Journey to the West: I Have the Final Say in Baihu Ridge

Advantages: The text is not particularly smart, but it is more delicate and stable; the paragraphs and chapters are smoothly connected; the plot is reasonable; I like the first chapter very much Disadvantages: First, it is slow to get started; second, it is indifferent to priorities. As a web novel, it's already 52 chapters in. I'm still trapped around a shrine, and the first monster I fight is the villager who plays the leading role. The lack of distinction between primary and secondary is my biggest feeling in reading. When we read Journey to the West, we watch the protagonists becoming immortals and fighting monsters and upgrading, not Zhang San, Li Si, Pan Zi, Zhibai, Pig, Xiao Hei and Lu Sanchuan. You only read 52 chapters and you asked me to remember so many names of supporting characters, which shows that you wrote too much about them. Improvement points: It's easy to change. Put more words in the perspective of the protagonist. No matter how strong Zhang San and Li Si are, the readers have no sense of involvement. Blocking point: I think most people's three views should be to cultivate people and become immortals and Buddhas, or to cultivate demons and become immortals, rather than letting villagers drink demon blood and become half-human and half-demon. If in order to strengthen the villagers, just say that Feng Yao absorbed the essence of the sun and the moon and figured out a set of methods to cultivate immortality and strengthen the body, wouldn't it be enough In summary: Readable, after improvement, I am still willing to continue chasing, come on

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If you don't know how to write sensationalism, don't forcefully write it. If the wild boar has the chance, it will not hit the tiger, but will stand between the man and the tiger.

I just finished reading the latest chapter. I hope the author can update more. I don't know why so few people read this novel, but so far, it suits my taste.

Although there are already a lot of books about Journey to the West, this one is really good to read, and it's not like rewriting Journey to the West if you get distracted early. It didn't even start with the great boy, but it kind of started with a bowl. It can be seen that the author has his own set of ideas, including the differences between exercises and merits, and the ways of heaven and saints. In the gameplay of opening up a new god system in the land, you can feel that there are some shadows of various genres in previous years. But for now, the logic is self-consistent, and there is no such thing as stitching.        ，，，，， With all the arrangements, I am really looking forward to the plot behind it. It's just that this comment section is a little quieter. Let's chat more if you have nothing to do.

We have finished writing the chapter on the villagers of Zhangmuling, and we are now entering the journey to the west. Unless we advance the mortal plot, there won't be many villager scenes in the future. Please feel free to eat. If you have any suggestions, please give them more. Don't give up on reading. Thank you!

It's beautiful, but why are there so few people watching it?

Very well written, recommended👍

Please follow up and read, thank you readers 🥺

Will there be no updates when it is released? ? There are no bonus chapters or anything?

I feel like I need to add some functions to my god status.

Updated 13 days ago... Is it a pigeon?