A Druid in a World of Immortals

I feel that it is more suitable for the path of the Earth Immortal, the Druid, and the Cultivator, plus the Earth Immortal, the three cultivation systems.

Emmmm, it's okay. It's okay to write about cultivation of immortals and farming. It's just that the writing problem caused the contact between people to be too abrupt. But after all, I came here to see farming. In addition, the focus of this book is also farming. You can read it. You can read it. As far as the writing is concerned, it is okay.

Almost all non-elderly positive characters who come into contact with the protagonist are female, and these females appear in almost every chapter. There are even many chapters where they communicate with the protagonist and the proportion of them in heat is much greater than what fits the title and introduction of the book. Am I here to see the druids or to see the breeding? '

The first chapter is the chain of contempt for the profession of cultivating immortals. It is obviously a farming article, but I wish the whole world knew that your farming is different from others. I wish the whole world knew that you are special. I have just finished testing my spiritual roots and have not yet cultivated immortality. Everyone in the hospital knows that you have understood the Taoist heart This is what chapter I came into contact with the city lord's daughter (the character of the city lord's daughter is still a silly girl) and I taught her how to deal with the refugee problem There is also the classic villain who said harsh words. The classic said that I didn't want to pretend to be cool, but actually after pretending to be cool, I said harsh words to the villain rich young man and scolded him on the spot Is this the starting point in 2005?

What kind of Druid are you, aren't you just an ordinary Druid? Selling dog meat on a sheep's head

Advantages: The setting of the world of druids and cultivators is good Disadvantages: The writing is average, the ideas are ignorant, and some settings conflict Summary: It's bad, but I can bear to have a look at the settings in my mind.

The painting style is not very harmonious. The golden finger and character of the protagonist are that of a Taoist who is as light as a chrysanthemum and cultivates the land. The story plot is an old-fashioned underworld cultivating immortality. All kinds of conflicts, slap in the face and show off, super dramatic. Excellent subject matter, inferior novel

The characterization is poor and the protagonist's IQ is not very high. During the free period, you can still take a look at this kind of subject matter, but once it is put on the shelves, no one will read it.

The idea is really good, but unfortunately the writing is too poor, the setting is too vague, and the plot is too cliche. Online game novels don't have the flavor of a fairy tale at all, and their positioning is wrong. It's job transfer and training, and the two systems have little overlap. Should the author check out Shennong Daojun? He is also a farmer, and he also has an online game setting, but the integration is very good If you want to write about immortals, you should downplay the presence of the system and rely on the ancient style. If you want to write an online game or system, you just downplay the skills and practice, add some experience points and that's it. Don't occupy both ends. After writing down the experience points, you can only change jobs and not add points, and you also have to write down the training techniques.

This opening is particularly like that, the protagonist chooses a summoner and everyone looks down on him and doesn't understand him. The same goes for choosing a priest, or awakening a talent that is particularly high, and the profession is particularly good and then is looked down upon. The development is particularly like this 🙂🙂🙂