and deliberate but not in place. If you think about it for a moment, you will know that there are a lot of ways to make the protagonist invincible within 30,000 words. It is better to learn from the great god next door "Magic Cang Yue" and see how they can still survive when the protagonist's abilities are the same. This book became boring after the inexplicable murderer appeared.

In the first few chapters, I thought I had encountered a masterpiece, but in the following chapters, it was like a different person, and the more I wrote, the more I wrote. A brilliant piece of writing that turns out to be mindless and refreshing.

The idea is very good, very good. This is the first time I have seen an article written from the author's perspective. But this article has big problems. 1. The introduction is very creative, but it is too long. The content of the novel is not given immediately. Most people will cross it out when they see the full screen of words, making it difficult to attract readers. 2. There is a problem with the rhythm of the novel. Referring to Xiaolong's "The Devil Comes" and "No. 13 Mink Street", the entire first chapter is a story. It takes 10,000 to 20,000 words to give the background of the story, and the article ends in a few words. What is the identity of the protagonist? What is your family background? What's your personality like? Is there anything you care about? Under normal circumstances, about 20,000 words should be enough to give a clear picture, but no matter how hard it is, it should still give a vague feeling. But the main character here only made me remember his name. The stocking section really shouldn't be so long, it's unbalanced. In short, the writing power is slightly lacking. Under normal circumstances, I won't read it again after reading 8 chapters. But this idea really has great development potential. If you can make good use of it, starting a sect is not a problem at all. There seems to be no work about the restrictive reality-changing golden finger yet, so the author must seize this opportunity. I have also written some novels myself, and I feel that writing is not easy. The power of writing, plot, and characters are so complicated that it is difficult to distinguish them, and you can't figure it out even if you scratch the surface of the book. It has more than 100,000 words and is written in a careless manner. Because of this, I don't want such a good subject matter to be lost to everyone, and I hope the author will continue to work hard. All recommended votes and monthly votes for the next two weeks are here. I hope to see this article blocked from the homepage one day!

It's true that this setting is wasted, and the protagonist is not very smart either.

You have a wonderful mind, but your logic is completely messed up, and your fantasy becomes reality. Why don't you quickly build up armor for yourself and insist on physically resisting the apocalypse? Is it cheap or cheap?

Who can write a better book using this setting?

Hanging is to write a book and make it come true. The limitation is not to change reality but to create reality [questionable] and update the word count The writing and setting are okay, but I think the plot has two poisonous points [may be foreshadowing] 1. The appearance of the rules and ghost stories is very abrupt and very inconsistent with the previous overall style. Unless the setting is [Realistic Chinese Network is the most powerful ghost story/mysterious power], the existence of uncontrolled extraordinary things in the real world is too poisonous for this golden finger. If you are not going to play Super Smash Bros. In the future, it is recommended that you edit the text to "create" the rules weird story. The protagonist did not edit the text because the modification could not "eliminate" the existing rules. 2. Taking the summary and induction of rules too much for granted It is too outrageous to be unable to change reality and only create reality. What happened to the three missing families? How do changes to character cards affect real characters? Yue is barely created, but Little Fatty actually exists [at least not created by the protagonist] By extension, what is the difference between creating the reality you need and changing reality? It's nothing more than the number of words consumed by the protagonist At the same time, due to the rounds of PK, the author is a disguised infinite flow, infinite + behind the scenes + strange stories + apocalyptic survival + protagonist duel + possible two worlds flow. This book has too many elements. The later stage will inevitably be bloated and difficult for the author to grasp. It is recommended to make subtractions, not to take everything, or to give up the infinite world, one size fits all, the power of all other worlds will be greatly weakened + you cannot travel to other books that failed PK. Either turn to infinite flow, the combat power expands at the speed of light, and then turn to rules and battles to find a way to become a great author or [the master of the real Chinese network] Or the author creates his own genre, otherwise it is easy to enter the palace with the author's words of the latest chapter and the current plot

As soon as the strange talk about the rules came out, the talent to become a god suddenly became popular. . . If you see weird rules, you can remove the book from the shelves, unless your eyes are not afraid of it.

This book is quite abstract, and sometimes it's fascinating and sometimes it's boring.

The concept is good, but the writing is too poor, and there are many poisonous points I can't stand it even if I don't use 🧠 The one who can keep reading is really a genius!

When I saw the reasons for not giving my own system, I really wanted to use this idea to write one myself.

Chapter 11 is really unbearable. Sometimes the author writes that the protagonist doesn't look like a human being with a brain.

You wrote about the end of the rainstorm. The water level is so high. You run to a high plateau. Do you have to be the god of war in the community?

I kind of want to write the setting for this book.

There is a slight loophole, that is, as an author, isn't there any reward for writing his own novels? All changes are made by you yourself. If the author can only change reality when writing a novel and it is of no use to him, who will write it?

At the beginning, it was written that Qin Yue was reborn in the apocalypse, but Qin Yue was not prepared for anything and was still playing games 😅

There are so many loopholes in this kind of novel that I can barely read it without using my brain, but it's a pity that I only lost my brain when 🍅

I think it's pretty cool, please come on, author✊

The author can include those famous novels

With such a big hook, the first 20 scenes were completely flat, and there was no interesting plot. The protagonist was too stupid, and the logic of behavioral decision-making also had huge loopholes. In summary, it's not suitable for reading with your brain.

This is chasing the eunuch😅😅

When I read the title later, it looked like a mixture of various types of novels.

The name of this book feels weird. What do you think would be better?

Is this introduction the author's norm?

The performance of sequence 1 is sequence 9

If you don't pursue updates, just polish the writing and the main line, it's still a book with potential.

I can throw this book away and re-read a suspenseful story with the first three chapters.