Abnormal Mutation

Don't write less about the game Dial Gold. It seems annoying to those who have never played it and are not interested in it.

Isn't it too abstract to pull people into the spirit world to work with gold shovels and get rewards in real life? It wouldn't be very interesting if you directly use Hex's setting magic modification as a cheat. It feels a bit awkward to start a game in a novel.

Wonderful grass, worth a look. The writing is good and the plot develops smoothly, but Goldfinger is a bit awkward. Now Goldfinger is basically just a decoration and can only be used to play games. It is a bit novel that the male protagonist needs to take care of three young men (usually younger sisters). I hope they can help the protagonist (most people can't keep up with the protagonist's development rhythm). It is not until he meets his aunt that the supporting characters are interesting and attractive (I hope to be Yang Guo).

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The progress is too slow. I saw that the protagonist in Chapter 43 didn't even have a Yizi.

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If you can continue reading after reading chapters 25 and 26, please continue.

I have a small opinion (can't say it's a suggestion). About time conversion and money conversion. I don't mind the time conversion in the book, and I'm even satisfied with it. After all, it adds a bit of fantasy flavor, but I think some people may not read this book because they mind it. So I think the author can explain the time (such as age, or month, how old it is in real life, or simply restate the time conversion or something every time it appears, so that you can roughly remember it after reading it a few times, and it is easier to read) There is also a way to explain various conversions in a separate chapter, so that you can find it even if you forget it. The above is an immature view

Compared to the previous book, is it too slow?

There is nothing wrong with some of the descriptions. The main character is a naughty person. If you can accept this, you can still watch it 1. You travel to a foreigner, and then the foreigner opens a welfare home, and you are not sure whether you are alive or dead. (At least not able to gain a foothold at all), why not choose to continue to face those crises by developing incognito? 2. When faced with an enemy who wants to kill you, don't let the wolf absorb the energy of flesh and blood, just kill the prey with just one sentence. Can you develop, buddy? Survive first, then be a good gentleman

I'm about 30 chapters into this book, and I have a little problem. The first thing to do is to face the Extraordinary Grandma. Why should she hide it from the two wolves? According to the article, I can accept it. The protagonist is more cautious. But then there are some strange operations. It clearly shows that he is involved in extraordinary anomalies. I feel that the protagonist is a little too anxious and a bit OOC. The last step is the most ridiculous one of pulling people into the chessboard. As a reader, I was confused as I watched where the protagonist was busy working around. I didn't know what the meaning was, why I wanted to pull people in, what were the benefits, and what were the risks. Your author has a God's perspective, but readers don't. You have to click on it in the article. Isn't it nonsense that the protagonist just wants to get someone to play the game with him?

Chapter 20 or so starts to change into a parliament-type behind-the-scenes flow. If you don't like the pretentiousness behind the scenes, you can quit.

The protagonist can get benefits by bringing strangers into the chessboard battle, but what actual benefits can the strangers get? After reading more than a dozen chapters, I was confused as to whether it was because the protagonist had stronger mental power. The reward he mentioned was not mentioned specifically. Are outsiders entering the chessboard just to play chess, which is so boring for newcomers and does not improve their strength?

I've opened a new book, let me see what's going on

For me. Not bad. Good grass + to the level between grass jelly. It has a fantasy flavor. I have never played League of Legends (still the King of Legends), and I don't understand auto-chess, nor do I understand abnormal mutations. But I think this kind of plug-in is not bad, for now. The performance of the protagonist in these 18 chapters is also remarkable, and I didn't find any bad points. (In addition, I would like to add that during the process of watching, I was wondering whether the protagonist should join and become a law enforcement officer. My opinion is not to join, after all, there are plug-ins. Of course, this is my opinion. There are thousands of people with different opinions. The author does not have to listen to me, just write according to your own ideas. I am also afraid that you will fall into the street after listening to my blind instructions 🙂😁)

To be honest, this setting without extraordinary qualifications is too emmmm uncomfortable. Is it really necessary to do this?

Why do you have to copy the entire introduction to the chess pieces in the golden shovel? The word count is too low.

I like the feeling of a lone wolf, and I feel good about the children and family members around me, but I always feel less comfortable after establishing relationships with those pharmacists and officials.

It's interesting to write, but it's a bit lacking in publicity.

I can't count them all, it feels a bit too complicated

It's a pity that the book I had raised for half a month suddenly disappeared. Does the author have any new plans?

It's quite interesting, but you can completely change the skin. There is no need to insist on TFT.

I still feel that the topic is too big and I want to write too much. Next time, the author may try to focus on one key point.

This is also expected. The outline was not written well, and many readers were confused.

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I think the writing is good, but the monthly tickets are very few

I didn't originally pursue many books, but this is not the case.

Joined the game 1 month ago, overall it's pretty good. I was about to catch up with the eunuch. Speechless.

If you cut it off, you will be done with the investment.