The Story of Minglan: Starting as the Gu Family’s Legitimate Son

It's understandable not to make Minglan the female lead, but why remove the character of Minglan altogether? I've almost never seen a fan fiction novel that removes important characters from the original drama. If you're tired of writing novels with Minglan as the female lead, why not just leave her out? If there's a story about the Sheng family, just mention her briefly. What's the point of deleting her?

This book is ruined if it doesn't feature Minglan as the female lead.

Hello everyone, let me introduce myself. My surname is Zhang, so my previous novel, *The Story of Minglan*, featured the Zhang family. I don't have the habit of cheating on myself, so I won't be writing about Minglan. 😅

All of your books are like this: they're full of dialogue, with pitifully little narration.

A novel with a strong female lead—you deleted the female lead? Why don't you just write one yourself then?

The layout and punctuation are so good, it's hard to believe you're someone who wrote a million-word novel.

"The Story of Minglan" is a good story, much better than "Siheyuan" (a popular Chinese folktale). I don't understand why it's written so little. It's not easy to find a readable version. This one is amazing. He wrote three books in a row and even deleted the female lead. Impressive. Writing three books in a row, the author must really like this story, right? Probably, right?

It's not so bad when reading, but when listening, it's just constant "So-and-so said..." During dialogue. It's really annoying and needs to be changed. The author should probably listen to a few chapters with lots of dialogue themselves.

Little monthly pass, keep it up!

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