Invasion of America

Reasonable is nothing in front of fun. When I saw Chapter 120, I thought it was an excellent work with a score of 60 or above. If I proofread it carefully when publishing the book, it might be able to get a score of 70. This book is not just a drama that accuses capitalism of the current state of American society. Although there are elements of science fiction, apocalypse, and supernatural powers, the story actually takes place in the present, so the good news is that it keeps up with current events, but the bad news is that there is no manuscript. The protagonist changes identities too much, almost trying to penetrate every aspect of Meili Jian. It is indeed too exaggerated, and it seems that the portrayal of the protagonist itself is a bit inconsistent. But the interest of the book outweighs this sense of absurdity. I just feel that some identities, such as boarding students, nurses, deputy directors of medical departments, disguised FBI, etc., Are also interesting subjects in themselves, but the transition to the next identity is too fast, the length and ink are too short, and it is too superficial. The author likes mature women and wants to have a harem. However, as the protagonist's status increases, the proportion of emotional scenes is greatly reduced. At the same time, he is constantly getting to know new "Zhou girls" with stronger tool-like attributes in his new identity. In addition, Qidian obviously did not give him permission to engage in sexual scenes, which makes him feel a bit like a eunuch insisting on visiting a brothel. Comparing before and after, the story of Baiwan Town, the first small map of the story, is obviously more sophisticated, and the supporting characters are obviously richer and more personal. This is something the author needs to reflect on. This book and book reviews have aroused my interest in the author's past eunuch novels. After reading various reviews of his previous novels, I feel that many of the shortcomings in other people's reviews have not appeared in this new book until chapter 120. Does this mean that the author has made some progress? After enriching the details of this story, I think it can be directly put on the screen. The problem of having too many protagonists and too many superhuman characters, I think, can be rewritten as a story about a few Mesozoic backbones selected from the few survivor organizations in our country during the apocalypse, and using instruments developed in the last stage of the apocalypse to transmit their consciousness back to the past. These people happened to be in the United States at the time. They were all young and had their own talents. They have been proven to be able to fight to the end even in the apocalypse. The last group of human beings who are full of hope for the future asked this possibly last group of time and space warriors to reinforce the past to prevent the end of the world as much as possible. In order for them not to rebel in the decayed past, they were also asked to voluntarily do some "brainwashing", such as the "Resistance Killing List" in the original work. In this way, the male protagonist can be split into three or even ten characters, which not only allows the split POV perspective to more reasonably show all aspects of the various classes, professions and circles of the Ugly Kingdom, but also allows Chinese people who are minded to stand out in all aspects, and can help each other form a team at key points. At the same time, the superpower system can be enriched. Everyone can strengthen different aspects. You can refer to the copy of the genetic map of Jacques, who is also destined to be in the end of science fiction, in "Starting with the Birds". You can also take advantage of the author's intention to present the image of Chinese men with different images and personalities exuding sexual charm and conquering Yangma's self-confidence and self-improvement. If there are female characters or transvestites in the future reinforcements (if the male protagonist is split into three characters, it is not necessary, but if it is split into more characters, there should be), then her emotional scenes and pairings need to be more careful, but it is not an issue I should consider now. Of course, because it is the last new technology of mankind, it is normal for some accidents to occur, such as varying degrees of amnesia (laughs).

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Okay, okay, finally returned to the original feeling, okay, from radiation to now, from pirated to genuine, America is still good-looking written by a seasoned writer

The protagonist does not have extraordinary powers. For ordinary international students, with this condition, even if they win the lottery, they are just a cash machine, let alone actively provoke the authorities. Isn't this ridiculous?

Seasoned readers can watch more recent videos about the lives of lower-class Americans in Xiaohongshu, which will make them more down-to-earth when written in the book.

I've been reading your books for a long time. This year's divorce and unemployment have left me with a hopeless future and a hopeless life, so I just read your novels to have fun. I wish your book a hit!

The beginning of the book is very interesting, but the plot of Back to the Future and Amnesia in the middle is quite outrageous. Why is it written like this? Moreover, many readers help the author to clean up the author and say that it is an old style. It is very speechless. I highly recommend deleting Amnesia and Going to the Future and rewriting it. Isn't it better to just spend money to improve your strength to face the end?

