Start from the Dungeon NPC

It's a disgraceful thing

It seems that I came here through the Three Kingdoms online game. In the early stage, the online game elements were not high, and the system was basically responsible for giving benefits to the protagonist to increase his strength. The player's sense of presence was not high, so he helped the protagonist develop his power. I thought it was a cool novel that didn't require brains. The turning point came at about 200 chapters. The protagonist wanted to change his destiny, so he went to kill Liu Guanzhang. As a result, Liu Bei killed three people and survived. At the end, the protagonist started a conversation with the system incarnation named "You", and suddenly mentioned the foreign server, and suddenly came the "Kunlun Mirror, an ancient artifact" that can communicate with the space channel in foreign areas. Brother, I really can't stand it. I can't complain about the naming style. I thought this was the background of the Three Kingdoms, but you told me that you poked it. In fact, this is an online game, or a fantasy version of hegemony, haha. I'm so stupid, really, when I saw the protagonist and thought of Western magic, I should have run away. I actually thought this was a pure Three Kingdoms background. I was still too naive. Before running away, leave a post to prove that I have been here. Do you dare to read it directly without reading the reviews in the book circle next time? How dare you. Finally, the character description is too flat. After reading more than 200 chapters, I couldn't tell who the protagonist's subordinates were, and I couldn't remember more than two hands of characters. I remember all the female characters, but I was a bit frustrated with the protagonist and Teng Xi. I kept eating sugar crumbs in the hegemony plot. As more and more women appear on the scene, I feel that my sugar is a bit hanging... I don't know if it's because I am naturally repelled by being a CP or because I personally prefer the system's ruthless approach to fairness. In fact, I also don't accept the system's incarnation as a palace-dressed beauty with a weird little devil beside me. What I thought was an intelligent program that followed rules turned out to be a person with emotions, tendencies, and social interactions...? In short, it feels completely different from what I understand, so I broke the defense and ran away. This is all. The author worked hard to write the article, and I worked hard to read the article. Goodbye.

Online games have become obsolete and cannot keep up with today's times. I can no longer read old books from the past, but I still hope that there will be authors who can write better ones. I don't remember much of the plot of the previous Three Kingdoms, but I will still support it in the New Year.

When I saw the author's introduction, I had mixed feelings. Indeed, online games have long since declined, and those lively friends are no longer online, let alone writing derivative works that describe the prosperity and fantasy of the old era 😭

I said it was so well written, but it turns out he is the author of Zhi Ge.

I ordered it all because the content up to 200 chapters was wonderful and encouraged the author. I gave up because the plot was too shocking. If these synopses of killing Liu Bei three times and seeing the system were put in the introduction, I would never click in to read this book. I don't know if there is a generation gap between me and current readers. This kind of plot can attract more readers. Anyway, I didn't want to read it anymore after seeing this. I have no intention of interfering with the author's writing ideas. After all, he has written 400 chapters. Now it is too late to look back. I am simply venting my emotions about the fairy grass turning into poisonous weed. My personal opinion is that the Yellow Turbans can be revolted normally. There are so many foreshadowings in front of the protagonist, and he directly dominates Jiaozhou. As a retreat for the Yellow Turban generals, wait for Zhang Jiao to send it due to physical reasons. The Han Dynasty was very cruel. After the Yellow Turbans in the Central Plains were defeated, the Han Dynasty had no money. Led by the governor they knew before, the Yuan family won over Zhao'an and divided half of Jiaozhou as the territory of actual control. Later, Zhu Ya was taken back and Liu Hong was happy to do more. After this wave, if you want to develop the plot normally, you can go to the normal plot of princes fighting for hegemony, and then the protagonist gathers powerful generals to conquer the world. If you want to play National War, the protagonist's combat power will immediately start to increase. Follow Dong Zhuo's script to serve the emperor and disobey him, then fight a wave of eighteen princes to ask for the protagonist, and then win and unify the Han Empire. Yend, after all, the national war is over, it doesn't matter if you add some of this shitty system, artifact fragments, etc., You will be scolded as an appendix at most Although the outline of the plot may be a bit old-fashioned, at least it can keep me watching. Now this plot, ugh My mouth is a bit broken, purely because of the explosive mentality of finding a book in the book wasteland and thinking it was fairy grass, but found poison in the rice. Please forgive me.

