1958 Great Country Craftsman

There is a problem with the setting. The original protagonist has not graduated from junior high school. What reason do you have to come up with all kinds of high-end inventions and creations in the future? I am afraid that junior high school students in the 1950s have never studied physics and chemistry, and have no basic knowledge. How can a genius create something out of nothing? At least his background must be a college student majoring in mechanical engineering, right? If you asked Newton to build a spaceship in the Middle Ages, he wouldn't be able to build it.

You won't be able to write a book if you don't put some nonsense into the plot.

Could you please stop doing things like that in the workplace all the time? Section Chief Zhao, Factory Director Zhou, and college student Ren all do it once when they meet a new person, and some people do it several times. We are here to see the development of industry, not the battles in the workplace. We really need to foreshadow the plot, okay?

If Jiang Yue still can't succeed, then there is no need to watch. We are here to see the great craftsmen, not to see you keep dating and falling in love.

It's so good. I can't pursue it anymore. I go on blind dates every day and talk about partners.

Not long after I first came into contact with machine tools, someone who read a few books said that I wanted to build a new machine tool. Even if you were under the banner of optimizing the existing machine tools, it gave people a sense of learning while doing it and finally building a new one. You had never been exposed to it before. After looking at the inside of the machine tool a few times, you just started building a new machine tool after reading a few books. It is really amazing that someone could believe this.

The writing is okay, but it's best to write less about things like the workplace. If you write too much, no one will read it.

A few suggestions 1. The emotional scenes of the protagonist are inexplicable, Qingmei is inexplicable, Wen Jing is inexplicable, and Jiang Yue is even more inexplicable. They do not serve the main line of the work at all and are forced to add drama 2. The growth of the protagonist is inexplicable. The wonderful thing is that the foundation is too low, and it goes to heaven in the blink of an eye 3. Typos, especially Tao Xingzhi, Fu Zhixing, Of course, if it is a studio article, treat it as if I didn't say it. If you wrote it yourself, wouldn't you read it again after you finish it? Typos are really annoying. Some typos with the same sound, such as the same sound as a child's sound, just let it go. Fu Zhixing will become Tao Xingzhi in a while. What do you think?

Changed again and again. Industrial progress has been dragged back and forth by blind dates. Slipped away

I don't understand what the protagonist's repeated blind dates are all about? If you want to write about the craftsmen of a great country, get married as soon as possible and concentrate on your career. Doing these things all day long becomes more and more unbearable.

Will it be in vain if you are decisive? I smell the bloody knife

Those who are trying to sell dog meat on their own behalf are all about workplace struggles.

The latest chapter was so poisonous that I was persuaded to quit.

What the hell is this, the open-hearth steelmaking method? What kind of iron do you make? You know your stuff! The correct term is **Open Hearth Steelmaking** or **Siemens-Martin Steelmaking Method**. It is a process that utilizes external fuel combustion and heating to refine pig iron and scrap steel into steel through an oxidation reaction. Its core feature is that the regenerator recycles waste heat**. Although it was once the main force in steelmaking in the world, due to fundamental shortcomings such as low production efficiency, high energy consumption, high cost, and serious pollution, it has been replaced by the more advanced oxygen converter steelmaking method and electric arc furnace steelmaking method, and has basically disappeared in modern steel production.

Sure enough, it's a bloody knife. Brother, please stop writing this kind of thing. I'm not here to read a novel about your family's short-blooded drama. You should see for yourself what the title of your novel is. It's not country romance.

The writing is quite good. Listen to me and stop writing. I won't write again in the future.

See the title of the book. I feel that the theme of this book is selfless dedication, which is very noble, great and unattainable. Don't like this type.

Can the machine tool drawings of an industrial master machine be carried away in a small satchel?

Don't mess with a bunch of women, it's still the 1960s. I have experienced 4 women in less than a year, and I still have no relationship foundation. Write more about industrial development and social progress. Women will only affect the speed at which you draw your sword.

It's okay if you don't add emotions, industrial writing, writing about stallions