Martial Sage: I Can Evolve Through Hyper-Adaptation

This protagonist is a hypocritical, despicable scumbag. If you're going to be evil, at least be thoroughly evil, then I can still watch as a villain. Why do you have to come up with such lame excuses for your actions? You stole someone's token, causing the county to stop supplying monster meat, and then you blame it on the person not keeping the token properly. Damn it!

The writing is alright, and the setting is good, but the protagonist's values ​​don't quite align with the story. It's understandable to snatch food in the early stages, since you're running out of energy and about to starve. Stealing money in the early stages is also understandable, since you didn't steal from the poor, and you need to survive in an unfamiliar place.

When I saw the characters taking pills, I thought, wouldn't it be simpler to just eat the medicinal herbs directly? Pills are for humans, which is why they require various seasonings, but the protagonist has a supernatural ability to directly consume them. The strong medicinal effects are no problem for him; he can handle them all, and they're actually more nourishing than pills.

Three golden cards: steal, rob, smash.

It's well-written, but I have a suggestion: after the protagonist does something, I hope you can write about the impact of that action and the reactions of all parties involved. You don't need to write too much; just mention it briefly. For example, didn't someone come to search the mountain again? The protagonist killed that person and left. What were the consequences of this?

Brainstorming session: Let your imagination run wild! The author will even secretly copy book reviews when they see a good idea!

Almost every ten chapters will include the phrase "insufficient energy," and the protagonist's primary method of obtaining energy is by eating meat and medicine. Since obtaining monster meat and energy-containing herbs inevitably involves conflict, writing about these conflicts is a way to pad the word count.

The premise is fundamentally flawed. When they're short of money, they steal, and this happens every single time. If this continues, who will run a martial arts school? The owner could just steal from every wealthy family! Who would want to be a bandit? Everyone would be stealing money. Who would want to do business? Earning any money would inevitably lead to being robbed. Once or twice is understandable, but doing this continuously is just ridiculous.

You've abandoned all moral principles; if I steal your things, you're supposed to blame me for not taking better care of them. 🤭

If this isn't good, then this book is definitely a gem. What kind of divine food do you all usually eat?