Lin Dengwan, Who Was Riding and Cutting Down the Fields, Beat the Nobles Until They Screamed

The pseudo-riding and slashing literature is actually the farming style of medieval city-states.

Here I come, Rhodok the sharpshooter

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Is there anything interesting about the name Lin Dengwan? I saw a novel with this name on Fanque. Players in the late Ming Dynasty were fierce.

Is it a harem? I don't care if it's not a harem.

I came here for the introduction, but a blonde female knight came up and smashed me away like a heavy hammer.

After reading more than twenty chapters, I have some ideas. The subject matter of this book is very good, so I won't go into details. The writing style needs to be improved: 1. The narrative is a bit too bland, and the ups and downs of the plot are not felt. The most serious thing is that there are a lot of unnecessary descriptions in the article. All detailed descriptions should have corresponding core expressions, which are used to describe the core content, otherwise there is no need to use a large amount of space. 2. There are certain deficiencies in the description of the characters' psychological activities. Characters lacking psychological activities are destined to fail to resonate with readers because they cannot feel that they are living people. 3. There are obvious problems with the advancement of the plot. There is no sense of rhythm, it cannot induce a sense of involvement, and there is an obvious sense of separation between the reader and the story. Personally, I think a good article should be "engaging". Please cheer up the author, and wish the author's books get better and better.

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Hedy Kress

I was stunned when I saw the title of this book 😍

I don't even know when you will publish a new book.