There were really many good novels published in the Three Kingdoms online games and martial arts online games back then, but in recent years they have all been crowded out by e-sports novels, which is a pity.

The book is good, I have a little suggestion, don't lick female players I have read a novel of the same style before, about being an NPC in the Three Kingdoms game, and ended up licking female players in various ways 🙂, this is really poisonous

Brother, if you write a normal martial arts online game or a Three Kingdoms, fantasy, or fairy tale online game, all players will be on the list. Time travel game NPCs are not a very popular subject in the first place, but you have time traveled to a dungeon NPC. Look at the Shushan online game on the list. Now there are too few normal online game novels. The next one should not go eccentric. Why don't you write one normally? I'll give it a try when the time comes and I guarantee it will be fully booked.

The book is good and looks okay. It's just that the setting is too weird. This is not a game. It's obviously a different world. The natives chat about how many levels they have, and the skills also talk about effects such as dizziness. It's too weird. Isn't it better to set it to level 1 or level 2? It's also good to set it as additional characteristics such as skill special effects 🙂

The first part was good. I saw the protagonist kill Liu Bei three times and then resurrected Liu Bei. It was boring. Later, I wrote about killing other generals. Others can die. Why can't Liu Bei die? Abandoned

I gave up after reading Chapter 3. If I don't accept the mission, my body will be forcibly controlled. What's the point?

I read more than 100 chapters in one go. It was well written and very to my liking. The only bad thing is that the heroine is not good at writing emotional scenes. In fact, you don't need to write it, why do you have to force it? I really want to abandon the book!

More than three hundred chapters. . One hundred posts. . . What kind of garbage book is this?

The Three Kingdoms will never be out of date, but just like the prehistoric era, there are too many people writing it, and all that should be written has been written, and there is no ability to introduce the old and bring out the new. Whether the new author has the writing power, it is hard to read!

100% Pain? Such an ancient and beautiful setting is simply an insult to the IQ.

Ahem

It's well written, but there is a fatal logic problem. As mentioned earlier, the IQ of the NPC in the dungeon is not high. After a few pictures, when chatting with the NPC in the dungeon, the NPC used a lot of four-character idioms and allusions in his speech, which was difficult to understand.

Author, write slowly. I feel like you don't rely on this for a living anymore. Polish the world view. You are also very slow in pace. Take your time. I have also read your first book. After all, there were very few online Three Kingdoms games at that time, and it was very impressive. I remember that the second book was a fantasy type and I have also read it. I remember that the word count is quite small, but I think the plot is good. For this one, if you are not in a hurry, you can make the plot longer and the world view wider. After all, there are really very few books on the online game Three Kingdoms, and there are even fewer that can be read. After all, it is a niche genre.

If you don't know how to write the heroine, don't write it. The heroine's character is quite good at first, quiet and dignified, and then she becomes playful again? They are also an embarrassing group to say, they really don't know how to write female characters.

The writing is inconsistent. The upgrade experience you wrote depends on your contribution to the battlefield. The protagonist commanded the victory in the battle and the last blow killed the opponent's level 45 general. His subordinates were upgraded more than the protagonist. Why is this? This subordinate didn't make much contribution. Can the author give an explanation?

I think the best online game of the Three Kingdoms is the game Across the Red Dust: The Legend of the Heroes of the Three Kingdoms. I haven't read a book of this type in a long time and I saw this one. I had high hopes for it, but after reading a few chapters, I found it uninteresting.

The Three Kingdoms online games are not extinct, and the mythical world of the Three Kingdoms can still fight for another ten years

That is to say, there is an extra Zhao Yun. The three Taoyuan brothers will be killed if they don't start the game. It will not be so easy to catch the destiny when it is activated later, especially Liu Paopao. He is one of the thirteen states of the Han Dynasty, just short of Jiaozhou. Starting from Youzhou, circle the Han Dynasty from right to left (๑>؂<๑)

This book deserves to be a masterpiece

Several times the player came to the protagonist, and the protagonist suddenly sent out troops when something happened, and then disappeared without writing any arrangements for us. You said that you would talk about something later, but it was the same thing. Anyway, we were just in front of the protagonist. If the protagonist had something to do, we automatically wrote about it and disappeared.

Did the author still delete the comment? You have the time, why not update more?

Suddenly found that you lived 0.0

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

It's not bad, but a group of bandits speak in a tactful manner, which makes it a bit of a show.