The Doomsday Traveler

I really like this kind of post-apocalyptic road story so much, the feeling of a girl traveling through the end of the world with two people and a car supporting each other and walking in the apocalypse! Today's apocalyptic novels often turn into superpower battles or territory management. Before the beginning, no one had an appetite for it. I am very satisfied with this one so far. Good luck, author! Put it on the shelves as soon as possible

This book is quite good. It's like reading Robinson Crusoe. The rhythm of the writing is not bad, but there are too few words. But in the wasteland, the knowledge level is not enough, which is normal.

In the end of the world, there is still a single female protagonist, and the elements are very satisfying. The emotional scenes are portrayed quite naturally, and the characters all stand up. Although this book has supernatural elements, the form of expression is not that outrageous. Some apocalyptic novels are about gods fighting aliens.

Whether it is Tieba or Bilibili, there are various settings and knowledge similar to surviving in the apocalypse. I suggest the author to read more and write a rough outline. If you don't say anything else, people who know a little bit about the details in the book will have a headache. Brother, you have already written about the apocalypse. If you are not the kind with super powers flying around, then just do the details well. Without details, it will be useless no matter how well you control the characters and plot. Those are fine. Books written by authors who say not to care about details are either eunuchs or have poor grades. I dare say that most readers who like such books will have some knowledge of survival in the apocalypse, and most readers are silent. When they see that what you wrote does not meet their expectations, they leave directly instead of leaving a comment. Anyway, I think this book is good except for the details, so I just make this suggestion.

Finished reading another novel. The whole story is pretty good. It was after contacting Luo Ping. I feel like the story is a bit off. I still like the feeling of two people depending on each other best in the beginning. The appearance of the base at the back and the prototype car have greatly reduced the interest of the article, and there is no sense of urgency like before. While reading this novel, I sometimes thought about it. One night when I was reading this book, when I looked at the sky outside the window, was there a planet somewhere in the vast universe? Was there one night, a wilderness, a bonfire, and two people lying on the ground looking up at the stars in the sky. Will there be a moment when we look at each other?

Why does the end of the world have to add a female protagonist? Otherwise, if you just accept one after another, there will be no heroine? If you love writing about female protagonists so much, why not write about the city...

It's a very special novel, not in terms of subject matter, but in terms of content. It's rare to see a work that is so divided in terms of level - just the right and comfortable writing style, and the horrific details... It can be seen that it is definitely the trumpet of an old author. The storyboards are full of sense, the language is concise but there is no shortage of descriptions of actions and expressions. The characters stand up quickly, and the simple dialogue quickly transitions from unfamiliar to more familiar. All in all, I quite like the writing style. As for the content, according to the author, he wanted to write a story similar to Robinson Crusoe. I haven't seen the Queen Mother so I won't comment. I'm not sure whether it's about farming development or something else, but based on the title, I feel it's more like a road movie or a beautiful way of writing about what I've seen along the way. Then there are shortcomings. I don't know if this is the first time for the author to come into contact with this kind of novel, so there are really too many loopholes. There are a lot of them in the first ten chapters alone. It is recommended to revise them. It is very unpopular. Specifically: 1. According to what is known, the protagonist has been alive for almost a year (half a year plus more than three months of diary writing). I don't know how many roads he has traveled, but at least he has passed through three or four large cities, right? However, no information has been collected to understand the world view, so it is ridiculous that we still don't know what happened in the disaster, we don't know the level of technology, we don't have a map, we don't know the direction, and we don't know the time. 2. Although I don't know the specific time, most of the vehicles have been scrapped for at least three to five years. In this period of time, not all paper data will disappear, at least the storage condition in the cabinet should be very good. And if all paper documents are damaged, then the wooden structure, furniture, and textiles in the house should also be basically damaged, but the villa at the beginning mentions furniture, etc. 3. Gasoline has a shelf life, which can be as short as three to five years or as long as ten years before it expires. Please refer to Article 2. This is another contradictory setting. If gasoline is useful, then there should be no data found. If there is no data, then gasoline should not be useful. 4. Tap water is still supplied in the villa? ? ? Tap water is not an independent water supply. Not to mention the water plant, how do you use electricity to power the pressure pump of the water pipe in your home? ——The mechanical dog is not powered when the heroine gets water. 5. You have been living for a year and you haven't found a set of wheels? I went to a gas station with the heroine to find the wheel and wanted to replace it with parts for the dog? It's been a year and you haven't found a single tool like a screwdriver or even a pen refill? ? ? I'm speechless... 6. After living for a year, you haven't saved anything and everything is destroyed? Then can you explain why the gasoline has not expired? I couldn't even find or build a cart, cart, or bicycle. I can't understand what I've been doing this year... In short, it smells like a Japanese light novel. The imagination and writing style are very good, but the details are all for the plot. Only when the plot requires it can we find the corresponding things. There is no subjective initiative at all. The protagonist has lived for a year and has not practiced a gun, has not collected supplies, has not understood information, knows nothing, and has not considered anything... Evaluate based on the reasons why the work has potential. They are not related to the basic outline level. Just change it. I hope the author sees it as soon as possible and can regain some popularity. The rating will be improved and the revised food will be improved.

Let's talk about the advantages first. This book is a very rare road novel in apocalyptic literature that starts from the beginning. There is no intermediary struggle for hegemony. The plot of highway exploration is also handled very well. The details of various search plots are very rich. It can be called a masterpiece. If we want to talk about shortcomings, there are three main points. I think they are caused by the author's lack of experience. The first point is that the battle scenes are really poorly written. I believe other readers feel the same way, and the more the combat power is separated from mortals, the worse it is. The author may need to improve the description of extraordinary high-level battles. The second point is an extension of the first point, and that is the problem of stacking boxes of combat power. After the emergence of new humans, every time the protagonist encounters a new group of enemies, the enemy's strength will increase by a large level. Just going to the next county is like ascending and changing maps. In this way, the combat power will be out of control after a few battles, making it difficult to write down. I suggest the author pay attention to this in the next book, and just increase the combat power a little at a time The third point is the handling of the ending. The final world view is very full of information. In fact, it can be divided into two or three paragraphs for the protagonist to discover. It is a waste to throw it out at once: I personally think that the heroine's father should not appear. His existence is very embarrassing, so it is better not to write it Although this book has some shortcomings, it is still a masterpiece of road writing. Readers who like road writing must not miss it.

The heroine makes me feel like a strong woman like Luna

Gouzi