The Fourth Scourge: Players of Holy Rome

For a p agency war criminal, the protagonist is still too human 🌹

Thälmann... Shinra... What's going on, you want to form the German Communist Party?

History, if you choose to play natural disasters, isn't this a dimensionality reduction attack? What's more exciting about this! The author is so talented, right? Each paragraph has more than one laugh 😋😋, sleep on it? Z Please write more The kind that wakes you up after hearing laughter, you are so talented

The resurrection CD is long, the pain realism cannot be adjusted, and the number of people is small. Can this be called the fourth natural disaster? Even if the protagonist sets up rules and regulations to restrict players, he will not worry about no one playing. It is 100% real and has 60 times the time flow rate. It is the only one in the world, which is equivalent to gaining a second life in a limited lifespan. You can enjoy 600 minutes of gaming in 10 minutes between classes. The sixty-fold difference in time flow is very powerful whether it is used for studying, resting, or working. Imagine that you have a terminal illness and only have one year left to live. Then you find that there is a game that allows you to live for sixty years. You are a historian, and this extremely challenging game allows you to get in touch with real history...

It's not enough for P Club and not enough for natural disasters. To be precise, it's a foreign farming novel.

The female assistant added is quite poisonous, and it would be even more poisonous if she were the heroine. Not to mention that she is an assassin who is loyal to others, but she is here to monitor the protagonist. Does the protagonist think she is an ordinary person? ! Moreover, this person is an assassin, and he is used as an assistant to train assassins. He directly hands the knife to the enemy. It can be any soldier or player as an assistant. This female character does not give people a good impression at all. About this book, readers come to see the players of P Club causing trouble, not to see the male and female protagonists. Even if the heroine has been removed, the former heroine is still annoying. Later, when they called for using new methods to train assassins, they also suffered from PTSD. Players of P Club were already angry when they encountered this kind of subordinates getting sick. It would be easy to pull them out and fire them. Useless leaders with negative traits are still placed in the cabinet, and they are also the kind of enemy spies with +10 enemy intelligence. Such leaders are directly put on the ship to attack Leviathan. It is recommended to put this female assassin in a useless place, and then replace her with a loyal person. This female assassin is like a knife. As long as the enemy gives the order, the protagonist will be dead the next day.

The historical novel The Fourth Natural Disaster is probably going to be unfinished! The last book about Tang Dynasty was terrible. Because there is no need to reach any later stage, a thousand people can push the entire Europe! Unless resurrection is restricted

APP entry? Doesn't your entire helmet work?

Well written, I will punish you with the popularity that p club should have

You've all played P Club games, but don't you know what the fourth natural disaster represents? The stitching feels bad. Two obviously attractive things make people not want to look at them together. However, there is little foreign history after all...

You are just an ordinary player, there shouldn't be too many ways to be targeted. It would be great if there was a real fourth natural disaster. I, the GM, could just open a console and hang it up. No matter what your NPC does, you have to listen to me. What matters is that one does whatever one wants

The problem is that the plot is too bland. There is no climax, no excitement and no fun. The more important problem is that the pace is too slow and the protagonist is doing things here and there with a hammer and a stick. It feels like the author wants to cram in all the knowledge points he heard when communicating with people in real life and sew them together, but highlights that they are not systematic and have no own work route and outline. , Just want to take care of everything, mix in everything, and mix in whatever comes to mind. In fact, it is just a noun dropped in the sky, and everything has been changed, but if it is changed, it feels that the author has not thought it over carefully. It is not so much a novel as an outline of a classical farming catalog. It really only has an outline, and the readers need to look up the content themselves.

Are you planning to pursue liberation theology or materialism?

There is a big flaw in the game. There are not even more than 1,000 people in the later stages. Is this called a natural disaster?

The biggest problem with red text is that it is too taken for granted from the perspective of a novel. You have to know that people are always complicated. It doesn't mean that everyone who responds will flock to you. If you can't write an inspection report to the level, you can only be a Handan toddler and an academic. You always think that you are doing it for the good of the workers and then organize the workers. If you are spurned, you will immediately change from red to blue or gray. You have never thought that you are out of touch with reality.

Ge Ge talks too much and has dyslexia.

You are the fourth natural disaster. Can you change it to a farming player at the beginning? Return to o club players, I want to kill everyone, I want to kill, kill, kill

Our big P agency is really full of talents! ! !

Everything else is fine, writing is good, but knowledge is still lacking. Once again, the current Pope Francis only sympathized with and protected liberation theology. He did not participate in liberation theology.

As of now, the author's writing and plot control need to be improved, and the content in each part is very sparse, which can be seen as a lack of experience. As for the fluctuations in the plot, Shishita thinks it is like a sponge, a bit spongey, but mostly water, bland and tasteless, and the plot is a bit scattered. The plots are scattered here and there, failing to connect them together. The protagonist is also wrongly portrayed. Various harems are opened from other perspectives. I can only say that it is meaningless and does not promote the plot at all. The shaping of each character still needs to be improved and lacks a core. All in all, it is just like what the author himself wrote in the book, like the group leader in a game group suddenly wrote an article, but it is difficult to evaluate whether the author has the same system as the protagonist. I think there is a high probability that it will not work.

Are the equipment on the killed enemies refreshed?

Why haven't my grades improved?

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Please squeeze them dry and open them up to General Mobilization and Parachute Over Paris.

Why haven't your comments increased at all during this period?

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

You have too few chapters and no useful content.

Author, can you still hold on? I've watched it several times and there are no more comments.

I don't understand what I'm writing, the logic is too confusing. 1. Time logic, has the author considered why other great gods use a 1:1 time ratio when writing about summoning the fourth natural disaster? Because if it is not 1:1, there will be a lot of problems, not to mention the variable of players who want to cause trouble. For example, what should I do if players come online at different times? For example, what should a player do if he wants to eat or go to the toilet? He dares to do so at 1:60, and the player doesn't even dare to log off in the middle to drink a glass of water. Are you sure this isn't putting players in jail? 2. Is the author tacitly assuming that most readers understand the background of the world he travels through, or is he tacitly assuming that most readers are P Club players, and those who are not P Club players are not allowed to enter? Even if the author's writing style is poor, the background writing is relatively dry, and he cannot well intersperse the background into the character introduction (supporting roles). But we have to write about it. For example, in what year AD, how did later generations evaluate the HRE peasant uprising at that time, and what was the surrounding political and social environment? Where was the technology at that time? Who is the emperor of Shinra now? Which electors and so on. 3. Do you really want to rebel and play house? Since he is a small boss, what about the description of his supporting characters? How is your cohesion reflected, or how is your organization reflected? How does the protagonist rule or lead his team to attack the city? What about the basic organizational structure? The history is very clear. The leader of the uprising must have a certain reputation (a gang leader, a farmer, a petty official who is parasitic on the existing corrupt system, etc.). What is the basic foundation of the uprising for the protagonist? Who are the supporting characters? It can't all depend on the players, right? You can't start like this if you rely on the players? I still advise the author to first clarify the basic points of writing such as time, place and characters. If your grades are not good, I suggest you cut it out and slowly learn how to write other novels.