Journey to the West: The True Lord Who Slays Karma

Overall, it's okay, and the writing style is also very good. It's much better than some white novels that follow the trend of black myths. But a few plot errors are too hurtful. And it is true that the protagonist's sincerity is not shown as a sign. Even the early deeds of the protagonist who did good deeds and was enshrined have been downplayed. It is not as adequate as the description of the protagonist killing evil spirits. Including for The plot of dying for justice, there is a serious lack of foreshadowing, and what impresses people is that the protagonist is ruthless and destroys the true spirit. Suddenly he can die for the people, and it is really not to blame the readers for the overreaction -If you have so many foreshadowings of what the protagonist is thinking and how to act, including a little foreshadowing of the protagonist's thoughts before the fight, the protagonist will not be written as a stupid young man. That's a pity. Also... Don't write female characters. Sincerely.

There are very few good Westward Journey fan novels nowadays, and they are basically still the same underworld genre. There are basically very few that restore the settings of Journey to the West and bring various settings into Westward Journey. As a result, there are very few Westward Journey fan novels that can be read. For example, Nezha, Erlangshen, and other Westward Journey fans are labeled as rebels. Alas.

First of all, this book is very well written, both in terms of writing style and everything else, but I feel that the author particularly likes to abuse the protagonist and has a habit of torturing the protagonist. From the beginning to the present, there are so many pictures. The protagonist is either suppressed, killed, or loses his memory after being killed. I really hate this set, which was written on the Internet 10 years ago. Among the writers, I like to write this story the most. After a lot of hard work, I finally recovered my memory. Not long after, I forced another incident, and I was kicked off all official positions. They were all quartered by five horses. Later, I found that I couldn't kill them and suppressed them at the bottom of the mountain. No, did this protagonist offend you or something, and you just wanted to abuse him so much? Readers find it very depressing. If this kind of thing happens once or twice, why do you keep doing it? Fortunately, this is a mythological text. If this was a historical text, how could you write it if you died 800 times?

The Bull Demon King follows the protagonist's style of killing others if he hurts them. Shouldn't the protagonist be beaten to death? In the original novel, Red Boy complains about the Bull Demon King who eats people for a living and commits many evil deeds.

Liu Chenxiang broke into the heaven without authorization, stole elixirs and jade axes, resisted the law in public, and fought against three officials. How could he just walk away? Sun Wukong is in the fruit position. Instead of advising people to do good, he instigates Liu Chenxiang to commit crimes, and even helps him escape from the law. How can he pretend to be invisible? On the contrary, the mention of Princess Qionghua made you angry. May I ask what the True Lord Zhanye protects? What law are you enforcing? Could it be that we are reminiscing about old feelings and following God's will? What vows have you made through thousands of years of practice? What kind of attitude do you hold?

Author, please change the identity card of the protagonist. He is 220cm tall and 120cm heavy. This is probably because the stick insect has become a spirit 🤤.

In the writer's words, where is the relevant part, the author is scared to death, asks for a leave, and puts it at the top

In the desert of books, I met an eunuch by chance, but I couldn't defeat him despite my best efforts. Only then did I realize that there were so many eunuchs at the starting point.

After reading nearly 200 chapters, I feel more and more tired, so I will just say a few words. This book is indeed a good book. When it comes to style, essay writing, ideas, and realm, the starting point data is truly top-notch. It's just that as a casual novel, the more I read it, the more inappropriate it becomes. Nothing else, just a little bit, too bland. The tone is neither high nor low, smooth and uneventful. The longer I watch it, the more exhausted I feel. I hope this book can be read by more suitable people.

This guy looks awesome, but if you take a closer look, he's so good at things that he can't stand a deep dive. Let's talk about the ginseng fruit tree first. Although the ginseng fruit tree is famous, its efficacy is far inferior to that of the peach fruit tree. Monkeys are tired of chewing the crooked stuff. The strong character can't withstand the criticism, it's just a fierce boast, the three Qing Dynasties are friends and the four emperors are old friends, but this thing is just a dialogue between Qingfeng Mingyue, which contradicts the plot - at the beginning Zhen Yuanzi brought forty-six disciples to listen to the lecture and mix Yuan Daoguo, in the end, although Fu Lu Shou Sanxing claimed to be his junior, he still had to downgrade to flatter him - and Bajie could tease Sanxing for fun. You know, when Bajie met Maori in the Twenty-eight Stars, he would apologize because he was injured and could not salute. The most intuitive thing is the appearance of Guanyin. The original description is that Zhen Yuanzi was "panicked" to welcome out of the palace, and claimed that "Xiao Ke's activities, how dare you trouble the Bodhisattva to descend". In the book, Guanyin's status is approximately equal to that of Sanqing. It can be seen that this guy's friends with Sanqing are not equal friends, but lavish gold. Strength cannot stand up to the challenge. He caught the monkey twice, which seems to be cheating. However, the entire story of Journey to the West is set up with magical powers and magic weapons that can be used instantly. In the first part, the martial arts monkey defeated Wang Lingguan regardless of the outcome. After he opened the three heads and six arms, he showed off his power with great force. In the latter part, the martial arts monkey was defeated by four of the seven lions in half a day, and the clone method exerted one percent of its power. Just kill five lions in one second, and there are also evidences such as Jade Rabbit and a bunch of inferior martial arts monkeys being beaten by magic monkeys. Being able to kill martial arts monkeys in seconds can only mean that he has passed the threshold of a rookie. There are four, five, six, seven and eight levels above War Eagle, there is Ke Jieshenzi above, and there is Alpha Dog above Ke Shen. Just because he beats the rookie, do you think he is considered an Alpha Dog? There is no such way to skip levels. Furthermore, this guy's force cannot withstand deep scrutiny. One round is too short and one time is too short - you must know that a yellow-robed monster with a strength gap of more than ten times has to fight eight or nine rounds to fight Zhusha, while a round in Journey to the West usually takes about ten rounds in half a day. Applying the more familiar Three Kingdoms formula, in the world view of Journey to the West, if Lu Bu with 100 force in strength wants to defeat Liu Chan with 10 in force, it will take at least three or four hours. Also, Zhen Yuanzi is not a big boss with a bunch of trump cards as everyone thinks. The Qiankun in his sleeve is already the biggest card in this thing, and there is no such thing as taking it for granted. His self-report makes it very clear. He cannot catch the monkey "in vain", and even if he catches it, it is as meaningless as "catching the shadow and catching the wind". The original text at the end of Chapter 25 and the beginning of Chapter 26 makes Zhen Yuanzi's dilemma very clear. In Chapter 25, he was incompetently furious at the monkey's elusive performance and wanted to take out Tang Monk's anger. The monkey appeared and was followed by another Surprised and angry, "swearing", at the end of 25, he was arrogant in the face of the monkey - "Haha, sneered, grabbed him", and in the beginning of 26, it became "support the traveler with your hands", and also vaguely begged for mercy, "Don't use magical powers". What made Zhen Yuanzi even more impressive was that he was using all his energy to suck the milk, but Monkey was not. Monkey was playing from beginning to end. Monkey had not activated any combat skills, and only activated the stealth method as an auxiliary skill. The rest were to cover the life skills of Tang Seng and others. I really wonder if Fukizhen Motoko has only watched TV series.