Rebirth: Starting from Collecting White Moonlight Interest

When I see 140, I think it's food and needs some defense. Don't look at it if you're on defense, or don't look at it if you're thinking about it. My own defense Recommended reasons: 1. The writing is very smooth. The three female protagonists are better than other urban novels. It is comfortable to read, as if this is how it must be written here. Some plots are abrupt and seem to be written to promote the plot. For example, at the beginning of the season, I stayed at the male protagonist's house to go to the toilet, and the hospital applauded (this is difficult). 2. The author also said that it was about a knife and a candy that opens and closes, and that Shura Chang was written by a literary youth (some people like this and some don't), and there are stomach-ache plots such as "xxx, I don't think I like you anymore", but the male protagonist was coaxed in the same chapter, which is better than Xiao and Shen's book. Sugar is also very sweet, Qingmei and Ji wrote it very well❤️. 3. The younger sister is a wingman, assisting the male protagonist and siding with the male protagonist. This perception is much better than some joint female protagonists working against the male protagonist. 4. Have awareness of lightning protection. For example, the male protagonist of the swimming pool is hired Depressed (some are forcibly found) In fact, the text does not affect the perception): 1. Some people will care about the similarity between Ji's mother and Ji. The reason is that at first, when the male protagonist saw Ji's mother in the crowd, he mistakenly thought it was Ji, so he felt that they looked exactly the same (this was a complaint made by book friends, and I forgot the details in the book). The author's description was a sixty-seven-point resemblance, and he only wrote it once, and there was no description of the appearance later. In short, don't think about it. 2. My sister is dear. 3. After it was released, the female supporting roles have increased and the heroine's roles have decreased. It seems that the heroine takes turns to be written. The main reason is that there are fewer roles and it will be more uncomfortable to follow. 4. The book friends voted not to accept Ai (green tea), which is a flower level. The author seems to dislike the book friends so much that he didn't want the green tea label before he started writing. He wrote a plot: "Although I had a little tea, I clearly refused to be a dog licker and did not accept gifts to hang others." 5. There is currently no sign of being a thief. The xylophones of various people did not write about their appearance, except for Ji, who wrote about their loving relationship with her husband. 6. Signs of a leaky girl. The above Ai and Xiao Qi are both at the level of flirtatious girls. They also have a high school crush who pursues her husband in the crematorium. She is interested in the hero, but the emotional drama has not been written much. If you don't accept it, you will be a leaky girl. If you like to accept them all, please pay attention. 7. It feels like the readers are urging me to recommend the three heroines too quickly. I couldn't write Shura Field, so I hurriedly created a heroine and recommended her as a lover. The plot feels dispensable, maybe because the female supporting character is not very attractive to me, since the male protagonist eats meat anyway. 8. I saw someone commenting on a classic question. The male protagonist is reborn but does not look like a xx-year-old person. These comments appear in the plot where the male protagonist is stunned and throbbed by the female protagonist and is afraid of a submissive female counterpart. This really depends on the individual and cannot be evaluated. Not that greasy anyway. 9. The most important one is that the female partner Gu Xia Shuang went out to discuss business with the male protagonist. The male partner was stunned for a moment when he saw the female partner, and then the female partner wrote "reach out generously." Anyway, for this reason, I will directly mark this book as a negative, don't read it, and don't read it for the purpose of supplementing it. Chapter 142. Above.

Although I can't write a book, but taking a hundred steps back, author, can't you write a hundred chapters at a time? Maybe people will say this is unreasonable, but I also said that I can't write a book.

Normally, natural beauties are a scarce resource, but if there are several of them without leaving town, it's hard not to doubt your vision.

Hey, don't try to create some vicious female supporting role, okay? There's no need for the ex-girlfriend, just handle her lightly and downplay her, otherwise it will be too cliché😭

I asked for a day off and ran away without saying a word. Who will read this kind of nonsense book in the future?

