Long-Range Fighter

No, did the author really read the manuscript after he finished writing it? In the past, you could see typos in every chapter, and in the recent update, even some paragraphs were difficult to read. Now that you are eating this food, can you take it a little more seriously? At least correct the typos, omissions, and unclear sentences.

The air combat kill data is not calculated this way by the author. A single machine is counted as an individual, and a dual machine is counted as a crew. During World War II, two-seater aircraft were basically ground-to-sea attack aircraft. The rear-seat gunner of that model sat back-to-back with the driver. In that case, the target attacked by the front pilot will be counted as the front pilot's record, and the aircraft shot down by the rear shooter will be counted as the rear seat's personal record. If it is a three-seater bomber like the Japanese, the bombardier is in the middle, and he is responsible for aiming and releasing bombs. This is especially true for multi-person bombers. When entering the bombing target route, the pilot must hand over the driving rights to the bombardier. He only needs to maintain the altitude and speed of the aircraft.， Therefore, the performance is calculated for the entire crew, not for individuals. The author is very rigorous in writing the book. He hopes to correct this small flaw and make the book a fine work. In addition, the aircraft carrier captain is responsible for the ship itself, including anti-submarine and air defense. The carrier-based aircraft unit is under the control of the unit commander, and the captain has no right to manage it. They are both on the same level. The combat commander is the commander-in-chief of the aircraft carrier battle group. It is usually managed by HNA, including personnel training, deployment, and logistics support.

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It's written in a smooth way, and although it contains a lot of information, people like me who don't know anything about aviation can still read it.

Come on!

"Open the magazine yourself!" "..." "Hurry up! Don't force me to hit you with fighting bullets!" "Do you want to fight again?" "No~" "Louder!" "No more dog fighting!" "Say, what are you!" "I am America's sixth-generation machine~" "Are you worthy? You are worthy of being A sixth-generation aircraft? " "..." "Say! You are a Boeing PPT, say!" "I am a Boeing PPT~" "Speak louder!" R> "I am Boeing's PPT!" "What are you to me!" "Imaginary enemy~" "Not honest! What is it!" "Target drone! It's Target machine! " "Say you want it!" "Want it~" "Say more details, what do you want!" "Want a thunderbolt~" "Big Speak up! Tell me more!" "Want a big thunderbolt!" "Want a J-20 big thunderbolt!" "Not to mention the duck wings are bad! " "No." "..." "I want to spread the chaff~" "Hold it, don't spread it!" "... ." "Tell me where to shoot!" "In the magazine~" "Speak louder!" "I want the J-20's big thunderbolt to shoot into my magazine!"

Teacher's story: "There was a comrade who made a serious mistake in the past. He heard someone gossiping about him in the next house and couldn't sleep all night. Run to me (the teacher) and I told him that your mistake was quite big. Be mentally prepared. It's not just one person or a few people gossiping about you, but hundreds of people gossiping about you. If you have such mental preparation and continue to work as usual, no one will talk about you in the future. After a few months, people will no longer talk about him. We have great achievements, but we still have shortcomings and mistakes. Or if the mistakes are overcome, new shortcomings and mistakes may arise, and we need to solve them. People do not make mistakes, but take them seriously. There are never people in this world who do not make mistakes at all. " I have been preparing for this book for a long time, and I have read a lot of professional books and simulated flight. 3600 Hours, I hope to write an air combat novel that everyone can understand (practical theory is the guide), but when writing this kind of air combat novel, I am not a professional, and I am just an ordinary author. It is inevitable that problems of one kind or another will occur. I will adopt reasonable suggestions. If there is a problem, don't shout and kill. I will try my best to correct it. The East China Sea Air Force has grown from weak to strong, becoming the first country in the world to have sixth-generation aircraft, which made me determined to write this book. [When the mountain flowers were in full bloom, he smiled among the bushes.

It's all like this. It doesn't describe the specific situation across the country, whether to commend some fighting heroes, and a lot of things are not written. A purely military article is not good-looking. The various behaviors of all living beings in this situation are mixed with military politics, people's livelihood, and economy. It is good to focus on the military.