The latest chapter feels so stupid. I think the author's writing power has remained at the same stage as when he wrote the wasteland. A few years have passed and it hasn't changed much. Anyway, it is just a book-loving fan. The protagonist has always had such a personality, and his IQ and EQ have always been so boring. To be honest, I suddenly felt a little tired of reading it. Book lovers' understanding of the United States is no longer what it was when I first wrote the book. How should I put it, I suddenly felt bored. 😮‍💨

The transition from billionaire to single-handedly was too abrupt.

The writing is very smooth, but the protagonist is not like someone who is reborn in the apocalypse. Usually, those who are reborn in the apocalypse are decisive in killing, in a state of depression for a long time, and a little bit violent. This one looks like a high school student traveling through time. It's a bit silly and sweet to take it for granted. Not thinking carefully enough.

I couldn't stand it after reading the first thirty chapters. . . It feels like some people who have finished drinking the soy juice are constantly shouting that it's delicious.

Old Taoist, take a look at the latest plot. Is it smooth? What is space-time variation? Reborn and traveled back to the future? What kind of gouba brain circuit do you have? It would be better not to be reborn. The writing was good before it was put on the shelves. I thought you had regained your form, but as soon as it was put on the shelves, you started to let yourself go. We also integrated the Resistance Army and the Terminator. Do you have the ability to write? Can't Gou Ba honestly write something that everyone likes to see? The Doomsday Wasteland is not a place where Goba allows you to be reborn and travel back again.

After seeing Time Travel to the Doomsday, I plan to suspend my subscription. Two extremely blunt transitions, a deus ex machina style transition. There may be foreshadowing that can be taken back later, but this kind of photo is really unpopular.

Looking at the number, I would like to add some detail to it 🤓🤓🤓

No? He has amnesia and has a second personality. What the hell. He lost his memory, killed people at will when he had no money, no identity, and no backing, and was he planning to directly assassinate the governor? Are you a Kryptonian or a native of the motherland? I heard that the back is also double-pierced. . . Unbelievable, what I wrote before is so good

The old Taoist tortured me thousands of times, but I treated the old Taoist like my first love 😭, chasing him, and flying.

The first part felt fine, but the second part became more and more confusing. From the moment I got the injection, the plot developed in a mess and was very exaggerated.

The protagonist is still a lone wolf in the apocalypse. After the lawyer from the award office arrives, he should immediately establish a security team and implement 24-hour personal protection. The opponent can only attack from the official and legal aspects, and there will be no such troubles as gunmen and FBI gangsters.

Why did I finally publish so many chapters, but when I opened them today, the sky fell and I was deceived into northern Myanmar! Why did you go back to the apocalypse and be a lone wolf? That's not what I want to watch, tmd, I, no, it should be said that what most of us readers want to see is the protagonist spending more than one billion to lay out before the doomsday and then vigorously strengthen the apocalypse! Hey! But this is what you do. . . . This is no longer selling dog meat on sheep's head. This is changing my mutton to dog meat while I'm cooking.

It is written that Americans will engage in blockade. Do you really believe it? How much execution ability does it have to have? When you said that during the Cold War, I believed it could be executed. Now, it's just nonsense.

I don't know if it's because I'm getting older and can't break out of the routine of my previous books. The protagonists are getting stupider and stupider.

In this book, I read the chapter about the success of domestic research and development of warthogs, and I am waiting for an update. I have been raising warthogs for more than half a month, and it is very good. Although I have been raising warthogs for two months, I have not forgotten to vote monthly. As a result, this new content is this? Is the follow-up written by AI? I still hired a ghostwriter. The plot had a direct twist, which shocked me Especially when he was injected with a potion and then in Terminator mode? And the first chapter in the latest chapter, space-time distortion? What the hell. A little too divisive. I just decided everything, and this is what happened? Currently I have no desire to continue reading. The previous writing was really good, and now it's as if someone else has written it, (ai?) I'll keep reading for now, and look at the catalog to consider whether to pursue the book or not 😐😐

It's written that the factory that produces drones has a harsh production environment. Did you travel from time to time in 2077?

As a veteran, good doomsday writing is about construction and farming!

Please take care of the outline, brother, it feels too fragmented after the frustration, and it feels like the story is forced to continue by relying entirely on the author's writing power.

A good hand of cards is played badly, the beginning is quite good, but it insists on some kind of apocalypse. Who wants to watch the apocalypse without reading cool stories and beautiful women?

Don't wait any longer. It's clear that this book is no longer finished. The author is writing a new book and it's unknown when it will be uploaded.

Fine😜

Write a shitty apocalypse, the apocalypse should never have come

It's been a long time, so it's time for a new book to be released