It became boring after it was released. The three female protagonists before it was released were already very likeable. At most, one assistant could be added. But after it was released, so many women suddenly appeared, and they were crazy about plots, and I didn't want to watch it at all, including watching the popularity adjustment scenes. I didn't see the increase in the roles of the more popular characters. Instead, it seemed that the high-popular characters were purposefully suppressed and the low-popular characters were supported.

Author, I support you. It's not a big deal to cut the book. Anyway, everyone doesn't need your book to read It's not worth it for you to be so tired from writing. Just go and have a good rest, okay? Let's leave this money to those authors who can keep writing.

Although the average score of 2,000 is not good, it is not bad at all. You are very ambitious, but we all spent money. As for the daily 10,000, I remember it was only four days. With your attitude, unless you change your account, I will never read your book in the future. I will read three books in a row and never see you again.

There is no use in constantly being an eunuch. Without any opinions or reflection, won't the next book have the same ending again? Subscriptions are declining. I don't think about which chapter the character started to decline. Just cut it off if no one reads it? The reason why great gods are great gods is because they have the experience of finishing a book. If you don't finish a book, you will never know why others write it like this, why they are great gods, and you can only be a eunuch after you look good.

Before I even wrote a few words on my first book, I was eager to reward myself with the Silver Alliance, hoping to soar into the sky, but ended up cutting the book after it was on the shelf. The second book is already excellent, so let's continue cutting books. The third book continues to make the same old mistakes. What you lack is patience and sincerity. You are always so impetuous, do you think that you can change it by opening a new book?

Miss Cao

Otherwise, what is the difference between this and fraud?

Even though he is a eunuch, Qidian still recommends this book to me!

Everything about this book is good, but it has one flaw. The portrayal of the male protagonist feels too weak. I don't see any outstanding points so far. Compared with the exquisite character design of the female protagonist, it feels very popular. However, harem novels do not require the male protagonist to have much charisma, as long as he is a normal man, that is, bold, not impotent, and everything else is fine The female protagonist is extremely outstanding among the urban novels I have read. Personally, I feel it is better than the heroine written by Lao Liu (Mata Ming Yanagishi). The character creation is more charming. Each heroine has her own characteristics, but is not annoying. The right little pride avoids boring. Anyway, it's very cute. However, I still have to suggest that the author give the male protagonist more shape if possible. The female protagonist is so well written and should not be paired with a relatively mediocre male protagonist.

Is this cut? Not bad to say. Based on other people's opinions The wedding banquet took too long in the plot, which I didn't like. Yangshang is very strange. The character design has not been established yet. If the readers are urging you to eat meat, it is completely unnecessary. This will actually lead to fewer scenes for the three female protagonists. It is even less necessary to write about other female protagonists, which makes it seem like each female protagonist is written in turn, and the plot is also slowed down. The wedding banquet is an example, it is too slow to slap the face.

"Newcomer, I haven't read the book yet, but I'm all set." "I'm curious, do you have all the books in this book? Do you have any dead ex-boyfriends?" "Have you ever been married to someone in your previous life? Are there any previous lives such as ex-boyfriends?" "Will the hostess accept it? "It's not about right and wrong" "Ji Zhilin's mother is not about right and wrong, it's poisonous"

The number of heroines has been controlled. It's pretty good now. Each heroine has a three-dimensional character. If there are too many heroines, it's hard for you to control them and readers won't be able to remember them.

When I read Chapter 5, I thought the writing was really good, and the protagonist doesn't seem to be a lazy person at the moment, which is very good. If it's a bad point, it's that the protagonist has a sister Well, the protagonist is not a lazy person, but I am 🙂 I can't accept the fact that there is a woman who the protagonist can't sleep with 🙂🙂

After reading the first few chapters, let me tell you my personal feelings. The writing is good and the character interactions are well written. What a pity. If the author insists on reaching a million words, I might spend some money to subscribe, but it is too bad of character to do this.

Is he a eunuch? I won't spend any money as a eunuch.

The first one is the best written, and it's like a eunuch, but the last two are getting worse and worse.

Can you please stop pushing the eunuch book? The eunuch has finished marking it.