It's no wonder that humans are so stubborn. Aquatic civilization has natural flaws. It cannot make fire, metal smelting, or open explosive technology trees. It naturally lacks powerful weapons. It is normal for marine creatures to come ashore and not be able to defeat terrestrial species that boil water and throw stones. I used to think that aliens opened their doors to the Pacific Ocean to force humans to fight at long distances and increase human logistics difficulties. It turns out that the Pacific Ocean is the most suitable environment for aliens to survive. It is likely that many aliens have entered the water with the help of stealth technology. Normally, the first thing a civilization does when discovering an alien planet is to study whether the environment is suitable for immigration. Humans will fall to the shore, and octopuses will enter the water, just like the aliens in the Battle of Los Angeles.

After Dragon Rider, how long has it been since I finally got a dogfight novel that I can read?

It started out pretty well. There aren't many words in this. What kind of garbage is the current plot? If you want to fight in the air, fight in the air. Ground invasion and alien species are no problem either. You can write about counterattacks and entering alien territory. How can you upgrade yourself and feel like a Tal'darin protoss? ? ? You are not a novel with a StarCraft background.

It's so cool, I just want to read a book with this kind of plot.

Today's chapter is easy to persuade. It's just a cruise ship. If someone takes advantage of it, it will cost the army casualties to save it. Let the drunken people on the cruise ship die. It's not worth saving. Just try to see if anti-ship missiles work.

If you don't know how to write, then don't write it. Neither woman is likable, and the protagonist is actually very facially portrayed. The aerial battle plot is so well written that it covers up the shortcomings, so don't write an emotional drama to expose it.

This is a novel that should belong to the science fiction area, not fantasy disguised as science fiction.

This submarine combat is very exciting and immersive.

Lao Zhao, if you don't know how to write emotional scenes, why don't you stop writing them? It's so embarrassing that it makes you happy...

On April 1st, pay tribute to the hero Wang Wei!

Rnm refund! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's a mess, and the alien foreshadowing hasn't been explained yet. I suggest you release the synopsis to see the foreshadowing.

The author probably doesn't know much about materials science. New materials take a long time to match, cast and test. Alien materials that are completely different from humans in a technological system are not so easy to imitate And it's not that the alien drone will self-destruct immediately after being shot down. How did you obtain the alien embedded circuit technology?

When calling 815 at the beginning, the alien aircraft was still running around in panic when it was locked. By Chapter 56, it turned into a stupid AI that was locked by fire control for half a minute and was still repeating stereotyped procedures. People can't help but worry about whether the author has a complete and continuous setting idea for alien armaments.

In fact, seriously speaking, aquatic civilization is simply a false proposition. Wisdom, fire, and writing are the cornerstones of civilization, and the absence of fire and writing is a natural flaw of aquatic intelligent life. If aquatic intelligent life wants to develop civilization, it must transition to terrestrial intelligent life. Without wisdom, there is no civilization. Without fire, civilization cannot grow. Without writing, civilization cannot be passed on.

To be honest, at this ending, you might as well have the protagonist be seriously injured in the end and forcibly hang himself for a few years. Then, due to the major update of materials science, the dormant cabin technology has made a breakthrough, and the first batch will be given to the protagonist. The next book will extend the timeline to 200 years after the explosion of science and technology, and then release the protagonist, and then use the developed wormhole technology to expand the territory. This just solves the problem of not being able to write about many realistic themes. By the way, it can also get rid of some unnecessary settings in this book. It also just solves the problem of who to choose between the two heroines. Since it is difficult to choose, then don't choose. How can you get married and fly a fighter jet 🙂

How to support this, it's just a eunuch 🥵

I stopped reading after reading the beginning. It's almost impossible to write about such a sensitive subject. As expected, I ended up reading another book. Of course, I don't believe that the author didn't predict it. It couldn't be a fluke and he just wanted to make a profit. So the entire responsibility lies with the author.

What about the new book? ? ? Keep writing about aerial combat. The current aerial combat articles from Qidian are all terrible, far inferior to Dragon War in the Sky and Dragon Rider. It took a lot of effort to open a book with quality, but it was completely unfinished.

This plot didn't go as far as it did, but it actually ended. It's true. . .

Are you keeping it or are you keeping it? Is this the end? 😰

It was okay at the beginning, but it became less and less effective later on, but it was still an eye-catching air combat in the past few years.