Starting with the Illegitimate Son of the Yuan Family in The Story of Minglan

This emotional drama is rather embarrassing to watch. Why do you have to marry Minglan? You have no emotional foundation, and you are already an earl. You should look at Mrs. Zhang. Moreover, civil and military affairs are not compatible in ancient times. You married a concubine from a civil servant family. How can you establish yourself in the martial arts world? You are neither left nor right, neither side is pleasing to you. (Of course, this is just my own opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it, just take a look)

I banned a book friend for the first time because the discussion was a bit sensitive. Now he is no longer simply discussing civil servants and military generals with me, but has begun to discuss the system. This is a very dangerous signal. The key is that this friend has set up privacy and is an ordinary member. I don't know what he wants to do, so I deleted his post. I finally said that this is a fan discussion about the plot and I welcome everyone at any time, but if it involves in-depth topics involving the system, then I can only delete the post. 🙏🙏🙏

To be honest, there are too many conspiracies. It is obvious that everyone is not here to see the protagonist engage in conspiracies. Moreover, the author's self-concealed plans are ridiculous, childish and stupid at least in my opinion! Write more plots! There's no point in putting those plans away

The concubine of the Yuan family, the first one who thinks of Yuan Benchu

Don't be offended, just complain. I don't know if you feel this way about your novel. I am writing homework and copying homework. The changes are not much, just a little bit. Just added a character. It has no style of its own at all, and the protagonist is like a machine. You didn't give him the character, thoughts, and style he deserves. Then write with the protagonist as the main character. You just write based on your author's own personality and ideas, which is very unconstrained. Is it like a child acting as an adult on his own behalf? Don't you feel conflicted? It gives the impression that the original work is based on the original work with the addition of a character's imagination. It doesn't feel like a novel at all.

To be honest, the protagonist is really good enough that a girl of thirteen or fourteen years old can hold it and chew it! Married at the age of sixteen and still have children! Regarding the medical conditions in ancient times, to be honest, I don't advocate it! The best time for women to have children is between the ages of 22 and 28. There is a one or two year gap between different physiques! So if you really love her, let her give birth after she is twenty! One or two years after getting married, one or two years after marriage! It passed quickly. Of course, in ancient times, public opinion and social pressure would be great for women if they did not have children for too long! It's not suitable for too much drag! Therefore, it is most reasonable to delay before marriage and delay after marriage! The author should consider my suggestion.

Looking at the plot, I think this book will be followed up by a monkey version of Dream of Red Mansions 😏

Brother, can you write something else about the endless nonsense surrounding the Sheng family every day?

I've read about half of this book. What can I say? I think it's okay. You're just an ancient puppet. You have to write so much about officialdom and intrigues, but it doesn't have that flavor, so it's still a bit embarrassing to read.

Without talking about anything else, has the author ever gone to school? To be more precise, have you learned to write essays? The random use of punctuation marks made me confused for a while. No matter how good your writing is, it will scare people away. It's tiring to read.